Re: Honest Review/Feedback for Grimdark Fantasy (Ongoing, 100+ pages, 30k words)


Looking to see how my story can be improved, any critique is welcome!

Countless generations ago mankind settled the world of Orr. Its native races fought in the Great War against them, but was brought to a stalemate for millennia. The King, assassinated by the natives, has reignited the eternal war. Can his son, the Crown Prince, avenge his father and bring peace to the land?