Re: Review swap for my novel Requiem
#1
Hello everyone I just posted chapter 8 of my novel and have just explained the hard magic system(Urban fantasy with hard magic) and I was wondering if anyone wanted to do a swap with me?
Here is the link yo my fiction, just post in this thread if you are up for it: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/28468/requiem-soularts-book-one
Here is the link yo my fiction, just post in this thread if you are up for it: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/28468/requiem-soularts-book-one
Re: Review swap for my novel Requiem
#2
I'll swap if you want to read my completed mystery story, Arcadis Park
Check out my story, In the Shadow of Heaven - a space opera about ruling an evil empire. 2k+ pages, f/f romance, updates often.
Re: Review swap for my novel Requiem
#3javert Wrote: I'll swap if you want to read my completed mystery story, Arcadis Parksounds good to me.
Re: Review swap for my novel Requiem
#4javert Wrote: I'll swap if you want to read my completed mystery story, Arcadis Parkjust finished reading and reviewing your novel, not what I expected on rr but very good.
Re: Review swap for my novel Requiem
#5
Glad you liked it; thank you for the review. I'll get to yours this weekend.
Check out my story, In the Shadow of Heaven - a space opera about ruling an evil empire. 2k+ pages, f/f romance, updates often.
Re: Review swap for my novel Requiem
#7
First thing from chapter 1 - paragraphs are too long, and you have double double spacing between them. I'd break up the longer sections at least once, maybe twice, and do away with the extra blank-space lines.
Re: Review swap for my novel Requiem
#8
Are you still open? We can swap with any of my fics on RR.
I'm currently busy. I'll get to it later today or tomorrow.
I'm currently busy. I'll get to it later today or tomorrow.
Re: Review swap for my novel Requiem
#9
I'm willing to swap! Your 8 chapters to 8 of my own. What say you?
