Re: Looking for feedback on fiction.

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Hey, Im working on this story, I got 2k views here alone, plus 10k on webnovel.
Despite this I haven't gotten any feedback and I know my story is not perfect.
I'm not asking for ratings or anything, just if you could please read a chapter or two (they're really short, like 50 to 300 words at the start.)and just comment here or on my story what to improve.
Thanks.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/23887/how-i-got-possessed-by-a-barrel-of-porn
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