Wrath: The Controversial Astral God
by OneAbove
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In a world where the only thing that someone can rely on are strength and mind, where ancient souls and spirits give power to the living. A boy born from nothing, starting with nothing, without desires is placed in a situation where a traitor from his new adoptive family made him lose everything again and for his and his new master sake, the search for power is his only goal.
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Good start.
Kinda need to read a few chapters to complete this review though...
Okey read the prologue, so far it looks promising. Author picked a good for nothing so we can all relate... does some forshadowing... explains the ranking system after there was a mentioning of it in the story.. the basics are there.
Onward to the rest of the story!
Bad grammar and dull
Learn to write in English I get it not being your first language but word would fix all your problems grammerly to I would almost rather read Machine translation this is laziness pure and simple if you can put up with terrible grammar then go for it I won’t bother nothing in it is particularly interesting