Stonequiet: A Proficiomancer in Another World

Stonequiet: A Proficiomancer in Another World

by Ficturomancer

Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

It was in a dream that I heard her voice. She, a goddess, had offered me a place to be her champion and heal my pain, but I declined. Even with that someone else decided to take me away regardless of my choice. It was not long before I realized I was not the only one taken. Eleven of us were forced into this world in order to fight monsters. My girlfriend and her best friend were taken as well.

 

I had little interest in fighting for a nation that would kidnap people from another world. So by the grace of god, I was given access to the Grimoire Magic System in which a game-like system was offered to me. It even included an in-game shop. With this we will find a way back to Earth.

 

Extra Tags: Cheat Skill, OP-MC, Harem, Crafting.

 

 

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Prinny Knight
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The story is quite decent, no obvious grammatical errors. A greatly different take of the "summoned heroes" with a unique version of the "lvl system". Abundant of overly "sad" expostion feels forced. All summoned heroes are sex driven, which in turn makes every other character in story also sex driven, but only towards the heroes. Much too convience there. Main character has an overall terrible personality, constantly shifting while remaining a horrible person. If you can get over the fact that the hero is going to get everything he ever feels he is going to want, the over use of cliches, extreme coincedences that fall in his lap, very sappy back storys, seemingly fake personalities forced on a large portion of the expanse of characters, and find your self scrolling through paragraphs at times, then you'll like the story. 

Personal note-"Will continue reading for now, but having a hard time pushing forward to next chapter after each one."

Iramohs
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Out of all the new novels I've read last month this one has the most potential. Tha author is slowly building an incredibly interesting world that's waiting to be explored. The MC is completely focused on his own objectives while not giving a shit about the rest of his class. My one complaint is that the knowledge gathering is taking longer than I'd like but that's basically the same with every novel like this.

 

EDIT: Lowered my rating from 4.5 stars to 3.5 stars. 8 chapters in and it's hard to tell where this story intends to go. So far it's Death March with some sexy time but far more complicated. And the MC seems competely unmotivated when it comes to healing his DEADLY DISEASE which really makes no sense.

Dragon G'lant
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Characters feel like they're real people and though they may seem sex driven it's actually just the empire trying to force the summoned to get attached so they fight for the empire. Only real issue I see is the delay between posting each chapter. If you slow it down to day by day, you'd be able to post more frequently without leaving the readers so starved for more that they forget this novel and find another.

ImMrMeeseeks
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HE'S DISAPPEARED!!! WHYYYY come back pls i dont wanna lose my most favoritist story evars

rusticsoldier
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A real mc. That's period.

This  generally  what I think  a main  character should act like..I'm  at chapter xlll supplies.  The only thing I have not seen him make use of  are slaves of make his own army. At the start he talked more about his strategy  games. I was hoping to see him put that knowledge  to the test. But he just left the city. And the story is good. I think I'll see this later as the author imagination is very similar to my own.

I have to say this is probably one of the funnest reads I have had. The main character is real unlike so many other stories. 

I am confused about his extremely strange lack in wanting to learn healing magic... in so many ways that was very odd. Even if it was not for him his wife.. and all gamer knowledge knows medics are good to have.. the further I read it to this makes that a very big glaring  inconsistentcy but this author I like so well I trust he will fill that gap. Ugh fightin tablet  to make  review 

Kerapu
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Really worth it. This story have potential, even though it doesn't have many chapter, it still worth it to read and wait. The only downside of this story is the slow released, thats it. Keep up the good work. I cant wait for the next chapter.

 

p/s: sorry for the grammar

fanvaron
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An amazing summoning story

This story is really great, the "local" approach to summoning is quite nice and in my opinion a lot more realistic then in other stories. The characters are all really great. The build up of the MC was great and the prologue is just amazing, just a creative way to create an info dump, with just the right amount of information, that we get an overall picture without beeing flooded. It leaves quite a lot to still be discovered about the character.

In general I really like the crafting aspect brought into this, and I'm eager to see how the story/character will balance out between fighting and crafting.

Overall a really great story, unfortunately the releases are few and far in between without a consistent release schedule. But even through I'm an advocate of waiting for a story to grow before reading it (I just hate the disappointment when I find out that I already reached the end). This story ist still worth it, the chapters are really good, high quality and long. With over 350 pages it is already on its way of being considered a medium sized story in my books. So if you can live with waiting, and the fear of not knowing when or if at all the next chapter will come out I definitely recommend it.

hollowedsouls
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I recently finished reading a few novels that only have a few chapters out at the moment, all of which is good.

This on the other hand is a slow start with a constantly building story making me want more and more of this to read.

Please for the love of god add more chapters to this.

soloflyte
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Liked the story, though after long periods of waiting between installments, I forgot all about it. I just discovered it was finished. Guess I have to read it all over again. A BIG thanks!

WillyH
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Nice storyplot but MC rather lusty? A little bit boring opening arc but nice follow up in travelling arc. If only Mc a little bit mad or odd could add a spice. And a little bit of joke too