Everybody Loves Large Chests

The story is pretty good.  Humor, violence, LitRPG elements, sex, adventure.  The title is a pun the MC's specie - an animated carnivorous treasure chest (which is also the basis of in-story puns and misunderstandings), though a significant portion of the cast does actually have large breasts.  Writing quality is well above average for this site.  

The MC's basic nature is accurately sumarized by the author as "a toddler with a gun".  The main thrust of the story is the MC's quest to fulfill its desires for food, power, and shiny things, made humorous by the MC's stupidity, ignorance, warped perspective, and peculiar luck.  

A word of caution: There is sex and general sexual themes despite the MC being essentially sexless.  Kinks are numerous and include socially unacceptable / illlegal activities (vore, tentacles, rape, futa, snuff, etc), and are usually expressed humorously and/or light-heartedly.  If that combination is likely to offend / scar you then avoid it.  The same applies to the non-sexual portions of the story (for instance, the MC nuking a town of 8000 can be played for laughs), but no one minds that.  

 By the Emperor's decre (Holy be his name) this is a sacred artifact from the age before his reign, His will has provided we NOT initiate exterminatus upon this.

AVE IMPERATOR!

(Story is good, expect some grimdark stuff, with just awesome comedy)

All the past review already explained how good this fiction is.  So i won't comment much about its greatness and no doubt on how it got on 'Popular this week' section'.

Do Emphashize on 'trap'. Everything in this story has its own trap and twist.

i really recommended this to those that like to read the different type of MC.

However for me, i can feel that i forcing myself to read this fiction because i don't like it. I just doesn't like how convenient for MC that the guild is incompetent. After reading a lot of fiction about dungeon and adventure guild, i really feel that the guild management in thsi fiction is really stupid and i can't fathom that. Too much convenient in this story.

This is just my own opinion, the very same person who cannot read the fiction if the MC is female or got gender bender genre.

So last word to author, keep on writing because your story is good. For those who like to read review first before read, give this story a chance. You will probably like it.

 good thing i got trapped by the title

Okay I admit I picked this book because well it was on chests but after reading the story I am feeling 2 things 

1. That I definitely falled for the author's trick and

2. I only regret that I didn't know about the story earlier.

It's an awesome story people should definitely read and as for the conclusion expect a lot about chests in this story

Too much porn with the dickgirls... interesting when you added it, but it takes up too much of a now non-existant plot, which sadly makes it just another porno. I had high hopes for this story, but I think it blew up with the city.

This story has a very nice build up, and it urges you to keep reading more and more. This story is the best example of how I imagine a royalroadl fiction. A rollercoaster of a bunch of wtf? 

The combination of humor/brutality and story pacing is just awesome! Thank you in advance for the further chapters you will be posting. I am writing this after chapter 6 of the chaos arc. This chapter made my day! This arc was the make or break arc of the story, you could have made this story go alot of ways, but you chose a perfect outcome for the pace of the story!

The only dislike I have is the mature scenes in your story are completely irrelevant. This is just my personal preference and i like that mature theme is just along for the ride and not the main story.

I wish you the best, and all the way to the top !

Thanks for the chapter.

Happy fourth month of birth Boxxy.

01/02/2017 - Death Comes in Many Shapes 4

Style: 4.5/5

There are no major issues that I recall here. The story flows very nicely and there are no major incidents of me wondering what is going on. While I remember the plot and events in the story if I'm not bothered by some of the more technical aspects of writing I don't remember them. Worst case scenerio there may be times the story is in first person and times the story is in third person, but within each section there are no major issues. Extremely solid overall.

Story: 4/5

Again this category is quite strong. The events that happen in the story follow a certain set of logic that applies within the story. The most glaring weakness here is that there is no obvious direction the story is going. Which is just to say it's something of a Slice-of-Life story, which while not bad will be off-putting for some. Another issue is the excess amount of sex between some of the characters. It falls in line with who they are and how they have been written but it could definitely be off-putting for some.

Grammar: 5/5

As one of my own weaker areas I can't say much other than that I haven't noticed any glaring grammatical errors or spelling mistakes.

Characters: 4/5

This is something of a mixed basket. The characters themselves are well thought, written and for the most part interesting. They have their own motivations and talents and while there are a few who could stand to be fleshed out a bit more, there seems to be a lot of time to get around to it. On a more negative front the main characters thus far are a vicious monster, a masochist, a self-proclaimed violent rapist, and something of a mind-broken exhibitionist. Obviously this story isn't going to be for everyone, but if you find those character descriptions amusing or otherwise interesting there is a decent chance you'll enjoy this story.

Overall: 4.5/5

At the end of the day the story is a fairly enjoyable LitRPG story with well thought out and written characters. There are no glaring grammar or style issues and the story progress at a decent pace in entertaining and often unexpected ways. I would recommend this to anyone who enjoys LitRPGs, has a slightly warped sense of humor, or is bored and looking for something to read.

This story is the best comedy story I have ever read.  The title is both misleading and completely accurate in the best way.  I was hesitant to read it at first becasue of the description but I took the risk and boy was it one of the better descisions i have made.  The authors use of multiple percpectives is flawless amking the story all about the main character even when its not the MCs POV.  Very few if any grammer mistakes and extremely well paced.