Everybody Loves Large Chests

All the past review already explained how good this fiction is.  So i won't comment much about its greatness and no doubt on how it got on 'Popular this week' section'.

Do Emphashize on 'trap'. Everything in this story has its own trap and twist.

i really recommended this to those that like to read the different type of MC.

However for me, i can feel that i forcing myself to read this fiction because i don't like it. I just doesn't like how convenient for MC that the guild is incompetent. After reading a lot of fiction about dungeon and adventure guild, i really feel that the guild management in thsi fiction is really stupid and i can't fathom that. Too much convenient in this story.

This is just my own opinion, the very same person who cannot read the fiction if the MC is female or got gender bender genre.

So last word to author, keep on writing because your story is good. For those who like to read review first before read, give this story a chance. You will probably like it.

Can I just take a moment to say just how much I like this novel? No seriously I really love this novel. So far it must be one of the few handful novels on this site I ever liked as much as I do.

Moving on with the review, what's there for me to say? I find this novel to be close to perfection. The theme really resonates with me, I like the ecchi scenes, I like the serious scenes, I'm captivated by the tension build-ups. The novel is very well writen, so much that I find it quite hard to think of the author as an amateur writer, I mean this guy must definitely have an editor or two who not only correct grammar but edit the story itself, I mean how can this be done by one person at the speed that it releases? As you can see from my review I'm very amazed.

Now lets start with style. Love it. Not much to say, I'm a huge sucker for game-like novels specially ones where it's not really a guy playing a game but the world itself is gamelike. I also am a fan of skills and monster protagonists. If I had anything negative to say about the style it would be the stats, I mean I feel like lately (as of chapter "Those who are Left 6") stats are kinda growing at a bad pace, I feel like they are growing too high and it's giving them less worth. 

Moving on to story, for this I feel basically the same as I do for style. I like these types of stories, I'm a sucker for monster MC's and I'm a fan of the sexy content, specially the dominant manner in which the MC behaves in. 

Grammar, It's very clean, as I've said I feel like the author must have some help editing because the mistakes I've seen have been so few and far inbetween that they might as well not exist. In fact I've probably only come across 2 or 3 in total.

Characters, another great part of this novel. Author is really flushing out it's MC, enough so that we the readers can see that there is a method to his madness. Side characters are not left behind as we get some background on his minions and even some of the other side characters. There is also not too much clutter as in the author isn't adding a thousand character and forgetting them 2 chapters later. Most of them add to the story and when they stop being relevant there is a reason why they don't appear anymore.

Finally I'd give this a 5/5 but that would mean it's perfect and no novel is really perfect so instead I'm giving it a 4.5/5 and I feel like I'm being unjust here and it should be higher. If it were possible I'd give it a 4.8/5. There isn't much I can recommend the author to improve upon because from my amateur perspective this work is already very well polished and in my eyes is so well done that I can't think of anything to improve upon at this momment. Anyways to the author if you read this, please keep going I'm a huge fan and I'm really cheering for you. For the readers, who want to read this, give it a try I'm sure you will really like it and if you don't then is my opinion something may be wrong with you. =D

 good thing i got trapped by the title

Okay I admit I picked this book because well it was on chests but after reading the story I am feeling 2 things 

1. That I definitely falled for the author's trick and

2. I only regret that I didn't know about the story earlier.

It's an awesome story people should definitely read and as for the conclusion expect a lot about chests in this story

Too much porn with the dickgirls... interesting when you added it, but it takes up too much of a now non-existant plot, which sadly makes it just another porno. I had high hopes for this story, but I think it blew up with the city.

This story has a very nice build up, and it urges you to keep reading more and more. This story is the best example of how I imagine a royalroadl fiction. A rollercoaster of a bunch of wtf? 

The combination of humor/brutality and story pacing is just awesome! Thank you in advance for the further chapters you will be posting. I am writing this after chapter 6 of the chaos arc. This chapter made my day! This arc was the make or break arc of the story, you could have made this story go alot of ways, but you chose a perfect outcome for the pace of the story!

The only dislike I have is the mature scenes in your story are completely irrelevant. This is just my personal preference and i like that mature theme is just along for the ride and not the main story.

I wish you the best, and all the way to the top !

Thanks for the chapter.

Happy fourth month of birth Boxxy.

01/02/2017 - Death Comes in Many Shapes 4

Style: 4.5/5

There are no major issues that I recall here. The story flows very nicely and there are no major incidents of me wondering what is going on. While I remember the plot and events in the story if I'm not bothered by some of the more technical aspects of writing I don't remember them. Worst case scenerio there may be times the story is in first person and times the story is in third person, but within each section there are no major issues. Extremely solid overall.

Story: 4/5

Again this category is quite strong. The events that happen in the story follow a certain set of logic that applies within the story. The most glaring weakness here is that there is no obvious direction the story is going. Which is just to say it's something of a Slice-of-Life story, which while not bad will be off-putting for some. Another issue is the excess amount of sex between some of the characters. It falls in line with who they are and how they have been written but it could definitely be off-putting for some.

Grammar: 5/5

As one of my own weaker areas I can't say much other than that I haven't noticed any glaring grammatical errors or spelling mistakes.

Characters: 4/5

This is something of a mixed basket. The characters themselves are well thought, written and for the most part interesting. They have their own motivations and talents and while there are a few who could stand to be fleshed out a bit more, there seems to be a lot of time to get around to it. On a more negative front the main characters thus far are a vicious monster, a masochist, a self-proclaimed violent rapist, and something of a mind-broken exhibitionist. Obviously this story isn't going to be for everyone, but if you find those character descriptions amusing or otherwise interesting there is a decent chance you'll enjoy this story.

Overall: 4.5/5

At the end of the day the story is a fairly enjoyable LitRPG story with well thought out and written characters. There are no glaring grammar or style issues and the story progress at a decent pace in entertaining and often unexpected ways. I would recommend this to anyone who enjoys LitRPGs, has a slightly warped sense of humor, or is bored and looking for something to read.

This story is the best comedy story I have ever read.  The title is both misleading and completely accurate in the best way.  I was hesitant to read it at first becasue of the description but I took the risk and boy was it one of the better descisions i have made.  The authors use of multiple percpectives is flawless amking the story all about the main character even when its not the MCs POV.  Very few if any grammer mistakes and extremely well paced.

This story is just another ecchi reincarnation. Is what I thought until I read it. And now I'm hooked man. Like seriously. The story is original and hilarious, the characters are unique and the storyline is just amazing. Just when you think you've been surprised enough, you're surprised again. It just doesn't stop. One moment you'd be having an epic boss battle, and the next, a city is blowing up. just the madness I need to fill the gaping hole in my heart after re:hamster.