Please have a go at my fiction and review.
Greetings. I am DrunkMinstrel and as of writing this post I have had a finger of Glendullan. Jk.
I am new to this website and would like some people to review and give me feedback for my story.
I used light novel-ish format as to make it easier for readers who want a quick read.
It is a story about an ancient cultivator of Jianghu who transmigrated to the body of a girl.
The new world used generic isekai format with some heroes given cheats by the gods and goddesses who sent them there.
here is the link
Give me your thoughts and if I can improve it anyway I can