Re: Drawing from ya boi ThatNoLifeArtist

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Eichi Wrote: It's good, only one main thing bothers me there.

It should be "a not so shady town" for what you were going for. If someone wanted you to do it better though, it'd be "a shady town with 7 murders but a job is a-- job."

Style wise, its cute. Weird that hes always smoking but its fine I guess.

Thanks for the critique, I'll make sure to improve on the next page whenever I'll make it :)