Currently at 32 chapters, here's the blurb:
With her parents murdered and her brother abducted, a trainee Monk of the Gun pursues the one responsible, the Bull Demon King, undefeated Warlord of the Crimson Army.
Struggling to track down her enemy while braving the dangers of the wilds, she enlists the help of Sun Wukong, but 500 years under a mountain have taken its toll. Unstable and weakened, will he be more hindrance than help? Can he become the warrior he once was?
A Monk and a Monkey journey across a world...
... where the remnants of technology are seen as magic, while pockets of humanity strive to drag themselves out of ignorance.
... where the descendants of animal-human hybrids, once created as instruments of war, now seek to dominate the world as demons.
... where beings who call themselves Immortals and Gods preoccupy themselves with selfish pastimes, ignoring everything else.
Among other things, a story about growth, grit, and being better than the person you were yesterday.
Thank you in advance!
Espionage and action fiction in close future! Looking forward to know your feelings!
I haven't gotten any feedback but I would really love for someone to review mine.
Please review mine also, as it would greatly help improve my writing.
Here is the link to my novel: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/27213/against-the-heavens-will
Newbie author on RR. If you do get a chance to read my work then please don't be gentle. Tell me exactly where the story needs improveand if it sucks so bad you don't want to even bother. But if you think it's interesting, do let me know!
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