No Longer a Game

by Samzen

Original HIATUS Adventure Fantasy Romance LitRPG Male Lead Virtual Reality

Chaos Online is heralded as the first 'Hardcore' VRMMORPG. Pain conversion is set at a staggering 75%, and graphical fidelity has been pushed to the limits without any censorship whatsoever. 'Who wants to feel their skin melt from dragon fire?' some asked as they dismissed it. Despite the popular belief that no one would play a game so close to reality, Chaos Online sold millions on the first day. Fight. Suffer. Win. Welcome to Chaos Online.

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Azumera
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Excellent novel, the author truly prowess his talent on this one

I've been reading every story here in this site and I can say that this story has the most clever prologue ever. I really didn't expect the plot twist. It was ugh. The plot was well made. I noticed that there is a review that says that the author forces the romance part in the story, but it doesn't seem that he author does. 

 

As a fan of many slice of life genre anime, novels, and manga, I can say that the story is really well made. I like how the author describes the feelings and emotions of the characters. 

 

The fast updates is also a point to look at. 

 

This novel deserves the top 10 rank. 

 

To show my support for this author I will link his story in my signature.

 

hoho. (currently reading mushoku tensei light novel)

 

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5/5 stars

androg
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Good until Chapter 10, waiting for more.

I'll not pretend I know how to judge Grammar or Style, so my score is based solely on the Story.

 

I have read until Chapter 10, and it is still the training phase... Nice foreshadowing with many things to look forward to, when MC finishes his training. He may become extremely OP, and that isn't necessary a bad thing... MCs are always OP in some ways...

 

For me, I think this story up till now is very good and will give a 5/5.

Will be waiting for more chapters and see if the adventuring phase match up to the training one...  Keep up the good work.

Techman
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One of the best stories I've read on here. I was expecting a grimdark gorefest from the blurb, but it's so much better than that. The MC grows into a powerful warrior and champion of a forgotten goddess. The world, both in game and out of game, is well developed. Bummer it's on hiatus, but glad I found it.

Psiioniic
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Rare Item Found: | Well Written Story |

Real shame that this story is on an indefinite hiatus. The author took a good, simple concept and honed it into an entertaining story. The writing style is excellent, and aside from the occasional spelling error the grammar flows with a degree of finesse that ventures into the realm of professional writers. Characters are well fleshed out with clear motivations and backgrounds which are used to intuitively guide the reader into making their own assumptions without the need to provide verbatim descriptions of every detail. The writing style shows great fluidity, incorporating the protagonists main viewpoint with a smattering of viewpoints from accompanying characters and random onlookers to great effect. A good read, and worth the time even if the author never plans on continuing it.

AomineZaky
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Can't wait for more updates :3

Brilliant. The only pain is the absence of updates. Grammatical errors are few and they are mostly just your standard typo. If this ever gets updated again, you can bet your ass I'm gonna reread this from start to finish again :3

ksin
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BY AOMINEZAKY 7/15/2016, 11:01:36 PM
Brilliant. The only pain is the absence of updates. Grammatical errors are few and they are mostly just your standard typo. If this ever gets updated again, you can bet your ass I'm gonna reread this from start to finish again :3

 

More yes it's a great story.

Encroaching Death
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I really enjoyed this fiction and hope everyone else does to. It is obvious that author sama put a lot of work into it. Honestly I went through each page and couldn't find a fault so nice job Sazmen

Ramenn
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Man, this is fucking incredible.

it draw me in, took my breath away.

the way you potrait your plot and character is very good.

My favorite story so far.

I just hope there will be no NTR. Well, I'm not against it as long as it's the MC that doing the NTR, not the otherway.

 

vinzzz001
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Slow updates, but the author brings quality instead of quantity.

Runar
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Just re-read it again after taking a break from it due to slow release but boy was it worth it. It starts with the confident, overly competent young man with the world at his fingertips, but due to huge set back struggle with the simplest things. and when he gets chance to shine in virtual reality you actually make him train hand have some flaws which is refreshing. Potential for a good romantic subplot but if going for harem, really flesh out the story and motivations behind it realistically. Overall very good story, still on a small scale world wise but great potential for future.