Money Grubbing Demon Lord

by Evil Ginger

A short story based in a fantasy world with Heroes, Demons, and lots of money!

 

Completed, with 13 Chapters and a Prologue at about 500 ~ 600 words per chapter.

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Evil Ginger

Evil Ginger

Lover of Mac and Cheese

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Miri-Bell
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A decently written story about a pragmatic greedy demon lord. Well done.

Mideanon
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i r8 it 8/8

 

the story follows a demon lord who needs to make a lot of money.

because he is diffrent from other demon lords fun stuff happens.

the story is well written and perfect for the short format. dont expect a 20000000 million page novel here.

fanobody
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Good short story that is finished. A proof that a story greatnest is not defined by its length but by its quality.

Saphyron
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Boring and way too fast paced

As the title states the story is boring to read, and way too fast paced. The chapters are too small.

I would not recommend it to anyone.