hey guy,

I just finished the first draft of my first book. I am planning on going through it and doing major edits and changes. If anyone wants to critique my writing please tear me a new one. You can post you feedback as a review or send my pm or comment on chapter. 

If you enjoy something let me know as well, but don’t shy away from telling me the harsh realities. I won’t take a personally, just as something that I can help me improve. 

Link is in my signature 

If anyone also wants unbiased feedback in return, let me know.