11/10 musical renditions aside, I'm just looking for some feedback on my novel. 

Its called New Legends

Synopsis: Ethel, a world long shaped by those who practiced and understood the magical force known as sahir, is changing. Gone are the mages who held the world in the palm of their hands, replaced with machines and smoke. More and more people are turning away from sahir, a force only very few could ever truly utilize, and towards engineering. The Alden Empire, the wealthiest nation on the Lysken continent, is attempting to spearhead that revolution. Unfortunately, in their rush towards the future they've condemned a number of people to the past. The effects of that decision would serve as a catalyst for a new revolution, one of an entirely different, yet familiar nature. 

 

Enter Kain Basileus, a boy with a far weightier future than he dares bare.