Indeed I wished to be in a Fantasy world of swords and magic.
Indeed I wished to transmigrate in a body of a beautiful lady.
Indeed I wished to be exceptional.
But--- why did it have to be like this?!
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I think the author had accomplished what many failed to achieve. The decision making of the protagonist was believable. We saw her concern, her wants, what she dislikes, and that is what makes this story seems special: the protagonist and her decision making. The protagonist seems strong yet weak. I am just a reader but I want to root for her to gain more power, to gain safety, and to be happy. In conclusion, this story has great potential. The characters are good, the story is good, style is easy to understand, and grammar is okay. I hope this story will be on the long run since I put this into my favorite list.
I love it already
please continue with it
I love this story so far and it looks like it will keep getting better, keep em chapters coming. :)
My only problem this far is the grammar, it’s understandable but there is a lot of minor mistakes and some that completely change the meaning of the sentence(I found it quite obvious that it was a mistake when this was done).
Here’s an example(in bold, rest is context, no clue how to change colour in a review) from the latest chapter I read, very minor spoiler.
"You... You seem familiar." He crinkled his brows as he intently stared at my head.
'Stop it, I look like a goddamn middle-aged man now! What kind of cringes are you bringing?!'
"No, this one has a face that could be found anywhere so I doubt esteemed one has mistaken?" The middle-aged old man cautiously said, but soon his body quivered, he hastily bowed his head lower and said:
I like the story a lot so keep up the good work.
- I think is gender bender story