Arwyn has just bought Fantasia, the first fantasy-based VRMMORPG, with 99% realism that you can play while you sleep. In the game, she becomes Fey, a moon elf starting in the magical Elvenwood. Join her (and her snarky narrator who likes to interject sarcastic comments in parentheses) on her exciting, often hilarious adventures inside this magical world full of every fantasy creature you've ever encountered in books, games, and movies, and a few that you haven't.
Oh, and there's something strange about the NPCs in this game... See if you can figure it out before Fey does. (No, they are not self-aware AIs.)
-Cover art credit goes to A. Noviant
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I love how you explain all the TKD stuff and I really love having a female MC, I think its really a great history so far (on chapter 19 currently) and I really look foward to more chapters and faster ones (*blink*)
Guess I'm getting some of your humor..
Really like the story. Can't wait to see more!
Story is really good. And Fey thoughts and pets are awesome. Perfect comedy and romantic
The parenthesis kill any chance of immersion in the story, and the poorly constructed "snarky" remarks get boring fats!(completly usless attempt to bring humor to the story)
On a positive note i liked the pet sistem,but that's about it,one-dimensional characters and the insistent plot ruined any chance to enjoyment!
Awesome series! Entertaining and I hope it doesnt end soon.
This is a most entertaining story with great characters.
Not doing some long review, just read the authors story and don’t be whiny about the parenthetical narrator, if it pulls you out of the story then you have the concentration of a goldfish. Anyway to make a long story short, it’s completely one hundred percent worth it.
Thanks for the laughs and making my day. I seriously love the humour and writing style.
I'm really enjoying this story the main character is very funny
ThIs story is excellent. It is funny, quirky, and interesting. I absolutely love the characters and how different but completely realistic they are and Fey's pets are the best. Also, the writing is excellent and I'm pretty sure I've never seen a grammatical error. (Although I'm horrible at grammar so I probably wouldn't notice even if there was one.) I'm not entirely sure if I could tell you what makes me like this story so much because it really isn't one element, everything is done so well. Read it.
Thanks for the great story and keep writing.