Re: Requesting for Story Feedback

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Well, I normally am not one to be active. I initially just wanted to have somewhere to post that may or may not gather readers. So I just lurk around then post chapters every now and then. Due to some stuff, I figured I might as well try and get people to read up on my work. I am stubborn like that. No harm in that, I believe. So, if you have time to spare, I would like some feedback regarding my fiction.

The Book of Conquest: Ouroboros

Thank you for your time.