Re: Feedback request for my first two chapters

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Wrote: Hello, fellow writers and readers.

I'm very new to the site and I'm still trying to find my way around.
I'm writing a story called Saoirse (means freedom in Irish), it's a pirate based adventure story. I would really like some feedback on my first two chapters and I would be more than happy to return the favour.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/23606/saoirse

Thank you in advance :)


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