Game Master - Unlocked (Terror Infinity) (Old Version)

by LackOfUpdates

Taking some inspiration from the guy who made Terror Infinite - Side B. 

Jin can't remember how he arrived, playing a twisted game for who knows why.

All he knows is he needs to survive. A place where the, 'Game Masters', decides the fate all those who arrive. 

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Diamond in the rough? Maybe, I just like that metaphor.

Good potential, bit tired too properly check grammar so I'm just gonna give that a high rating as I didn't notice anything wrong~

Characters are nice but I'd like a bit more 'life,' the 'veteran' seems quite plain but as I said; it's too early to judge yet. (Can't say anymore about that without using spoilers)

The style is straightfoward and doesn't make me see this as a hidden pleasure, even hiding it from myself~, seeming a bit nostalgic since I haven't read 'Terror infinity' for a while, nor the side B fanfic.

And finally, it's too early to give a proper voting on the story content but as it's copying the 'terror infinity' novel or more precisely the 'Side b' fanfiction, leaving me to just give this a high-score for allowing me to avoid doing work at 1 in the morning~

 

Ironically writing 4 paragraphs for a review to avoid working! That could work as a compliment too!.. Maybe.

Dragon_of_time's_end
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First paragraph seem awkward to me, but it cleans up later on. Though if it was going for the confusion of being throw into an unknown situation while recieving an explaination which is confusing and hardly explains anything, then it nailed it.

 It doesn't have the cookie cutter first arc of zombie, or horde of bioweapon like nearly all Terror Infinity FF uses , or helpful veteran player(s).

The MC also has a mildly proper explaination of his skills rather then a bull ___t normal person suddenly doing things they may have seen in fiction or somehow believing that machine gunning some mantra will make them stronger. Though he is pursuing a difficult side quest when an immediate survival option would be a normal reaction, but thats Terror Infinity FF MC for you.

It shows some promise looking foward to see what comes of it as long as its not a harem. Eventhough I said that the author shouldn't let it guide his story, otherwise it won't be his anymore and will probably turn into some audience pandering trash.

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 Great fanfiction, Highly recommend the four chapters written while this review was written.