Mythran's Master Of All - Continued (Completed!)

Mythran's Master Of All - Continued (Completed!)

by Bokuboy

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This started out as Mythran's property. It's a tribute to his story and I wanted to continue Ren's tale. The first 16 chapters by Mythran are here: Master Of All, Jack Of None  Please Note: This story has been completed at 10,010 pages or 2,752,750 words, Dec. 7th, 2018 (Previous records of 2 million March 31st 2018, First record of 1 million on May 30th, 2017)
17 year old Ren Haddon hasn’t had an easy life. His drug addict parents used him as a lab rat and left him almost crippled for life. After they were caught, he went on to spend his life in the hospital. Under constant care, the white walls of his room was all he knew... until that day. That fateful day his name was drawn out from millions of others to receive a one of a kind class in the new virtual world game called F.L.O.W. (‘Fantasy Life Online World’). These are his adventures.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 17 - Aftermath ago
Chapter 18 - What Happened? ago
Chapter 19 - Ren... The Hero? ago
Chapter 20 - Out Of The Frying Pan ago
Chapter 21 - Into The Fire ago
Chapter 22 - Sally's Surprise ago
Chapter 23 - The Field ago
Chapter 24 - A Forgotten Friend ago
Chapter 25 - The Party ago
Chapter 26 - The Hospital ago
Chapter 27 - The After Party ago
Chapter 28 - Opportunity Knocks ago
Chapter 29 - Into The Wild ago
Chapter 30 - The Wild ago
Chapter 31 - The Homestead ago
Chapter 32 - Is That A Clue? ago
Chapter 33 - A Loophole? ago
Chapter 34 - In A Hurry ago
Chapter 35 - To The Rescue ago
Chapter 36 - Did I Do That? ago
Chapter 37 - Revelation ago
Chapter 38 - There's More ago
Chapter 39 - The Cleanup ago
Chapter 40 - A Normal Day ago
Chapter 41 - This Is My Life ago
Chapter 42 - Basic Labor ago
Chapter 43 - Timber! ago
Chapter 44 - Hard At Work ago
Chapter 45 - Decorations ago
Chapter 46 - The Gift ago
Chapter 47 - The Surprise ago
Chapter 48 - Nice Boots ago
Chapter 49 - A Confession ago
Chapter 50 - Some Advise ago
Chapter 51 - Surprise! ago
Chapter 52 - Healing x2 ago
Chapter 53 - The Trip Back ago
Chapter 54 - Done Travelling ago
Chapter 55 - Saying Goodbye ago
Chapter 56 - Shopping (New Arc) ago
Chapter 57 - The Sage Of Ages ago
Chapter 58 - The Forge ago
Chapter 59 - Just In Time ago
Chapter 60 - Donan's Teachings ago
Chapter 61 - A New Item! ago
Chapter 62 - Let Them Eat Cake ago
Chapter 63 - Another Order? ago
Chapter 64 - Back At The Mines ago
Chapter 65 - Ore Delivery ago
Chapter 66 - Captain of the Guard ago
Chapter 67 - A Quick Encounter ago
Chapter 68 - Another Day, Another Tool ago
Chapter 69 - To The Bow Trees! ago
Chapter 70 - Whaaaaat?!? ago
Chapter 71 - A Night In Jail ago
Chapter 72 - Sweet Freedom ago
Chapter 73 - Consequences ago
Chapter 74 - Miss Woodworker ago
Chapter 75 - It's Almost Done ago
Chapter 76 - Let It Begin ago
Chapter 77 - Making Furniture ago
Chapter 78 - A New Friend ago
Chapter 79 - Can You Cook? ago
Chapter 80 - Bow Bracers ago
Chapter 81 - Cooking Up A Storm ago
Chapter 82 - Gathering Supplies ago
Chapter 83 - A New Mount ago
Chapter 84 - The Journey Starts ago
Chapter 85 - A Taste Of Dwarf Life ago
Chapter 86 - A Misunderstanding ago
Chapter 87 - The Duel ago
Chapter 88 - Teach Me, Nathalia ago
Chapter 89 - House Neram ago
Chapter 90 - The Fine ago
Chapter 91 - The Date ago
Chapter 92 - Oh, Baby! (Explicit Content) ago
Chapter 93 - Unexpected Visitors ago
Chapter 94 - A New Uniform ago
Chapter 95 - The First Day ago
Chapter 96 - The First Order ago
Chapter 97 - The Commander Knows All ago
Chapter 98 - Hello, Ruck! ago
Chapter 99 - House Faldihr ago
Chapter 100 - Discharged ago
Chapter 101 - A Taste of Stone ago
Chapter 102 - Not You, Too! ago
Chapter 103 - In All Honesty ago
Chapter 104 - Camping Out ago
Chapter 105 - What's Everyone Doing? ago
Chapter 106 - A Good Discovery ago
Chapter 107 - Back To House Neram ago
Chapter 108 - Ordering Stuff ago
Chapter 109 - Trading For Ideas ago
Chapter 110 - General Information ago
Chapter 111 - Getting Ready ago
Chapter 112 - Deliveries ago
Chapter 113 - A Job Offer ago
Chapter 114 - End Of The Day ago
Chapter 115 - The Next Morning ago
Chapter 116 - A Bit Too Much ago
Chapter 117 - Repercussions ago
Chapter 117 A - The Condom (Some Explicit Content) ago
Chapter 118 - Back To Work ago
Chapter 119 - A New Title ago
Chapter 120 - A Library? ago
Chapter 121 - Building Shelves ago
Chapter 122 - A Banquet ago
Chapter 123 - You've Been Shelved ago
Chapter 124 - Caught ago
Chapter 125 - There She Is! ago
Chapter 126 - A Little Too Much ago
Chapter 127 - I Can Explain ago
Chapter 128 - One After The Other (Explicit Content) ago
Chapter 129 - Back To The House ago
Chapter 130 - Barracks? ago
Chapter 131 - A Different Job ago
Chapter 132 - The Hole ago
Chapter 133 - That Was Quick ago
Chapter 134 - And The Winner Is... ago
Chapter 135 - A Farmer Visits ago
Chapter 136 - It Still Floats ago
Chapter 137 - Cat Fight! ago
Chapter 138 - Time To Relax ago
Chapter 139 - Task Complete ago
Chapter 140 - The Fire Realm ago
Chapter 141 - The Showdown ago
Chapter 142 - Fire Good! ago
Chapter 143 - Send In The Troops ago
Chapter 144 - The Council ago
Chapter 145 - Picked Up ago
Chapter 146 - Running Errands ago
Chapter 147 - Setting Things Up ago
Chapter 148 - Holy Crap! ago
Chapter 149 - Start Shoveling ago
Chapter 150 - It Comes ago
Chapter 151 - Get To Work! ago
Chapter 152 - Finish The Day ago
Chapter 152A - Both (Explicit Content) ago
Chapter 153 - Print That ago
Chapter 154 - Hello, Doggie! ago
Chapter 155 - It's Mine! ago
Chapter 156 - You Didn't! ago
Chapter 157 - Fire Bad! ago
Chapter 158 - You're Mine ago
Chapter 159 - It's Over ago
Chapter 160 - Until She's Full ago
Chapter 161 - Hello, My Lord ago
Chapter 162 - To The Village ago
Chapter 163 - Patty Cake ago
Chapter 164 - Remember Me? ago
Chapter 165 - For The People ago
Chapter 165A - Ma'am! Yes, Ma'am! (Explicit Content) ago
Chapter 166 - Castle Panic ago
Chapter 167 - Found Them ago
Chapter 168 - An Old Friend ago
Chapter 169 - No. Just no. ago
Chapter 170 - Suzie Like! ago
Chapter 170A - Shower (Slightly Explicit) ago
Chapter 171 - Now They Know ago
Chapter 172 - Is That All? ago
Chapter 173 - Let Me Drive ago
Chapter 174 - It's So Fluffy ago
Chapter 175 - Oops! ago
Chapter 176 - On His Way To The Mines ago
Chapter 177 - Bracelet Of Enforcement ago
Chapter 178 - Did That Just Happen? ago
Chapter 179 - You Did What? ago
Chapter 180 - Oathbreaker ago
Chapter 181 - The Convent ago
Chapter 182 - Work It Out ago
Chapter 183 - Will That Work? ago
Chapter 184 - The Talk ago
Chapter 185 - Lord Eric ago
Chapter 186 - I'd Buy That For A Dollar ago
Chapter 187 - Innocence Lost (Slightly Explicit) ago
Chapter 188 - Come In, It's Open ago
Chapter 189 - Tuned In ago
Chapter 190 - Love And Understanding ago
Chapter 191 - The Secret's Out ago
Chapter 192 - Congratulations! It's A Mine! ago
Chapter 193 - Selling and Buying ago
Chapter 194 - Attacked ago
Chapter 195 - Making Plans ago
Chapter 196 - It's A What? ago
Chapter 197 - Discussions ago
Chapter 198 - Uh Oh! ago
Chapter 199 - I Did It Again ago
Chapter 200 - Nathalia Is Here, Part One ago
Chapter 201 - Nathalia Is Here, Part Two ago
Chapter 202 - Nathalia Is Here, Part Three ago
Chapter 203 - For Me? ago
Chapter 204 - Poor Bonnie ago
Chapter 205 - Poor Ren ago
Chapter 206 - Investigations ago
Chapter 207 - A New Quest ago
Chapter 208 - Prepped And Ready ago
Chapter 209 - Giant Problems ago
Chapter 210 - Let's Go Home ago
Chapter 211 - I Just Want To Talk ago
Chapter 212 - Giant Repercussions ago
Chapter 213 - So That's Why ago
Chapter 214 - The Plan ago
Chapter 215 - The Pit Trap ago
Chapter 216 - Did That Just Happen? ago
Chapter 217 - Real Life? No Problem ago
Chapter 218 - Oh, For Loot's Sake! ago
Chapter 219 - More Giant Problems ago
Chapter 220 - A Big Help ago
Chapter 221 - Out Of Proportions ago
Chapter 222 - Camp Giant ago
Chapter 223 - Help Me! ago
Chapter 224 - Pleasant Memories ago
Chapter 225 - It's Magic ago
Chapter 226 - I See You ago
Chapter 227 - Episode Two ago
Chapter 227A - Almost (Explicit Content) ago
Chapter 228 - Girlfriend ago
Chapter 229 - French Toast ago
Chapter 230 - Pen Play ago
Chapter 231 - A New Book ago
Chapter 232 - Not Now! ago
Chapter 233 - Warnings ago
Chapter 234 - High Elves ago
Chapter 235 - Confrontations ago
Chapter 236 - A Broken Promise ago
Chapter 237 - Home? ago
Chapter 238 - Checking Things ago
Chapter 239 - Fill Her Up ago
Chapter 240 - Into The Dark ago
Chapter 241 - The Gift That Keeps On Giving ago
Chapter 242 - Show-Off ago
Chapter 243 - Time Away ago
Chapter 244 - Stella Says Play ago
Chapter 245 - Studio Time ago
Chapter 246 - Searching ago
Chapter 247 - Dinner Date ago
Chapter 248 - Offers ago
Chapter 249 - Window Dressing ago
Chapter 250 - Stained Glass ago
Chapter 251 - Physical Problems ago
Chapter 252 - An Inquiry ago
Chapter 253 - Early Warning ago
Chapter 254 - Preparation G ago
Chapter 255 - I Want That ago
Chapter 256 - Episode 3 ago
Chapter 257 - A Good Distraction ago
Chapter 258 - A Treat For You ago
Chapter 259 - She Likes It ago
Chapter 259A - The Closet ago
Chapter 260 - Not Again ago
Chapter 261 - Something New ago
Chapter 262 - Crafting Galore ago
Chapter 263 - To Give Is To Get ago
Chapter 264 - Recruitment ago
Chapter 265 - Grinding Away ago
Chapter 266 - Here They Come ago
Chapter 267 - Help Them! ago
Chapter 268 - Last Of The Prizes ago
Chapter 269 - Un-Freaking-Believable ago
Chapter 270 - Under My Command ago
Chapter 271 - This Is Teepo ago
Chapter 272 - Stella's Place ago
Chapter 273 - Mixing Business and Pleasure ago
Chapter 274 - Do It! ago
Chapter 275 - Food For Thought ago
Chapter 276 - Having Fun ago
Chapter 276A - Police Play (Explicit) ago
Chapter 277 - Two Heads Are Better Than One ago
Chapter 278 - Trouble With Ereka ago
Chapter 279 - First Supply Delivery ago
Chapter 280 - I Could Use That ago
Chapter 281 - Assault on Castle Black ago
Chapter 282 - Hard Fought ago
Chapter 283 - Cleaning Up ago
Chapter 284 - Another Surprising Discovery ago
Chapter 285 - They Are Loot ago
Chapter 286 - To The House ago
Chapter 287 - The New House ago
Chapter 288 - Accepting Gifts ago
Chapter 289 - Water Play ago
Chapter 290 - Something For Tommy ago
Chapter 291 - Put A Bow On It ago
Chapter 292 - Getting Ready To Party ago
Chapter 293 - The Award ago
Chapter 294 - Issues ago
Chapter 295 - A Hasty Retreat ago
Chapter 296 - Rampage ago
Chapter 297 - Load Me Up ago
Chapter 298 - Special Delivery ago
Chapter 299 - Almost Done ago
Chapter 300 - Saying Goodbye ago
Chapter 301 - Cast Off ago
Chapter 302 - Job's Done ago
Chapter 303 - Lisa's Visit ago
Chapter 304 - Lisa's Visit Part 2 ago
Chapter 305 - Getting Back To It ago
Chapter 306 - A Slight Interlude ago
Chapter 307 - The Ship: Part One ago
Chapter 308 - The Ship: Part Two ago
Chapter 309 - The Ship: Part Three ago
Chapter 310 - Engine Trouble ago
Chapter 311 - Shoal Island ago
Chapter 312 - Water is Right ago
Chapter 313 - What's Next? ago
Chapter 314 - High Expectations ago
Chapter 315 - Room To Move ago
Chapter 315A - Redhead Fever ago
Chapter 316 - Here We Are ago
Chapter 317 - Moving On Up ago
Chapter 318 - Mi Casa ago
Chapter 319 - Es Su Casa ago
Chapter 320 - Royal Treatment ago
Chapter 321 - Exponential Enchanting ago
Chapter 322 - A Little Bit More ago
Chapter 323 - Almost Home ago
Chapter 324 - On The Shore ago
Chapter 325 - In Aurora Again ago
Chapter 326 - The Tour ago
Chapter 327 - To Clint's Ranch ago
Chapter 328 - Hanging Out With The Guys ago
Chapter 329 - The Pink Pearl ago
Chapter 330 - Take Me Home ago
Chapter 331 - Unleashed ago
Chapter 332 - Purr-fect Timing ago
Chapter 333 - A Brief Break ago
Chapter 334 - Settling Things ago
Chapter 334A - Anabelle's Fulfillment ago
Chapter 335 - I'll Try That ago
Chapter 336 - A Bit Of Bonding ago
Chapter 337 - Caravan Version 2 ago
Chapter 338 - Walin County ago
Chapter 339 - Can We Build It? ago
Chapter 340 - Meet The Parents ago
Chapter 341 - A Promise Is A Promise ago
Chapter 342 - On Our Way ago
Chapter 343 - To The Capital ago
Chapter 344 - The Gathering ago
Chapter 345 - Blowback ago
Chapter 346 - That Was Quick ago
Chapter 347 - She Wants That ago
Chapter 348 - Shopping At The Capital ago
Chapter 349 - A Slight Grievance ago
Chapter 350 - Fight Or Flight ago
Chapter 351 - Comforting Words ago
Chapter 352 - Can You Resist Change? ago
Chapter 353 - For The People ago
Chapter 354 - A New Way ago
Chapter 355 - Blow On This ago
Chapter 356 - Change Can Be Good ago
Chapter 357 - The Mayor ago
Chapter 358 - Don't Bug Me ago
Chapter 359 - Do This For Me ago
Chapter 360 - More Than Words ago
Chapter 361 - It's Building Time ago
Chapter 362 - Rush Hour ago
Chapter 363 - Healing Hands ago
Chapter 364 - Delivered Problem ago
Chapter 365 - No Holds Barred ago
Chapter 366 - Mayor Duties ago
Chapter 367 - Teach Me ago
Chapter 368 - A Good Day ago
Chapter 369 - Teaser ago
Chapter 370 - Gutter Ball ago
Chapter 370A - Bathroom Break (Explicit Content) ago
Chapter 371 - Gloria, Come On Over ago
Chapter 372 - In The Pool ago
Chapter 373 - Just A Friendly Visit ago
Chapter 374 - Food With Friends ago
Chapter 375 - Discussion ago
Chapter 376 - Episode Four ago
Chapter 377 - Getting Ready To Party ago
Chapter 378 - Deep Learning ago
Chapter 379 - Clint's Ranch Again ago
Chapter 380 - Party Quest ago
Chapter 381 - It's Time To Party ago
Chapter 382 - The Hunt ago
Chapter 383 - The Cause ago
Chapter 384 - Have A Drink ago
Chapter 385 - I Agree ago
Chapter 386 - Royal Consort ago
Chapter 386A - The Royal Bed Chamber ago
Chapter 387 - Going Back ago
Chapter 388 - Oil's Well That Ends Well ago
Chapter 389 - A Clean Sweep ago
Chapter 390 - Get Them! ago
Chapter 391 - Deal With It ago
Chapter 392 - A Real Deal ago
Chapter 392-B - Sexy But Not Too Sexy ago
Chapter 393 - Quest Complete? ago
Chapter 394 - New Residents ago
Chapter 395 - Take A Nap ago
Chapter 396 - Don't Make Me Mad ago
Chapter 397 - Monstrous Truth ago
Chapter 398 - Make Work Not Problems ago
Chapter 399 - Good Intentions ago
Chapter 400 - Pleasure Palace ago
Chapter 401 - Dance Off! ago
Chapter 402 - Bouncers ago
Chapter 402A - Jennifer's Joy (EXPLICIT CONTENT) ago
Chapter 403 - Up And Running ago
Chapter 404 - A Good Talk ago
Chapter 405 - In The Hospital ago
Chapter 406 - Home Sweet Home Version 2 ago
Chapter 407 - Acceptance ago
Chapter 408 - What's this? ago
Chapter 409 - Shargon Caverns ago
Chapter 410 - Abyssals, Terrorize! ago
Chapter 411 - Hello? I Need Information ago
Chapter 412 - I Met Another One ago
Chapter 413 - Spirit Of Earth ago
Chapter 414 - New Friends? ago
Chapter 415 - Taste This ago
Chapter 416 - Working Things Out ago
Chapter 417 - Rest And Relax ago
Chapter 418 - Let's Go This Way ago
Chapter 419 - Ren Smash! ago
Chapter 420 - I've Got This ago
Chapter 421 - Cuddle Me ago
Chapter 422 - A Necessary Warning ago
Chapter 423 - Build Me A Bridge ago
Chapter 424 - Now You See Me ago
Chapter 425 - Homemaker ago
Chapter 426 - Sweet Nectar ago
Chapter 427 - Kamikaze? ago
Chapter 428 - Pledge Problem ago
Chapter 429 - Discovery ago
Chapter 430 - You Know Me ago
Chapter 431 - Hugs Are Always Welcome ago
Chapter 432 - You've Got The Touch ago
Chapter 433 - You've Got The Power ago
Chapter 434 - Here I Am ago
Chapter 435 - The One That You Love ago
Chapter 436 - Moments Like These ago
Chapter 436A - I Found You (EXPLICIT CONTENT) ago
Chapter 437 - Offers ago
Chapter 438 - Unbelievable ago
Chapter 439 - Worth A Kiss ago
Chapter 440 - Xuunah, Ren Hunter ago
Chapter 440A - Merry-Go-Round - EXPLICIT ago
Chapter 441 - Is That All? ago
Chapter 442 - What A Deal ago
Chapter 443 - Not Kid Stuff ago
Chapter 444 - Mirror, Mirror ago
Chapter 445 - It Was Dark, Now There's Light ago
Chapter 446 - Like An Angel ago
Chapter 447 - A Solution ago
Chapter 448 - Light Shines Not So Brightly ago
Chapter 449 - Reassurances ago
Chapter 450 - Moving Day: Part One ago
Chapter 450 S - The 'S' Stands For Spoon! ago
Chapter 451 - A Beacon Of Light ago
Chapter 452 - Moving Day Part Two ago
Chapter 453 - Moving Day Part Three ago
Chapter 454 - Like A Rock ago
Chapter 455 - No One To Blame But Ourselves ago
Chapter 456 - Sharing Is Caring ago
Chapter 457 - What's In The Box? ago
Chapter 458 - Armor Me Up! ago
Chapter 459 - Fully Armored ago
Chapter 460 - On Their Way ago
Chapter 461 - Saving The High Elves ago
Chapter 462 - Say Hi To The High Elves ago
Chapter 463 - All In A Day's Work ago
Chapter 464 - Honor Duel ago
Chapter 465 - Spending My Time Wisely ago
Chapter 466 - No One Talks About Fight Club ago
Chapter 467 - Another Guest ago
Chapter 468 - Party Time ago
Chapter 469 - Confrontation ago
Chapter 470 - The Party Continues ago
Chapter 471 - Party Time Continued ago
Chapter 472 - Episode Five ago
Chapter 473 - The Party's Over ago
Chapter 474 - Back In The Game ago
Chapter 475 - Gifts Galore ago
Chapter 476 - Ghoul Grinding ago
Chapter 477 - New Arrangements ago
Chapter 478 - Voyeurs ago
Chapter 479 - Get The Ball Rolling ago
Chapter 480 - Give And Take ago
Chapter 481 - Your Thanks Is Enough ago
Chapter 482 - Make Me Something ago
Chapter 483 - My Name Is... ago
Chapter 484 - Different Views ago
Chapter 485 - Into The Underworld ago
Chapter 486 - Fixing Mistakes ago
Chapter 487 - I Am Helping ago
Chapter 488 - A Dish Best Served Cold ago
Chapter 489 - The Light Shines ago
Chapter 490 - Relaxing In Style ago
Chapter 491 - The Chosen Ones ago
Chapter 492 - You Understand ago
Chapter 493 - Building Plans ago
Chapter 494 - A New Problem ago
Chapter 495 - A Quick Library Visit ago
Chapter 496 - Hold Your Horses ago
Chapter 497 - In The Beginning ago
Chapter 498 - City Building ago
Chapter 499 - He Did It Again ago
Chapter 500 - New Residence ago
Chapter 501 - The Whole Point ago
Chapter 502 - Clean Up This Mess ago
Chapter 503 - Get The Party Going ago
Chapter 504 - Back To The Pool ago
Chapter 505 - Drama Unleashed ago
Chapter 506 - A Bit Of Why ago
Chapter 507 - Club Of Hearts ago
Chapter 508 - Quality Time ago
Chapter 509 - Relaxing Interlude ago
Chapter 510 - Getting Back To It ago
Chapter 511 - Feed Me, See More ago
Chapter 512 - High Elven Heretic ago
Chapter 513 - Pit Stop ago
Chapter 514 - I Didn't Expect That ago
Chapter 515 - One Soul For The Road ago
Chapter 516 - Finally Back For Them ago
Chapter 517 - An Entourage ago
Chapter 518 - Out We Go ago
Chapter 519 - Is That Enough? ago
Chapter 520 - Next, Please ago
Chapter 521 - Back Home To Rest ago
Chapter 522 - You Want What? ago
Chapter 523 - Fear Thy Neighbour ago
Chapter 524 - Into The Breach ago
Chapter 525 - Meet Us There ago
Chapter 526 - Under Siege! ago
Chapter 527 - Is It Over? ago
Chapter 528 - You're Kidding! ago
Chapter 529 - Decked Out ago
Chapter 530 - Fixing The Wall ago
Chapter 531 - Mop Up This Mess ago
Chapter 532 - Lord Grasham ago
Chapter 533 - I'm FINE ago
Chapter 534 - Back in Full Capacity ago
Chapter 535 - Share, Share Alike ago
Chapter 536 - I'm Here For You ago
Chapter 537 - Hard Truths ago
Chapter 538 - Promises To Keep ago
Chapter 539 - Dinner And A Date ago
Chapter 540 - What She Wanted ago
Chapter 541 - A Bit Trippy ago
Chapter 542 - The Light Realm ago
Chapter 543 - Go Back Into The Light ago
Chapter 544 - Watt Did You Say? ago
Chapter 545 - What Will You Choose? ago
Chapter 546 - Another Slight Complication ago
Chapter 547 - To The King ago
Chapter 548 - Unexpected Meeting ago
Chapter 549 - More Meetings ago
Chapter 550 - A Returning Guest ago
Chapter 551 - Rescue Me? ago
Chapter 552 - Blair-ingly Loud ago
Chapter 553 - Finishing Lunch ago
Chapter 554 - Picking Them Up: Part 1 ago
Chapter 555 - Picking Them Up: Part 2 ago
Chapter 556 - Picking Them Up: Part 3 ago
Chapter 557 - Picking Them Up: Conclusion ago
Chapter 558 - Back To The Meetings ago
Chapter 559 - Making Choices ago
Chapter 560 - Cook For Me, Baby! ago
Chapter 561 - I Hope You Learned Something ago
Chapter 562 - The Morning After ago
Chapter 563 - Disposition Of Power ago
Chapter 564 - Enhance Your Calm ago
Chapter 565 - Breakfast Time And A Half ago
Chapter 566 - A City Full: Part 1 ago
Chapter 567 - A City Full: Part 2 ago
Chapter 568 - Paperwork ago
Chapter 569 - Wants And Needs ago
Chapter 570 - Lylyth's Lair ago
Chapter 571 - A Reverse Heist ago
Chapter 572 - Rule Of Power ago
Chapter 573 - The Water Realm Version 2 ago
Chapter 574 - If You Asked Me To ago
Chapter 575 - You Can't Eat That ago
Chapter 576 - Maybe If You Try ago
Chapter 577 - Proper Sleeping Arrangements ago
Chapter 578 - A Prime Example ago
Chapter 579 - Second Round ago
Chapter 580 - The Final Event ago
Chapter 581 - I'll Take Care Of It ago
Chapter 582 - Spawned! ago
Chapter 583 - Serving My Time ago
Chapter 584 - Winner, Winner, Chicken Dinner ago
Chapter 585 - Waiting With Denise ago
Chapter 586 - Exchanging Stories ago
Chapter 587 - To Each Their Own ago
Chapter 588 - Denise's Date ago
Chapter 589 - It's Getting Late ago
Chapter 590 - Fight Because You're Right ago
Chapter 591 - Business Dealings ago
Chapter 592 - As The Water Churns ago
Chapter 593 - It Gets Murky ago
Chapter 594 - Near The Bottom ago
Chapter 595 - Unless You Swim ago
Chapter 596 - With The Current ago
Chapter 597 - Blow On This For Me ago
Chapter 598 - Blow On This For Me, Too ago
Chapter 599 - Working Out ago
Chapter 600 - What Can I Do ago
Chapter 601 - You Deal With It ago
Chapter 602 - Fated Meeting ago
Chapter 603 - Meeting With The Princess ago
Chapter 604 - Diana Dazzled ago
Chapter 605 - To Feed The Hungry ago
Chapter 606 - Ending The Day ago
Chapter 607 - Back in the Flow ago
Chapter 608 - Are Things Working Out? ago
Chapter 609 - Plans Can Change ago
Chapter 610 - Could This Be It? ago
Chapter 611 - The Results ago
Chapter 612 - Clarification ago
Chapter 613 - Damage Control ago
Chapter 614 - Coming To A Head ago
Chapter 615 - Calling It Quits ago
Chapter 616 - Is He Okay? ago
Chapter 617 - Checking Him Out ago
Chapter 618 - What He Wants ago
Chapter 619 - Reloaded ago
Chapter 620 - What's Going On ago
Chapter 621 - Issac's Shop ago
Chapter 622 - Issac's Shop Again ago
Chapter 623 - Start Of The Plan ago
Chapter 624 - Task Complete ago
Chapter 624 A - Artemis Rising (Explicit Content) ago
Chapter 625 - The Plan Continues ago
Chapter 626 - Phase Two Complete ago
Chapter 627 - Plotted Plan ago
Chapter 628 - More Catching Up ago
Chapter 629 - Subsidization ago
Chapter 630 - Suniva's Sanctum Sanctorum ago
Chapter 631 - Wake Up Call ago
Chapter 632 - Supper Plans (Wednesday) ago
Chapter 633 - Comfy Couch Time ago
Chapter 634 - Bedtime ago
Chapter 635 - Morning Discussion ago
Chapter 636 - Fire Dancing Around The Subject ago
Chapter 637 - A Loose End ago
Chapter 638 - Dark Plans ago
Chapter 639 - Let Me Explain ago
Chapter 640 - All That She Wants ago
Chapter 641 - Planned Response ago
Chapter 642 - Quest Completed ago
Chapter 643 - Market Share ago
Chapter 644 - Fixing Stuff Up ago
Chapter 645 - Dinner Plans ago
Chapter 646 - Dinner And A Show ago
Chapter 647 - After-Dinner Party ago
Chapter 648 - No Place Like Home ago
Chapter 649 - Real Life Things ago
Chapter 650 - Training Is Fun ago
Chapter 651 - Are You Sure That's Training? ago
Chapter 652 - Back To Walin County ago
Chapter 653 - If You Advertise, They Will Come ago
Chapter 654 - I Give To You... ago
Chapter 655 - Ghoul City ago
Chapter 656 - Pool Prep ago
Chapter 657 - Fun In The Pool ago
Chapter 658 - Catch And Release ago
Chapter 659 - Plans Come Together ago
Chapter 660 - Playtime Is Over ago
Chapter 661 - Training The Workers ago
Chapter 662 - A Few Last Minute Things ago
Chapter 663 - Into the Arena ago
Chapter 664 - Arena Fight: Part 1 ago
Chapter 665 - Arena Fight: Part 2 ago
Chapter 666 - Is This The Secret Cow Level? ago
Chapter 667 - Hell Hath No Fury Like A Woman Scorned ago
Chapter 668 - Working On It ago
Chapter 669 - Going Separate Ways ago
Chapter 670 - Setting Up Home ago
Chapter 671 - Surprise, Surprise, And Surprise ago
Chapter 672 - Getting Comfortable ago
Chapter 673 - Deep Realizations ago
Chapter 674 - Temporary Goodbyes ago
Chapter 675 - Episode 6: Part 1 ago
Chapter 676 - Episode 6: Part 2 ago
Chapter 677 - Pleasure In The Pleasure Palace ago
Chapter 678 - Pleasure For Pleasure's Sake ago
Chapter 679 - Nothing To Do Except Cuddle ago
Chapter 680 - Going For A Stroll ago
Chapter 681 - Lunch And Dessert ago
Chapter 682 - Into The Fire ago
Chapter 683 - Burning Hatred ago
Chapter 684 - Stoke The Fire ago
Chapter 685 - Time Waits For No One ago
Chapter 686 - Meet And Greet ago
Chapter 687 - Stella's Training ago
Chapter 688 - Pillow Talk ago
Chapter 689 - Prep For The Garden Party ago
Chapter 690 - Garden Party ago
Chapter 691 - Chatting Away ago
Chapter 692 - Garden Party Continued ago
Chapter 693 - Party Hardy ago
Chapter 694 - Garden Party Winding Down ago
Chapter 695 - After Party Pool Time ago
Chapter 696 - Make Me An Offer ago
Chapter 697 - Time Can Pass Quickly ago
Chapter 698 - Morning Surprises ago
Chapter 699 - Morning Meetings And Meanings ago
Chapter 700 - That's Good News ago
Chapter 701 - Alterations ago
Chapter 702 - It's Broken! ago
Chapter 703 - Making Important Connections ago
Chapter 704 - It's Happening ago
Chapter 705 - It's That Time Already? ago
Chapter 706 - Some Reactions ago
Chapter 707 - Making Things Clear ago
Chapter 708 - Sharing Some Truths ago
Chapter 709 - The New Sanctuary ago
Chapter 710 - Making Things Right ago
Chapter 711 - Hot Under The Collar ago
Chapter 712 - Love And Understanding ago
Chapter 713 - Conflict Of Interest ago
Chapter 714 - Greet The People ago
Chapter 715 - That's What I Call A Date ago
Chapter 716 - Elven Surprises ago
Chapter 717 - A Giant-Sized Fantasy ago
Chapter 718 - The Last One ago
Chapter 719 - Going Back Home ago
Chapter 720 - A Bit Of A Surprise ago
Chapter 721 - Interview Me ago
Chapter 722 - That Can't Be Right ago
Chapter 723 - Make An Exception ago
Chapter 724 - Little Gifts ago
Chapter 725 - Other Reactions ago
Chapter 726 - A Couple More Meetings ago
Chapter 727 - Just Stuff ago
Chapter 728 - More Catching Up ago
Chapter 729 - Pleasure Interlude ago
Chapter 730 - Cuddle Secrets ago
Chapter 731 - What Now? ago
Chapter 732 - A New Kingdom ago
Chapter 733 - Duel Dilemma ago
Chapter 734 - Bundle Of Trouble ago
Chapter 735 - Code Duello ago
Chapter 736 - More To Do ago
Chapter 737 - Pervarian Interests ago
Chapter 738 - Some Tasty Filler ago
Chapter 739 - Wrap That Up ago
Chapter 740 - Last Minute Visit ago
Chapter 741 - Caravan Conundrum ago
Chapter 742 - Cynical Caravan ago
Chapter 743 - Currently In The Caravan ago
Chapter 744 - Caravan Chaos ago
Chapter 745 - Confounded Caravan ago
Chapter 746 - Caravan Clean-up ago
Chapter 747 - Caravan Cookout ago
Chapter 748 - Contriving Caravan ago
Chapter 749 - Caravan Conclusion ago
Chapter 750 - Pervarian Problem ago
Chapter 751 - The Distraction Of Battle ago
Chapter 752 - Customs Check ago
Chapter 753 - Some Revelations ago
Chapter 754 - That Looks Tasty ago
Chapter 755 - Understanding More ago
Chapter 756 - Public Relations ago
Chapter 757 - Midnight Express ago
Chapter 758 - So That Happened ago
Chapter 759 - Barbi And Banter ago
Chapter 760 - Barbi And Banter, Too ago
Chapter 761 - Game Time ago
Chapter 762 - Private Things ago
Chapter 763 - Tower Time ago
Chapter 764 - Tower Training ago
Chapter 765 - Another Day, Another Story ago
Chapter 766 - Travel Trouble ago
Chapter 767 - Blowback? ago
Chapter 768 - Making The Rounds ago
Chapter 769 - Moving Home ago
Chapter 770 - Succubi Submission ago
Chapter 770A1 - Four Way Learning ago
Chapter 770A2 - Four Way Fun ago
Chapter 771 - A Brief Foray ago
Chapter 772 - More Time, More To Do ago
Chapter 773 - A Quick Morning ago
Chapter 774 - Lonely Hearts Club ago
Chapter 775 - Cuddling Confessions ago
Chapter 776 - Caravan Cover-Up ago
Chapter 777 - Separate Ways ago
Chapter 778 - Rabbit Rigmarole ago
Chapter 779 - Rabbit Reactions ago
Chapter 780 - Rabbit Punches ago
Chapter 781- Hare Care ago
Chapter 782 - Real Stuff Happens ago
Chapter 783 - Rabbits Revealed ago
Chapter 784 - Old Ben ago
Chapter 785 - A Delegate Situation ago
Chapter 786 - Delegate Debriefing ago
Chapter 787 - Delegate Sensibilities ago
Chapter 788 - A Delegate Balance ago
Chapter 7 Ate 9 (789) - Epilogue (Game) ago
Chapter Seven Nine T (790) - Epilogue (Real Life) ago
New Story! ago

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Kialandi
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The fact that Ren is adorable cannot be disputed. However, I think that it is greatly overdone when every 'obtainable' female he meets is immediately twitterpated, lovestruck, and in awe of how pretty he is. In fact, it bothers me a lot that this story, the relationships at least, are ALL driven by his looks. Also the fact that there is never anyone else who is capable of appropriately flirting, and for some reason, all of the bad guys have the same exact 'evilness complex' (that is, they all believe that they have a right to lay claim to things, and people refusing to grant them what they claim as theirs makes them inordinately pissy). I'd recommend the author read 'HJPEV and the Methods of Rationality' for a proper take on bad guys. Sorry for all the negativity, I know that this particular issue is not unique to you, but I really liked the original, so I guess I'm taking out my frustrations with amateur writers on you.

FanFicFanatic
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While I really do appreciate the fact that you've decided to continue one of my personal favorites on this site, I do hope you got permission from Mythran to continue his story. This is just a preliminary review on what I feel can either go really well, or end in disaster. I'm not trying to be pessimistic, but emulating an author's style is really hard. I can understand that you want to take a dropped story that was honestly one of the best ones on this site and revive it to it's former glory, but you have to be careful to not mess with it too much. A lot of the reviews that are coming in are coming in out of the pure nostalgia factor that this story gave so many people. In short, please don't ruin the memory of the story for others. I would much rather read a story that was dropped but retained it's originality than a sad reboot a la Ghostbusters. Do your best, I look forward to how you'll build this world.

Nicolas
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Not bad doesn't mean it's good

2 starts for wasted potential. It's not bad. But being "not bad" doesn't mean it's good.

It went from "MC is artisan and can't use weapons = can't fight" to "MC is artisan, has super weapon that is not weapon and kills experienced fighters hundreds level above him" in like 10,20chaps ...

But what really killed it for me is how he is all about love for one and sleeps with every female that moves

juhosa
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Had potential, devolved into a brainless harem

The initial story, albeit not started by this author set up quite a lot of potential for future prospects. Which this author did keep up for a short time. However, as the story progressed, the initial characters (barring MC) are either discarded or become very 2D, in the case of the female characters I could almost replace all of their names with one and I wouldn't be able to tell the difference barring the size of their breasts.

Generally, this in itself is not always bad. However, I believe I am quite critical of it because it is very likely not where the initial story was meant to be going.

There are some good plot points such as:

Spoiler: Spoiler

 These are actually quite well written and had me intrigued. But then parts of even that devolve into sex. 

Finally, and the reason that I will discontinue reading this series:

Spoiler: Spoiler

 Improvements I think either in future writings or perhaps to this one:

  1. Sometimes, things can end up not working out for the MC, period. That is to say that something positive doesn't still come from it not working out.
  2. Invulnerable MC results in no suspense --> no interest
  3. Don't get me wrong, there's nothing wrong with sexual scenes. But when they begin to take priority over the plot is when it begins to lose value.
  4. The MC can't suit all personality roles - otherwise what is the point of a personality. So far he is:
  • Kind out of the goodness of his heart
  • Blows a tantrum if his kindness isn't acknowledged
  • Respects women
  • Throws a tantrum if said women do something out of his expectations
  • There are other issues, but you get my point
  1.  (5.) The female characters have the opposite problem, they all almost have the exact same personality. They may not initially, but once the stud has captured their heart, they join the dull harem group and become one with the hivemind.

It seems like all I have to say is negative, I hope it is not taken to heart but kept in mind. You do have potential as a writer. From the plot points you have created, they develop intrigue and the initial characters have depth. It's the continuation of said things that I think should be the focal point of your improvement. I also think that while it is great you were inspired by the original story, through that certain expectations have been set - not through any fault of your own. So perhaps our reviews are a bit more critical than they ought to be.

mythloving99
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This story started out great, quickly became one of my favorites on Royal Road since I enjoy stories with crafting in it. Then the sex happened. soon after the Dwarven Arc starts, it becomes Sex, slightly less sex, more sex, 1 chapter for story progression/repetetive crafting, suprised reactions, then repeat with more sex. Painful, and want to read more about actual story, but dropping due to a sex scene every other chapter.

claws8367
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Just one big harem story for the "nice guy"

Reviewed at: Chapter 231 - A New Book

I read this for like 200 chapters... constant sex... bland antagonists... at the end of it all just a feel good story for all you "white knights"... and soooooo hypocritical ... i couldn't take it anymore..

MrDurronko
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As stated in the title the beginning was great. I really liked the story and I even made it until chapter 673...

Up until the dwarven lands arc it seemed to be planned out well and had a reasonably well story flow. During that arc it got quite repetitive at some points. Then came the arc's climax which went very well in my opinion. But after that... The story started to deteriorate majorly.

 

Style

It is most of the time very descriptive. For example: MC says that blablabla, to what Character answers blublublub. After that MC does this and that. But then he remembered to do that and this. AnotherCharacter comes does something to what MC says something.

That kind of writing is tiring and ultimately boring. Let the characters themselves speak.

Adding to that, you dont need to describe every little fart the MC does. I understand that you want to write in "real time", to prevent (large) time skips... But a lot of the information you give the reader is simply not necessary to progress the story and is therefore filler content.

 

Story

As described in the introduction, I liked the story. Up until a certain point it was a great read. After that a mediocre one, but one I still wanted to follow.

Now with the recent chapters regarding a specific deity it was just enough. I started skipping paragraphs and couldnt be bothered to read any further. So I decided to drop it.

I wont get into a more detailed analysis of the story as it is now nearly 9000 pages long, way too much content to review sensibly.

 

Grammar

It is ok. Any glaring mistakes are found and edited quickly. It is not perfect though as there are often times repetitions of words/content, coinciding with the overall style.

 

Characters

I will only say, read the review from @Morkin as he details the characters well.

 

I'm sad to drop a story of such a dedicated author.

fiddlesticks
Overall

Good continuation, till it turned shit

If like I you came to this story because you are a fan of good crafting focused stories then this and the original is the story for you......till the dwarfs are introduced. At this point the story starts focusing more on the relationship of the main charecter, which I was fine with as long as crafting which is his class remained relevent.

[Ranting + spoilers about dwarf relations upto ch 104]

This however all went out the window when the missunderstanding of dwarf culture appeared, yet I persistend and was rewarded. Untill the charecter made the most stupidest and anoying decision and decided to go into a serious relationship with the AI dwarf charecter just because he was dumped in real life. The real life dumping was alright but when he makes a decision to go into a relationship within the game where time advances 4x as fast as real life (meaning he leaves his wife for days before returning) and where he may never return to if he has a medical problem - banning from the game - which is very likely, then he will have a mental breakdown being unable to return to the one he "loves" while the dwarf wife who the aurthor has made us attatched to will be sad and lonely as her husband leaves him forever.

now as the story has 400 something chapters I'm sure this doesn't happen, but it doesn't change the fact that he is an idiot and that based on other reviews I've read that crafting takes a back seat for the rest of the story - which is the main reason I wanted to read this story. So take a chance and read past ch 104 which is where I lost intrest.

ArtTheGreat
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Started Good, Fell Down Hard

The story started off as an excelent continuation, and was absolutley amazing. But after just one or two arcs the mc started being unbelievably OP and he started laying nearly every girl he meets, nearly every chapter. Besides being unbelievable, that repetative sex gets boring and then annoying and unbearable.

The story should have been about crafting, but it quickly became a bad ero-novel. I could have ignored the mc is having so much sex,  if not for the fact that it gets far, far too repetitive, and the plot starts to become a background to a never ending orgy.

SpiderQueen
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Overall:

It has a good beginning from where it left off but the farther in it gets the worse it gets and the more grating everything becomes. 2/5

Style:

I would categorize this story as 'slice of life' as there aren't really any heavy themes in it, nor really any overarching plot or conflict. Any conflict there is can be resolved by the main character no sweat because he's a Gary Stu. 2.5/5

Grammar:

Technical writing is good enough. 3.5/5

Story:

There is no story here, or at least plot points are so far apart as to have a negligible presence.

Character Score:

All characters are garbage. The author doesn't know how to write compelling or complex characters. Why are there so few players in this game? There is nothing written in as to why Ren is so much better than everyone else when he's apparently doing things anyone could do. Also everyone he meets conveniently lives within a traveling distance to where he is. All the female characters are written the same and all the male characters are written the same. Also, despite seeming to have the moral high-ground, Ren is super sexist and an asshole.

 

Complaint:

The way Ren throws money around would destabilize the in-game economy and throw everything into Chaos. He can approach everything with non-chalance because he's got plot armor and nothing will go wrong for him. He gets more and more unlikeable as the story goes on.

Also, if you're going to include sex scenes at least have the balls to go all the way and not write it in such a vanilla way, and stop having Ren react -the same way- each time to revealing himself to a new person. All the whiny "it's too big" when christ he's an 18 year old boy who looks like a 12 year old with the dick of a porn star.