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Life is Pointless in this World Better Find Another One

Description: This story follows the life of a listless 15-year-old boy named Waltraut Fayiz. He sees the world he sees the world as pointless and limited, but one day due to a strange goddess he finds himself in another world. One that is free of the limits that he had experienced before. After landing in this unfamiliar world he finds that the Goddess is not so Godly, she is hated by many and Fayiz is the only follower. Can he turn his Goddesses hate into love and become a hero like he dreamed?

Chapters are around 1,000 words Each 

Link: https://www.royalroadl.com/fiction/18891/life-is-pointless-in-this-world-better-find-another