Rise of the Goblin Dungeon

by Daaki

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead Harem Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Sexual Content

Jason loved to play dungeon games. The feeling of power to govern over a kingdom of monsters brought him utter deligth. Now his dream will come true and he will become a Dungeon Lord himself. Will he prevail or will the self depicted Lord go under along with his new found home.

 


This is my first fiction and english is not my native. Just to have you warned. 

With this I want to do a little experiment, if anyone has an idea or wants to see something happen (for example some kind of monster or adventurer to show up etc) write in the comments and maybe I'll integrate it into the story if it fits.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Prolog ago
Chapter 1: God gave me a Tutorial ago
Chapter 2: A dance of goblins and snails...... ago
Chapter 3: The kitty and the dumb goblin ago
Chapter 4: Expand your dungeon, train your minions. The duties of a Dungeon Lord ago
Not a Chapter ago
Chapter 5: Progress, a surprising change and the madness of this world. ago
Chapter 6: Approaching crawlies ago
Chapter 7: Mashed, roasted, melted a hundred ways to prepare a spider buffet ago
Chapter 8: The calm after the spiderstorm and a huge feast. ago
Chapter 9: A different view, being kingly, a foodgasm and the enemies face. ago
Chapter 10: Plans, Smoke and Mana ! ago
Chapter 11: Smoked spider is served ! ago
Chapter 12: Yay... Guests ago
Chapter 13: Friends ? I guess? as long as they bring some sparklies with them... ago
Chapter 14: Hurray for more space and a lot of work. ago
Not a Chapter (Question to the readers) ago
Chapter 15: Knowledge is power ago
Chapter 16: Renewed passion and a weeks time can change a lot ago
Chapter 17: A interesting ambassador ago
Chapter 18: A trade completed and a new toy gained ago
Chapter 18,5: Break and rebuild your toy piece by piece ago
Chapter 19: The fate of every leader... meetings and organizing. ago
Chapter 20: Magic, dungeons and the laboratory. ago
Chapter 21: Scheming against a Schemer 101 always prepare a plan B ago
Chapter 21.5: The first sin, Lust ago
Chapter 21.6: Those in the shadow and those in the light ago
Chapter 22: A pet reborn and a headache ensuing ago
Chapter 23: A blushing ninja and the Dungeon Lords grade ago
Chapter 24: Enjoying the gifts of a good grade ago
Anouncement !! ago
First poll for the new Story ago
Prologue (Rewritten) ago
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Toralk
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There have been a lot of Reborn as a Dungeon stories lately, but this one stands out for 2 reasons.

1) Monsters aren't made full grown from mana, they have to be captured, born, or evolved.  That makes for more of a smooth growth in power instead of the sudden big power-ups that have annoyed me in other dungeon stories.

2) He actually talks to people.  No fairy shows up and tells him he has to pretend to be a normal mindless dungeon to virtually everyone.  You get normal character development without the need for adventurer side characters for once.

Aside from that, an easy to understand writting style and relatively few typos.  Characters don't have much depth yet, but hopefully that will change once more of them evolve.

Deminera
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Dungeon lore on the right track!

So far (chapter 10) it's an entertaining read. The main character is for ones the Anti-hero MC which fits in with a dungeon theme.

Story: It's an easy to understand story. Still in the pre story part but things are starting to happen.

Characters: The main character stays true to the Neutral-Evil alignment so far, doing whatever he sees fit and it works. The support cast have few spotlights so far but they are there and development is seen.

Grammar: There are no major error that is of concern for the reader as I see it. But there still is grammar to fix Mr.Daaki ;)

 

The book has a long way to go, but the start is good and the author seems to know what he’s doing. It's so far, an unpolished gem. But give it a try and support the author in any way you see fit.

iwannabeatiger
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Author needs to use spell check or get an editor

I'm enjoying the story but I keep seeing obvious spelling errors that any spell checker should catch.

I may or may not be capitalized and there are plenty of obvious spelling errors. Spaces between the end of the sentence and the punctuation as well.

 

I've finished up to chapter 9 but the spelling errors and punctuation are too distracting for me to enjoy.

Jevs
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This is NOT a ripoff of slime dungeon, it is in fact a complete original story.  It is in fact a really good read, the MC is in fact a refreshingly evil (but likeable) sort of chap.  I am looking forward to every new chapter, just hoping that is good as the others and so far I haven't been disappointed.

Hexwolfx
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Its been weeks sich your last ch I really like reading your series plz update it with a new ch

Booksbanchou
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I gave it a 4.5 for one very specific reason. It does not have 5,733 chapters. 

 

I love the story, it's hard to find a good dungeon story. Ignore any hate forever and never stop. 

Charles83
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This series is quite good, It is funny in some ways and it is quite appropiate in how the world is build and how everything relates together

 

About Style: I think the style of the writter fit the story quite well.

About Grammar: I haven't found any major error of issue that made me stop reading, if there were any mistakes they were so minor as to be ignored.

About Story: at the time of this review (chapter 8) we are still on the introduction phase of the story and so far it looks good, obviously not much development but that will come on the future.

About Character: The main character is well written and so far he looks neutral, more like a modern man, the supporting cast is well written and they join the story very well and it is quite nice.

Personal Opinion: so far the story is great, very neutral, I do like it a lot.

whomightub3
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Love dungeon stories, keep up the good work! Author remembers to space out dungeon growth with character interactions and combat. Not megalomaniac "doom and gloom" like a lot of these stories have been going lately. Wouldn't mind seeing the author attempt to shoe-horn in some modern conviences for the goblins. Many of the smaller facets of life are glossed over or ignored completely.

Magstzerp
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I cant wait for the next one.

Nice!

aporou99
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I like your story but you must make the story a bit detail about they activities or more conversation between the goblin and MC so we the readers know what the goblin thingking about they new lord..

Then make the MC grow more smart and strategic in the battle it's okay if he grow slowly but don't to slow alright ??.. 

More evolution please i would like to see how the evolution progress from the goblin or  the kitty and the other beings too .

So far your story is good i hope your fix your grammar and the story pace don't to fast thanks.. JBU