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#2
Understood. In exchange for my story, I would be tackling Dirge of Apocryphal. I've just one request, and I hope that's not a problem. In the pm with all criticism you would send (and I'm sure there is stuff to criticize) could you please answer these questions:
- Who is your favorite character and who is your least favorite character?
- What was your favorite fight and your least favorite fight?
- What was your overall favorite moment and your least favorite moment?
- Do you think the synopsis and the cover do a good job of attracting new readers?
- Who is your favorite character and who is your least favorite character?
- What was your favorite fight and your least favorite fight?
- What was your overall favorite moment and your least favorite moment?
- Do you think the synopsis and the cover do a good job of attracting new readers?
Re: Let’s try this again (Review Swap)
#7
Understood, https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/29985/odyssey-of-life
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#9
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/28808/six-chances-chance-ignition-to-crimson-volition
omg i didn't know these were usable emojis. so cute!

Re: Let’s try this again (Review Swap)
#11Apocryphal Wrote:elmerwynn Wrote: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/28808/six-chances-chance-ignition-to-crimson-volitionDid you read the OP? Cause your post is missing something.omg i didn't know these were usable emojis. so cute!
Oh, sorry. Understood. I already started dropping comments on Requiem before posting so I thought that you knew I was working on it already. My bad. EDIT: Oh wow, I'm really embarrassed. I missed that paragraph orz. I was wondering why people were posting "understood". It's early in the morning. only half way through my coffee.
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