Hey there everyone, I am leaving this post here both for myself, and for others. I want this thread to serve as a platform to help people find other writers/editors for their works. 
The format for responding to this if you want to leave your work to be beta read is as follows:

"I am looking for a beta reader for my story -insert your story link here-."

Then you will link another story from this same thread that you have gone to and attempted to provide constructive writing feedback. Your link will be to the chapters you left comments for.

If you have not reviewed someone else's work when you post your link, you will not get yours read. 

That said, I will leave mine here as a starting point. As you fine folk leave your works down below, I will attempt to leave as many constructive comments as I can and link back to those in this main post.

My story: