Hello everyone.

Greetings. I am DrunkMinstrel and as of writing this post I have had a finger of Glendullan. Jk.

I am new to this website and would like some people to review and give me feedback for my story.

I used light novel-ish format as to make it easier for readers who want a quick read.


It is a story about an ancient cultivator of Jianghu who transmigrated to the body of a girl.
The new world used generic isekai format with some heroes given cheats by the gods and goddesses who sent them there.

here is the link

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/23022/wreath-of-lilies-cauldron-of-poison

Give me your thoughts and if I can improve it anyway I can

Cheers,
DrunkMinstrel