I've been posting my story for almost a month now, and would love some reviews/feedback for the story. I can do a review swap as well, but as i recently got a little puppy, I can't read too long stories. I can't really sit down and read for hours on end. If you just like writing reviews and looking for something new to read that's welcome too of course
I'm writing a novel called Defiance of the Fall and it is a apocalyptic LitRPG with elements from eastern fantasy. It's currently 140 pages and I currently release 1 chapter (~1500 words) Mon-Fri.
Due to the nature of the setup many things about the System etc is unclear to the MC/you as readers, but it will be gradually revealed. It's planned to be small cast, and almost exclusively be from the point of view of the MC Zac.
It's a fantasy story about a mercenary as he takes on different jobs around the country.
Here is mine, its fantasy: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/24819/highborn-the-stormforth-chronicles
My story is, Deviant's Masquerade: A World of Heroes, Villains, Rogues, and Family
The story itself is an urban-fantasy/ superhero anthology, with each episode switching to a new set of characters in the same world. Since I'm trying to make it more character than anything else, the story is a little thought heavy, with a fairly large cast.
Right now, the story is around 250 pages, so hopefully that won't take up too much free time. If it is too long you can just give a review of one of the Episodes themselves, that should prove just as helpful if it's Episode-2 or 3. (I'm aware Episode-1 has a few issues I need to work on at a later date.)
If you do decide to review, thank you for your time and assistance.