Stained Red

by Natfor

Original HIATUS Adventure Fantasy Reincarnation

In the village of Firden a boy is born. He is born under normal circumstances with normal parents. However, the boy is not so normal. He has a pair of red eyes, and seems to have a knack for adventure. Could there be a reason for the red eyes? And what could this strange child accomplish in his life?

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Brutus Hans
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For only having two chapters so far, this story is already looking very nice. I can't think of any glaring problems, except something in chapter 1 that was rectified in chapter 2. I hope to give a more detailed review at a later time.