Re: Review Offer (and perhaps a swap)!
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Hey y'all, how is the social distancing going?
Anyways, I'm offering reviews because why not. My gacha games are failing me and I need a break from writing and could use a little reading. I'm a pretty fast reader when I get into it and I run a book review blog so my reviews are usually pretty in-depth. That being said, I'm not usually picky when it comes to genres so feel free to plug in whatever
Just some notes:
**less popular stories will be moved to the top of the list because I'm all about supporting authors who don't fall into niche/popular genres
***swaps will be moved to the top of the list.
Here is mine if you'd like to take a look! https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/28808/six-chances-chance-ignition-to-crimson-volition
EDIT: On hold while I try to catch up.
List:
1.Kurast
2. kovich
3. CapTillon
4. NineLizards
5. Riverman09
6.vmjaskiernia
7. luxmes
8.WitchoftheRock
9. Yak Edge
10. ManeReader
11. Michelle W
12.. Nameless32
13.JonWander
14.JeffreyPalinJr
15. Erykon
16 Nerothemajin
17. Dick Benetton
18. riou666
19. HashBrown
((also what's reputation))
Anyways, I'm offering reviews because why not. My gacha games are failing me and I need a break from writing and could use a little reading. I'm a pretty fast reader when I get into it and I run a book review blog so my reviews are usually pretty in-depth. That being said, I'm not usually picky when it comes to genres so feel free to plug in whatever
Just some notes:
- I will also review stories that have only a handful of chapters out, but I won't be able to give it an in-depth review nor an advanced review.
- Advanced Reviews will be given to stories that have at least 30 pages out. The more pages out, the more detailed I will be able to get.
- I will not post reviews below 3 stars. If I think a story is below 3 stars, I will message with suggestions.
**less popular stories will be moved to the top of the list because I'm all about supporting authors who don't fall into niche/popular genres
***swaps will be moved to the top of the list.
Here is mine if you'd like to take a look! https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/28808/six-chances-chance-ignition-to-crimson-volition
EDIT: On hold while I try to catch up.
List:
9. Yak Edge
10. ManeReader
11. Michelle W
12.. Nameless32
13.JonWander
14.JeffreyPalinJr
15. Erykon
16 Nerothemajin
17. Dick Benetton
18. riou666
19. HashBrown
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Hi,
Would really appreciate a review of my fiction:
Lucinda the Shifter
It's a fantasy litrpg story (big surprise right?). Focuses on animal shape shifting in a D&D sort of world, and has one single advanced review that is quite harsh.
I can offer a swap, but I've not reviewed before.
Would really appreciate a review of my fiction:
Lucinda the Shifter
It's a fantasy litrpg story (big surprise right?). Focuses on animal shape shifting in a D&D sort of world, and has one single advanced review that is quite harsh.
I can offer a swap, but I've not reviewed before.
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#3Kurast Wrote: Hi,On it! and I appreciate it!
Would really appreciate a review of my fiction:
Lucinda the Shifter
It's a fantasy litrpg story (big surprise right?). Focuses on animal shape shifting in a D&D sort of world, and has one single advanced review that is quite harsh.
I can offer a swap, but I've not reviewed before.
EDIT: done!
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Do you like GoT and James Cameron's Avatar movie? Well it's a hybrid of the two and what a glorious mashup it is!
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/31803/among-monsters-and-men
EDIT: will review!
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/31803/among-monsters-and-men
EDIT: will review!
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Hi, I can offer a review swap as well. I've just started and would love to get some early feedback.
It's a fantasy, anti-isekai story
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/32440/legend-of-the-mageslayer
It's a fantasy, anti-isekai story
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/32440/legend-of-the-mageslayer
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I'll add my story the mix. I'll also take a look at yours as well. My story's about a guy who ends up in the world of his favorite storybook. Links in my signature.
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On it!
1. kovich
2. CapTillon
3. Riverman09
4. JonWander
2. CapTillon
3. Riverman09
4. JonWander
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#8kovich Wrote: Hi, I can offer a review swap as well. I've just started and would love to get some early feedback.Done!
It's a fantasy, anti-isekai story
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/32440/legend-of-the-mageslayer
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I'd love to get some feedback, please and thank you.
My story is in the signature and its a fantasy take on what tvtropes calls 'a fistful of rehashes'.
My story is in the signature and its a fantasy take on what tvtropes calls 'a fistful of rehashes'.
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I'm interested in a reviews and / or critique for critique (C4C) swaps. Note: English isn't my native language, so I suggest you quickly check if my control over the Queen's language is good enough to withstand your scrutiny :-)
In fact, I'm even more interested in C4C's, as I'm still trying to improve, as a writer, a story teller (not the same thing), and in general my English. I noticed you picked First Person Present Tense, which I also did coincidentally. (It was a deliberate choice, as I typically never use that.)
I've not tried reviewing on Royal Road yet. It seems to have limited tools to do so, or am I overlooking something?
Link in the signature (Kind's Kiss, young adult / new adult, contemporary fantasy). Drop me a line if you're interested.
In fact, I'm even more interested in C4C's, as I'm still trying to improve, as a writer, a story teller (not the same thing), and in general my English. I noticed you picked First Person Present Tense, which I also did coincidentally. (It was a deliberate choice, as I typically never use that.)
I've not tried reviewing on Royal Road yet. It seems to have limited tools to do so, or am I overlooking something?
Link in the signature (Kind's Kiss, young adult / new adult, contemporary fantasy). Drop me a line if you're interested.
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#12CapTillon Wrote: I'll add my story the mix. I'll also take a look at yours as well. My story's about a guy who ends up in the world of his favorite storybook. Links in my signature.
Done!
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Hey! I'd love it if you were to take a look at my story.
It's a xianxia and the main concept is that there is no power cap. I like to think that I play around with that "trope" a lot, but I haven't posted enough of it to really show that haha. The MCs are twins, and they deal a lot with nature-vs-nurture and jealousy and the like. Happy reading! :)
It's a xianxia and the main concept is that there is no power cap. I like to think that I play around with that "trope" a lot, but I haven't posted enough of it to really show that haha. The MCs are twins, and they deal a lot with nature-vs-nurture and jealousy and the like. Happy reading! :)
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I'm pretty new here and don't have any reviews yet so if you have the time, here's my book Catalyst. It's a fantasy adventure novel. I'd be willing to do a review swap although I don't have much experience reviewing novels. (I can promise the same courtesy of not posting a review below 3 stars)
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#16Nine Wrote: I'm interested in a reviews and / or critique for critique (C4C) swaps. Note: English isn't my native language, so I suggest you quickly check if my control over the Queen's language is good enough to withstand your scrutiny :-)Done!
In fact, I'm even more interested in C4C's, as I'm still trying to improve, as a writer, a story teller (not the same thing), and in general my English. I noticed you picked First Person Present Tense, which I also did coincidentally. (It was a deliberate choice, as I typically never use that.)
I've not tried reviewing on Royal Road yet. It seems to have limited tools to do so, or am I overlooking something?
Link in the signature (Kind's Kiss, young adult / new adult, contemporary fantasy). Drop me a line if you're interested.
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#17RiverMan09 Wrote: Do you like GoT and James Cameron's Avatar movie? Well it's a hybrid of the two and what a glorious mashup it is!
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/31803/among-monsters-and-men
EDIT: will review!
Done!
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Hi, up and ready to review swap with you (because it's only fair that if you scratch my back I'll scratch yours) ^^
My story, "The Other Labyrinth", is a litrepg-reincarnation novel that follow four friends that were separated by the reincarnation and are now each in a different world.
I want to put romance in there but it's by far not the main subject, no explicit sex so far (but there is explicit content, like people naked) and I hate Harem. One of the PoV is a post-apo one, and the whole concept of the labyrinth revolve around seeing world going through apocalypse and see if they can avert it or not ^^
I'll read at least 35k words before doing my review ^^
Dm me if you want to do a review swap with me ^^
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/30440/the-other-labyrinth
My story, "The Other Labyrinth", is a litrepg-reincarnation novel that follow four friends that were separated by the reincarnation and are now each in a different world.
I want to put romance in there but it's by far not the main subject, no explicit sex so far (but there is explicit content, like people naked) and I hate Harem. One of the PoV is a post-apo one, and the whole concept of the labyrinth revolve around seeing world going through apocalypse and see if they can avert it or not ^^
I'll read at least 35k words before doing my review ^^
Dm me if you want to do a review swap with me ^^
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/30440/the-other-labyrinth
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Hey mate! Stay home and safe. Would love a review on my story. It's a completed prologue, the beginning for a magical high fantsay adventure. This fiction is like an exposure for me to write stuff, so kind of an experiment before i head onto volume 1, the main story. Her's the link https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/31884/rakshashas-heart-prologue. Any shortcomings or flaws you find, dm me your opinions. :)
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I left a review :) I'd love if you could read some of my story - The Courting of Life and Death
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