I will absolutely cultivate

I will absolutely cultivate

by phantomhive17

Warning This fiction contains:
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Indeed I wished to be in a Fantasy world of swords and magic.

Indeed I wished to transmigrate in a body of a beautiful lady.

Indeed I wished to be exceptional.

But--- why did it have to be like this?!

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Prolouge: Cheng Rui Wei ago
Chapter 1: In a pinch. ago
Chapter 2: Ice ago
Chapter 3: The concerned maid. ago
Chapter 4: Let's have a good talk ago
Chapter 5: Ruzi ago
Chapter 6: The Horror ago
Chapter 7: Lost ago
Chapter 8: Plans ago
Chapter 9: Faking Death ago
Chapter 10: Saving Lily ago
Chapter 11: The rumors ago
Chapter 12: Sona ago
Chapter 13: Cleaning up, before leaving ago
Chapter 14: The borderline ago
Chapter 15: The Borderline II ago
Chapter 16: Visitors ago
Chapter 17: To Dragonsvein Kingdom I ago
Chapter 18: To Dragonsvein Kingdom II ago
Chapter 19: Arriving at the Dragonsvein Kingdom. ago
Cultivation Ranks ago
Chapter 20: The Seed of Trouble ago
Chapter 21: The Dragon Temple ago
Chapter 22: Sona's Weapon ago
Chapter 23: Sona's Weapon (2) ago
Chapter 24: Fight ago
Chapter 25: Sona's distress ago
Chapter 26: Must Handle ago
Chapter 27: Elder Cao ago
Chapter 28: An acquaintance ago
Chapter 29: Zu Clan's Matriarch ago
Chapter 30: The Play ago
Chapter 31: Amusing ago
Chapter 32: Hide and Seek (1) ago
Chapter 33: Hide and Seek (2) ago
Chapter 34: You Again?! ago
34.5 : Training ago
Chapter 35: Onto the Jianghu! ago
Chapter 36: The Road Ahead ago
Chapter 37: A Peaceful day ago
Chapter 38: To get a Snow Leopard ago
Chapter 39: How To Get In Trouble 101 ago
Chapter 40: That Lady ago
Chapter 41: Is this the luck of a Protagonist? ago

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Baka Captain
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I think the author had accomplished what many failed to achieve. The decision making of the protagonist was believable. We saw her concern, her wants, what she dislikes, and that is what makes this story seems special: the protagonist and her decision making. The protagonist seems strong yet weak. I am just a reader but I want to root for her to gain more power, to gain safety, and to be happy. In conclusion, this story has great potential. The characters are good, the story is good, style is easy to understand, and grammar is okay. I hope this story will be on the long run since I put this into my favorite list.

Amethyst Saphire
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I love it already

please continue with it

Triton
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I love this story so far and it looks like it will keep getting better, keep em chapters coming. :)

Fallion
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Good story, not so good grammar.

The story is good, nothing in particular to note about the style which I see as a positive and while the MC isn’t the most interesting character ever there haven’t really been anything I found annoying about her either.

My only problem this far is the grammar, it’s understandable but there is a lot of minor mistakes and some that completely change the meaning of the sentence(I found it quite obvious that it was a mistake when this was done).

Here’s an example(in bold, rest is context, no clue how to change colour in a review) from the latest chapter I read, very minor spoiler.

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LordPurah
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I like the story a lot so keep up the good work.

hunterxsamurai
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  1. I think is gender bender story