Everybody Loves Large Chests

This story has a very nice build up, and it urges you to keep reading more and more. This story is the best example of how I imagine a royalroadl fiction. A rollercoaster of a bunch of wtf? 

The combination of humor/brutality and story pacing is just awesome! Thank you in advance for the further chapters you will be posting. I am writing this after chapter 6 of the chaos arc. This chapter made my day! This arc was the make or break arc of the story, you could have made this story go alot of ways, but you chose a perfect outcome for the pace of the story!

The only dislike I have is the mature scenes in your story are completely irrelevant. This is just my personal preference and i like that mature theme is just along for the ride and not the main story.

I wish you the best, and all the way to the top !

Thanks for the chapter.

Happy fourth month of birth Boxxy.

01/02/2017 - Death Comes in Many Shapes 4

Style: 4.5/5

There are no major issues that I recall here. The story flows very nicely and there are no major incidents of me wondering what is going on. While I remember the plot and events in the story if I'm not bothered by some of the more technical aspects of writing I don't remember them. Worst case scenerio there may be times the story is in first person and times the story is in third person, but within each section there are no major issues. Extremely solid overall.

Story: 4/5

Again this category is quite strong. The events that happen in the story follow a certain set of logic that applies within the story. The most glaring weakness here is that there is no obvious direction the story is going. Which is just to say it's something of a Slice-of-Life story, which while not bad will be off-putting for some. Another issue is the excess amount of sex between some of the characters. It falls in line with who they are and how they have been written but it could definitely be off-putting for some.

Grammar: 5/5

As one of my own weaker areas I can't say much other than that I haven't noticed any glaring grammatical errors or spelling mistakes.

Characters: 4/5

This is something of a mixed basket. The characters themselves are well thought, written and for the most part interesting. They have their own motivations and talents and while there are a few who could stand to be fleshed out a bit more, there seems to be a lot of time to get around to it. On a more negative front the main characters thus far are a vicious monster, a masochist, a self-proclaimed violent rapist, and something of a mind-broken exhibitionist. Obviously this story isn't going to be for everyone, but if you find those character descriptions amusing or otherwise interesting there is a decent chance you'll enjoy this story.

Overall: 4.5/5

At the end of the day the story is a fairly enjoyable LitRPG story with well thought out and written characters. There are no glaring grammar or style issues and the story progress at a decent pace in entertaining and often unexpected ways. I would recommend this to anyone who enjoys LitRPGs, has a slightly warped sense of humor, or is bored and looking for something to read.

This story is the best comedy story I have ever read.  The title is both misleading and completely accurate in the best way.  I was hesitant to read it at first becasue of the description but I took the risk and boy was it one of the better descisions i have made.  The authors use of multiple percpectives is flawless amking the story all about the main character even when its not the MCs POV.  Very few if any grammer mistakes and extremely well paced.

This story is just another ecchi reincarnation. Is what I thought until I read it. And now I'm hooked man. Like seriously. The story is original and hilarious, the characters are unique and the storyline is just amazing. Just when you think you've been surprised enough, you're surprised again. It just doesn't stop. One moment you'd be having an epic boss battle, and the next, a city is blowing up. just the madness I need to fill the gaping hole in my heart after re:hamster. 

This story is just so much fun to read and to watch the characters grow (both skill-wise and personality-wise) that I was not able to stop. The plot is solid and the balance for pacing (both the story overall and humor/battle) is very tasty. If I had to say anything was a bit dicey, some of the moral options the protag ignores can be off-putting for readers. This factor is nullified however when understanding the nature and circumstances at the time if not in that chapter then the next. I implore anyone reading this to sincerely give this story a look as it is one of the best stories not just on RRL but for any of its genre.

TLRD: I would buy this book on amazon for $24.99, not including boxing tax.

I admit, that title almost made me dismiss this story as some mainstream junkie. But you definitely made something that would truly hit the books! 

Purely breathtaking craziness from the go and the mind boggling brutality that will train wreck you from the start seriously derailed my foolish assumptions.

I would dish out more adjectives just to say how much this story mindfucks you but my brain cant handle it.

5/5 Grammar. Sure there was some bumps on a few chapters but we're talking about a few months old newborn here. When it finally started its own quest for subterfuge the quality of it's dialogue shot up while mentaining on a solid personality

5/5 Character. Hands down yo. I cant say anymore about that.

5/5 Story. If Boxxy caught the interest of a Primodial Chaos how could we not fall for it too. Boxxy is just too addicting.

10/5 Style. Yep. 200% whoooping percent. Without your very unique style your awesome character, the mind boggling story and the inane acronyms all across the chapters wouldnt amount to anything. You're the man bro. You could sell this. TASTYCOCK haha

When I say dark I mean...super dark. This story is pretty much the perfect black comedy romp. One centered around one inhuman protagonist's villainous journey from being an ammoral moron who just wants to fill its belly to being an immoral mastermind who who wants to fill its belly and fill its coffers along the way. The story is fun and breezy, the jerkass main cast are all some levels of twisted. With the likability varying depending on their various kinks. Honestly some times it was almost a refreshing surprise to run into normal people in this story, it'd be like "oh, that's right, empathy is a thing.." but still I've yet to fully hate anyone at least, not for long anyway.  The pacing of the story and the plot move just fast enough to keep you from thinking to hard about how f-ed the people you spend most of your time with, are. And the author does a good job in making you root for these awful people at least eighty percent of the time. Even if you spend half that time hoping that they'll change their mind about a few of the awful, awful things there're planning on doing.

A wonderfully imaginative and unique LITRPG and one of the top 3 on RRL.  Beware some hilarious graphic sex scenes that may cause some may flinch but actually add some flavor to the characters that helps put them in context.  

If there was a character score for 6, I would be putting it down. The author's unique and inhuman main character is a box full of laughs.. and death. Not only that, but the whole story has plenty of comedic twists which adds to the somewhat perverse-fantasy-verse and makes for some tasty interactions.