The Heroes of Opal - Feedback wanted
So here is the link to my fiction.
It's more of a traditionally written story than a web-novel (slower pacing, denser text), it's a fantasy-adventure in a low-tech world. With a rough goal of completing the story at 100k words. I did take a rather long pause after publishing my 2nd chapter but I'm determined to finish it.
Before I go too far, I would like to read a few comments or advice. What you liked or didn't, about the story itself or my writing. It's my first novel attempt and I feel like I'm stumbling through a dark room ankle deep in hungry rats. Though I've read quite a few writing guide books.
The link is also in my sig if the one above doesn't work. Thanks in advance!
OakenDusk Wrote: Thanks!
I'll go back and edit when I get the chance. I'm always amazed at the number of mistakes like that I miss.
Tell me about it... heh, but editing is the part and parcel, so at some point you arrive to the spot where the world might not be satisfied, but you are, and that’s when your book is done. Happy travels to that wonderful place!