Undead Lord

by Azcheron

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

 

Oliver had never been...  satisfied with his normal life. So when the opportunity comes along to become something more  and he is transported as 1 of a large group to a new world of magic and wonder, he fights tooth and nail to ensure his place on the return trip back to Earth, where his newfound power will either prove to be humanity's greatest asset or its worst enemy.

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I'm still not quite sure in how I want to do this story, suffice to say there will be strategy/war elements involved etc and I hope not to rely too much on stat-tables.

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Azcheron

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this story has a weird, for me untouched, concept. Which is the reason I gave it 5 stars for story. Until now (chapter 2) I haven't noticed any grammar mistakes. For the style, I think that the class race system a little to common is, but that is the only reason it has 4 stars. For the character, who apperentely has some some sort of autism, I think chosen well by picking a gamer. But his autism will make for some boring conversations (I think).

For this entire story I would only change one thing, which is also in the description. The MC becomes OP style, but all I can do for now is hope that that doesn't happen, because I think that (need for power/money) struggles can make a story.