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Five years ago our main character donated to a suspicious site claiming to be making a VR game set to release five years from then, taking the risky choice he donates his entire first paycheck to the site, and now five years later the game, AEO or animal evolution online is being released, and he gets to start with the founders package

 

THIS IS A RE-WRITE OF HYBRID EVOLUTION ONLINE

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