I've stated in the past that I can only work on Chapter 1 Reviews of any story. Now, I have time to completely review anyone's story, though depending on what you ask, it will take some time.

I will give my honest opinion about your story. Though I do have my own personal reading tastes, I will read any story regardless of the genre, with no bias whatsoever (probably except extreme hardcore genres). I specialize in character development and plot progression, so if you are looking for someone within those specifications, I'm your man.

I only ask for you to read my story too. I've improved since then and I hope it can tailor to your tastes of Fantasy Fiction. Hopefully.

Sure, I'll trade critiques.  Any opportunity for that's a good one.  Mine's pretty early on at 8 chapters so any feedback right now wouldn't be too late for edits.

I've done a lot of critiques, but they're always based on my own opinion and really basic understanding of story structure, so take it with a grain of salt.  I don't like to sugarcoat anything either since that kind of feedback isn't useful.

For mine, I don't think grammar is a big issue, just the story and plot.  Dunno if it's interesting, especially to RR readers.  It's an isekai, but not the power MC types that go over well on here.

Anyway, I'll get started on yours today or tomorrow (11pm here and I gotta work in the AM)

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/28789/supertraveler-in-another-world

I'll read as much of yours as I can squeeze into between daily updates.

Master Jenkens Wrote: Sure, I'll trade critiques.  Any opportunity for that's a good one.  Mine's pretty early on at 8 chapters so any feedback right now wouldn't be too late for edits.

I've done a lot of critiques, but they're always based on my own opinion and really basic understanding of story structure, so take it with a grain of salt.  I don't like to sugarcoat anything either since that kind of feedback isn't useful.

For mine, I don't think grammar is a big issue, just the story and plot.  Dunno if it's interesting, especially to RR readers.  It's an isekai, but not the power MC types that go over well on here.

Anyway, I'll get started on yours today or tomorrow (11pm here and I gotta work in the AM)

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/28789/supertraveler-in-another-world

I'll read as much of yours as I can squeeze into between daily updates.

Sure, I'll take a look at yours. I'll be working on it ASAP.

Here's the link of my story. I keep forgetting.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/21634/a-hero-returns-on-hiatus

Alrightie that's one down. Open for reviews again.

I'm up for a trade!

Chaos_is_Harmony Wrote: I'm up for a trade!

Sure. I'll read as much of it as I can. Depending how long it is, it might take a while.