She used to be a bright child. She was just not fortunate enough to have a normal life. Ill and bed-ridden, she slowly lost affect and cut herself off from outer reality, as her only joy was to construct a complex fantasy world. And eventually, she met her demise.
Nevertheless, her story did not end here. Who is to say that Death is our last path? For her, it was just the beginning. She had been given a second chance. Reborn as a Goddess in the very own world that she created, it was now only up to her to write her own story.
‘This time, let’s try to live normally.’
Warning: Slow Character Development, Frequent Hiatus
About the releases: Do not expect regular releases. I can no longer stick to a specific release schedule, so the chapters will be released once the entire arc is done, which implies long hiatus periods between arcs.
About the tags: Although there are game elements, there are absolutely not the focus of the story so this isn't exactly a LitRPG.
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Need more of this. It's simply amazing. Grammar is also good and I can't wait for more chapters.
It's Another magnificent Gem.
Keep it up.
Edit: Oh Yeah, expect That the story will be Really great, you can tell with those first few chapters.
And I'll be waiting for our MC to become Hot and OP. So don't you dare drop this Gem or went missing,because an angry mob will be waiting for you. 👍
I love the story even though I have never been a fan of the 'character just trying to have a normal life despite having so much power at their fingertips' genre. You have written it with grace and style. One problem though, you haven't updated in ages. Come back!
I stumbled upon this the other day and I am very glad I did. I devoured it and had to go suppor the author on patreon. You must keep writing! The author always says she is not a native English speaker, but it rarely if ever shows. This is definitely one of the most well written serials on RR.
The story is simply fun. It's lighthearted with its serious moments, and the main character is just a wonderful first-person PoV. I was constantly laughing; her commentary is hilarious.
Now I may be biased since I do love OP leads, especially when they are done right. Too often an author will make a character OP and either try to shoehorn some challenges in for them that feel superficial or simply make it a full-on power trip with no real semblance of anything else. The good ones embrace the OP MC and yet still manage to keep the story exciting, leaving you unable to put it down so you can see what happens next. That is exactly what this story does.
Updates do seem to be slow, but are picking up again as of the time of this review. Honestly, I don't mind waiting for each chapter. They are fairly long and never disappoint.
If you are at all on the fence, just give it a go. You will likely get sucked in just as I did.
I've been on RoyalRoad for a long time but now I'm creating an account just to review this and comment.
It's my personal favourite.
The story is hilarious. It has the perfect amount of gore and tragedy to stay uplifting. Reading this always put a smile on my face (even though some chapters are still emotional and made me cry)! The pace is great. The progression is pretty slow overall but not boring at all. The different plots and world elements are introduced naturally without sudden info dumping. Thumbs up!
Characters are great. My favourite are Yoko and Harris who are just hilarious but I also really like the mc. She's not arrogant not annoying, and her way of thinking is pretty funny (although sometimes frustrating, but considering her past and her personality, not surprising). I really do like her growth. As the author said, it's pretty slow but it makes sense and it's gratifying.
The story is mostly related from the MC's POV, so it is sometime hard to relate to other characters as you only get her inner thoughts. So the occasional change of POV is really refreshing. You get a bigger insight of the story and realize all the stuff going on.
Grammar and writing style are good. I'm not a native speaker either but besides occasional typos so far so good.
The only downside of this story are the frequent hiatus. But the author also has a life, she's also a student so I'll stay patient. Besides no matter how long her hiatus were sometimes, she always came back. I don't think she'll ever drop this story so I really appreciate the dedication. Thank you (and welcome back)!
This is magnificent, I'm in love with this.
Grammar and Style: Nothing to say, I've failed to see any grammar mistakes so if there are any, there are very few. The style is good too. It's beautifully written without being too complicated.
Story: It's a bit early to judge, but so far, I love it. I love the idea of the girl being reincarnated as a goddess in a world she created. The first few chapters can be a little dark, but the rest of the story is pretty hilarious ! Love it !
Character: Same, a little early to judge, but I personally find the MC likeable. She is a naive girl that slowly tries to cope with her situation. I strongly disagree with people saying she is a spectator. First of all, I find it quite unbelievable that some people judge the MC's behavior on two or three chapters, saying that she didn't do anything. OK, she didn't, but what was she supposed to do? She may have the mind of a teenager, but she had the body of an infant, and she had yet to learn how to use her powers. Besides, reading the next chapters, it's obvious she isn't a spectator. Once she started to figure out her powers, she immediately reacted. I think her behavior so far is pretty logical and relatable. Growing up, I even came to like her even more~
Overall, I love it. Totally recommend it to people who like OP reincarnation story !
*just a normal day at RRL Fiction Mining*
*strucks another RRL Gem*
(short story) -
"... dayumm ..."
(long story) -
"... I don't even know anymore if I'm supposed to be happy that RRL fictions are improving or to be sad that the bookmarks of my bookshelf is exploding and I cant keep up with the story(s)'s (-_-) plot anymore ..."
Sometimes the mc could do a bit more to try to use their abilities but they chose not to. They are not very intrested in being a god it seems but it is well writen. My only complaint is that the mc goes with the flow to much.
Like so many stories before it, especially from the light Japanese vein, this work attempts thrust an exceedingly meek character into the position of extreme (absolute?) power.
I don’t know if the story is intentionally developing irony, but I truly hope that it begins to with direction and purpose. I’m also interested if the MC will develop out additional characteristics, beyond her meekness and desire for friends. I think the maternal aspect of her nature, as well as innovation and sexuality (so long as it done earnestly and not with the intention of porn), could all be interesting facets if developed.
The grammar is slightly above average, and this is a good example of the overall rising tide of the site.
very good....now I have to read this everyday to get my fix...thank you!✌️️
In my opinion this story is very enjoyable to read and I would recommend others to read it. It seems to be pretty well written and grammer is okay too. The stories main lead is an OP female character with a secret (divinity) that was cool. Having the lead character be able to control the entirety of the world she lives in makes for a very interesting story where you don't know what will happen next. There is also some humer in this story which only adds to fun when readers actually read it. All in all I think it's really cool, funny and entertaining to read and that the writer did a wonderful job writing it.