Binary Soul

I am quite happy that i am the first to post a review hehe first dibs!!

So the first few chaps were a bit confusing as the author was stil trying to find his own way  as how he/she wants to make the structure of his writting.

What i mean by this is that it was confusing as to whom was talking you kinda had to fiddle a bit and reread parts to know who is talking or what they meant with inside jokes ect.

After some time i either got used to it or the author got better at it as of the latest chaps i think its the latter so keep up the writting ^^

As for the story itself i like the interactions between Ellie and Kira its just Kiramazing hehe.

Release speed is very decent a very mayor good point as many peeps on royalroad want to make stories with 100+ chaps but never even get farther than 15 chaps or so -.-..........

I hope to read the completion of this novel.

Oh one last thing the first 10-15 chaps or so i wasnt really amazed til the interacactions between Ellie and Kira became rahter uniq at that point i am now waiting each day for a new chap to be released as i cannot wait for more fluffy weird antics of these 2 chars.

This says a lot it doesnt feel copied but rather original to the 2 chars.

mmh~ I read a few more chapters and realized that my previous review wasn't fair at all.

my opinion didn't really change: i still am a little put off by these endless tsukkomis, but i no longer think i should reduce my rating because of that. It was a style choice of the author, and this style was executed well.  As such, I'm clearly not qualified to write a proper advanced review and rewrote it into this.

cutting to the chase: interested people should just read the first chapter. its pretty short and  the rest of the novel is exactly like that.

/edit: The style does change over the chapters. I'd say its a little shallow for the first 20-30 chapters, but it progressively gets better. now, at chapter 80, i'd consider it really well done

This story isn't deep.  If your are looking for detailed worldbuilding where you learn the nitty gritty of of how everything works you won't find it here.  If you don't like senseless violence you should probably move on.  If however you are looking for a comedic tale that doesn't take itself particularly seriously, and that is written in a style reminiscent of Japanese web novels without actually pretending to be one, then this is the story for you.  

Don't be put off by the mass posting of early chapters, this fic is well worth a read. The style and structure slowly get better, so don't be put off by all the one-sentence paragraphs. The story and grammar and characters are excellent from the beginning. 

AND IT'S SO CYGNAS-DAMN FUNNY!! I LOVE THIS!!

When I first started reading it, the story felt a little off.  Like to much was going on a once.  To many details being thrown out.  After a few chapters though, everything started to click.  Now reading it is a constant flow of LOL, with just enough drama and plot to keep it together.  Its great.

I like stories where sci-fi meets fantasy.  In this story, a girl from the stars cra... er, lands on a planet with magic, swords and monsters.

The characters are memorable and unique.  The overall story is a good one, with a good use of various points of view to help progress the narrative.  The icing on the cake is that there are times when I just can't stop myself from laughing!

I highly recommend this story for anyone who is interested in fantasy novels or a sci-fi fantasy mix... or just wants a good laugh.

So...I'm quite liking this one so far.  I've read all of the currently released chapters (through 74), and I can't wait for more!  The grammar is solid - not perfect, but definitely nothing that would detract from the reading experience, and with minimal errors.  This story reminds me a lot of Terry Pratchett's Discworld series, in the ridiculous situations and character personalities.  As Pratchett is one of my favorite authors, I'm a big fan of anything that follows in a similar vein.  I can't wait for more chapters!

Less a review than a comment. I know it's for affect and an experiment, but please don't ever use this writing style again. The short choppy one sentence paragraph after one sentence paragraph starts to become a drain to read considering the line breaks you use between each. Nothing flows and the entire thing becomes a staccato of disjointed ideas that should connect but don't.

It works for dialog; statement, paragraph break, counter statement, paragraph break, counter counter statement.. and onto infinity. But for internal monologue instead of giving each thought the feeling the character thought something, paragrap break, they thought something else, paragraph break, another thought... as each thought comes to them; it instead slows the process of telling the reader the story down and makes it seem like the characters are incapable of having complex thoughts. i.e., they are stupid.

This story started out a bit shakey in my opinion. The characters seemed slightly one dimensional, and there was a sense of repetition that bugged me. However, I am very glad I stuck with this. Not only is it extremely funny, making me audibly laugh a few times, but it also gravitates towards a really compelling plot as time goes on. I can visibly see the author developing as a writer, and the story reflects their impressive skill. Thank you for this.

Decided to revise this. Don't like it, due to bias, and how the story itself is contradictory to the description of what would've been a more interesting main character. Instead of an assassin, you get a submissive something? She doesn't kill. Read to Ch. 24, good on the author for actually completing it though.