Unlimited Wishes. (Re-write)

by RedDragonyte13

Original HIATUS Action Comedy Fantasy LitRPG Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Slice of Life
Warning This fiction contains:
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My name's Vincent Heflin, god accidently summoned me, hoping I'd be a hot babe... he was quite obviously, dissapointed, so to get me the hell out of there, he asked me what wish I would like, and I chose Unlimited Wishes, and he accidently agreed... so, now I have a lot of power, and a lot of fun is to be had :D

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You just dont do that

If a character complains about something the whole time and has the means to easlily fix what troubles him yet refuses to do so at any time then you got a bad novel.

I cannot stress just how annoying this can be i wanted to give this novel the lowest score possible but surely its still a novel yet the whole premise rests on the Mc having 142 IQ yet being beyond retarded.