Tom is a God who has created a world but can't create new life. In order to populate it, he makes a bet with an Old God to start from the beginning again and cultivate on a new world.
Going through countless adventures, through countless trials, will Tom be able to win his bet.
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After reading these 47 chapters, Tom is still nowhere close to fulfil his promise to that one god. I feel the pacing is too slow, and it has been killing my enthusiasm for this story. Or I'm probably just impatient. With that out of the way, the concept of this story is interesting. I like the explanations how Tom gets strong at a fast pace by cross referencing with his past life, being a god and all. I'll update my review in the future.
Review from Chapter 18
too early to tell but so far it hasnt raised any red flags.
Story wise its an interesting concept, I don think i've read anything too similar.
No problem here.
Again, too early to tell. It may or may not get a higher score after future chapters
Should you read it? Yes, no other reason other than its an interesting story that doesnt outright raise any red flags.
* Review is being edited frequently *
You know, when you write a novel, you need to make sure you novel has that 'something' that lures people who are interested in that certain something, in. It can be good action, it can be good conversations, it can be good characters with mature and interesting personalities, it can be drama or tragedy, it can be romance. Anything that has a certain "fanbase" basically. Your novel lacks that something. It's just like reading a diary. You don't really feel anything when you're reading this story. Well that's no true, I actually felt something. Annoyance. The reason I started reading this story was to see a GOD starting from the beginning and reaching the top fairly easily simply because he's already done so once in the past. But what I got after I started was the story of a stupid god who despite being thousands of years old simply can not think for once and understand the things going on around him. I mean, I understand he wasn't even a human before he became a god so he doesn't really understand the ways humans do things but he's already been a god for such a long time. Why the hell is he so stupid? And why the hell is he still so weak? He might have been cultivating a different kind of energy for his entire life but he's still a god so he must have some understanding with how energies and cultivation and stuff like that works, no? Looking at the reactions of the people around him to his fast cultivation, I bet there are actually kids from some of the strong clans and families who can cultivate as fast as him, a GOD, in this world. Which is stupid btw, if you can't tell.
I wouldn't be harsh normally but it's just annoying man, making you MC a god who's lived for who knows how long but making him a naive and stupid person.
Anyway, if you have free time, read it. But if you have something else you want to read and are trying to decide which one to read first, I don't think this is the one you're looking for.