Vast Martial World

by puddles4263

"What? A simulation based on asian webnovels? I don't know man, I like sims but...

Resource management? Limited influence? An incredibly reactive AI?

I mean that sounds great, but...

Alright, I'll try it, but since you were beta, you need to give me all the tips you know.

What's it called again? Vast Martial World...? Ugh, let's get this over with..."

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A very interesting, and might I say, innovative twist on wuxia/xianxia as well as gaming. This story has a lot of potential and I am sincerely, GENUINELY hoping for its blossom into a RoyalRoadL classic. It has so much potential, that I sincerely hope won't be wasted :D

Well, considering that Mr. Puddles is the author of The Great Tower, I'm expecting a lot of dedication, so expect a lot of support from me as well :D (I love this story about as much (or maybe more) than the Great Tower~ the turtles are all so kawaiiii~)

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I remeber when you first wrote this and I want so badly to see more.  It'll get a perfect score once it comes back from haitus.  Anyway thank you for all your hard work on your other stories and you'll always be my favorite author.

 

-Some fan boy