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An interplanetary and introspective journey in the far reaches of the system, come and join our eccentric crew as they explore what it means to be human. Amidst crazy creations and a few awkward moments, can everyone keep a level head?
[18+]Sexual Themes... Occasionally.
Oh, and mild course language.
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The story is pretty good, as is the writing style and grammar, only a few hiccups here and there.
What spoiled the reading experience for me, however, is the ambiguity of the author in regards to the use of pronouns.
By constantly using "they/their" for the protagonist it is very difficult to visualize what's happening and immerse myself into the story.
Using "They" is fine in cases where the gender is simply unkown, but using it for the entirety of the story simply sounds stupid.
Even if a protagonist is able change their gender (see, this is the correct usage of this pronoun), the used pronoun should always match whatever gender something or someone is.
If you still want to give it a read, be my guest and go ahead, should you also have trouble with those pronouns, just follow the law of the internet where everything you don't know the gender of (and probably even more), is male and replace the pronouns in your head.
although I haven't read this,but for some reason the novel don't have a single review when there are more than 100k view right here ?,and it aready more than 100 chapter ? ,oh well,just left this here to suppor author