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Re: Review swap for my novel Requiem

#1 by Zachary Dugas
Hello everyone I just posted chapter 8 of my novel and have just explained the hard magic system(Urban fantasy with hard magic)  and I was wondering if anyone wanted to do a swap with me?  

Here is the link yo my fiction, just post in this thread if you are up for it: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/28468/requiem-soularts-book-one
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  • 12 Dec 2019, 17:51
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Re: Review swap for my novel Requiem

#2 by javert
I'll swap if you want to read my completed mystery story, Arcadis Park
Check out my story, In the Shadow of Heaven  - a space opera about ruling an evil empire. 2k+ pages, f/f romance, updates often.
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  • 12 Dec 2019, 19:23
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Re: Review swap for my novel Requiem

#3 by Zachary Dugas

javert Wrote: I'll swap if you want to read my completed mystery story, Arcadis Park
sounds good to me.
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  • 12 Dec 2019, 22:22
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Re: Review swap for my novel Requiem

#4 by Zachary Dugas

javert Wrote: I'll swap if you want to read my completed mystery story, Arcadis Park
just finished reading and reviewing your novel, not what I expected on rr but very good.
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  • 13 Dec 2019, 17:06
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Re: Review swap for my novel Requiem

#5 by javert
Glad you liked it; thank you for the review. I'll get to yours this weekend.
Check out my story, In the Shadow of Heaven  - a space opera about ruling an evil empire. 2k+ pages, f/f romance, updates often.
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  • 14 Dec 2019, 00:08
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Re: Review swap for my novel Requiem

#6 by Avery Light
 If you want to swap, I'm down.

Do let me know.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/27781/horizon
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  • 14 Dec 2019, 01:06
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Re: Review swap for my novel Requiem

#7 by Asviloka
First thing from chapter 1 - paragraphs are too long, and you have double double spacing between them. I'd break up the longer sections at least once, maybe twice, and do away with the extra blank-space lines.
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  • 14 Dec 2019, 03:23
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Re: Review swap for my novel Requiem

#8 by Felix Helixihare
Are you still open? We can swap with any of my fics on RR.

I'm currently busy. I'll get to it later today or tomorrow.
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  • 14 Dec 2019, 04:26
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Re: Review swap for my novel Requiem

#9 by Chaos_is_Harmony
I'm willing to swap! Your 8 chapters to 8 of my own. What say you?

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https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/28140/conscientia

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