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Just a forewarning, this is my first piece of writing.

The first 5 chapters are more of a prologue than anything else and it has a lot of information dumps that don't actually add much to the story. I like to think that after this, the quality of my writing improved, however, I do also have some information dumps on the background and the setting.

Because I was busy with introducing new characters and such, this novel takes a little longer to get into the action but afterwards I plan for it to go at a relatively fast pace with a decent amount of action.

Also, to finish this off, the beginning chapters aren't as long and I think I'm averaging somewhere in the ball park of 1300 words per chapter.

Well, thanks for reading and I'm hoping that as the story goes on I'll continue to improve as a writer.

P.S I'm primarily posting/editing on Wattpad but i heard that this site is better for fantasy stuff.

P.P.S Sorry for the bad grammar. Not so great with commas and apostrophes.

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