Re: Review Swap

My story was recently bombed from #63 place in the ranking to #212 by anonymous 0,5 star ratings and I desperately seek to find a meaning in this dark and gloomy worl... err, positive reviews. And since that's a review swap...

Well, I'll be honest there - little time and lots to do recently. What I can promise is that I will read as much of your story as I can (perhaps entirety of it hooks me in) and I'll try to make a review. If I'll break earlier without gathering enough insight to write a review, I'll at least give you a rating but such a thing is unlikely to happen (thus far it only occured when someone had me read a romance story, as I reaaaally can't stand them). 

The story is science fiction in theme. We have machine gun catgirl though. 

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