Re: Supernatural themed story with a dash of romance. Help needed.

Hi. My name's Ayuuya. Nice to meet everyone. This is my first thread.
Please read this and critique the first two chapters.

I have never written romance before and I don't know whether it's realistic or not. If you didn't like it, it's okay to be blunt with me.

Also please point out parts where people might get confused while reading. As the author, everything is in my head so I might not be able to spot parts of my story where I didn't get my message across.

Please be gentle and bear with me.