Re: New RR Author, hoping for feedback

So I already posted about a review swap, but I was digging through the forums and noticed I could have just asked for feedback in general.  So apologies to folks to have already saw my earlier post.  I'm new to Royal Road, and am posting with the hopes of getting some honest feedback.  I'm interested to hear what I'm doing right and where I need to fix, on either of my stories.

Fury: Book One of the Titanomachy

Post Human

Thanks, and apologies if I'm flooding inboxes.