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Luke Thomas has a regular poor life. His girlfriend has just left him and his job has come to an abrupt end. He now has about two months worth of money and nothing to live for in the poorest part of town. He's lost everything so fast he can barely bring himself to care about improving his situation. God knows if you start out poor you end poor in this city, and his end was going to be coming quickly. As quickly as the concrete was rushing towards him.

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Togg
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without a doubt... this is one well written story.

 

the Psycho tag is really intended here, might wanna add in horror as well.

 

Style: MC POV.. everything is from what the MC see's

Story : While it is not a unique setting, the author utilizes the trope in an engaging fashion

Grammer : only a few points of typos... 

Character : well written, you can feel the frustration and anger of the MC

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I actually read General's othe story as well, (which I still keep up with) and I enjoyed his writing style right from the start. Of course at that point you get left with a sense of always wanting more, especially since he started doing releases every like 3 days. But this story is stupid good. I like comedies and stuff like his other book, but this one starts off like that then takes a fucking nosedive. I dont usually like books that have to do with timelines and shit but this is amazing

style: Probably what I like most about his writing is the style, it feels like halfway between a script and a light novel

grammar: Always amazing in his novels

characters: Since there's less in this book than his other, general really shows how deep he can get into a character, their feelings and thoughts on everything. Definitely a highlight of this novel.

Story: as frikks said, better than fucking KFC

Gunda Frikks
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Please don't read this or you will get ADDICTED ^^

It is so good, even more than a fucking KFC