Reborn into Starwars! Summoned into Fantasy

by TTT144

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Comedy Drama Fantasy Psychological Romance Sci-fi Tragedy Harem Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Non-Human lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Reincarnation Secret Identity Strategy Strong Lead Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

Marcus Moon was an average 19 year old student, until he was kidnapped by terrorists. He was held for many months with five others, he never gave in and never showed fear to his captors, he protected the others and eventually died so they could be free. This was his first life! Marcus was reborn into a universe very similar to the Starwars universe his new name being Ullr Acron. His parents bother were force users, and they both were different from normal humans, but did not belong to the light or the dark. For this they were hunted by both, eventually being caught and killed by the Order (Light side). Ullr was taken in by the Order to train to be one of them, but as he was reincarnated he remembered what they did to his parents, and so not being able to go against them he caused as much trouble for them as he could. But eventually the newest and youngest member of the council, Kara Moor (21) took him as an Apprentice, despite his misgivings. After training under her for many years Ullr eventually ran away from the order and became a bounty Hunter. But Kara eventually found him and they fought. After a hard fought battle Ullr lost because of a strange, disturbance in the force below him. The disturbance turned out to be a summoning circle to another world, one filled with swords and magic. This is were our story starts.

 

Disclaimer: Concepts of this story are from the Star Wars books, movies and lore. They are not my own ideas, and this is not an original story, it's a fan fiction. 

  • Overall Score
  • Style Score
  • Story Score
  • Grammar Score
  • Character Score
  • Total Views :
  • 79,828
  • Average Views :
  • 8,870
  • Followers :
  • 434
  • Favorites :
  • 120
  • Ratings :
  • 74
  • Pages :
  • 80
Advertisement
Remove
Go to Table of Contents
Rate it
Fiction breaking rules? Report
Advertisement
Remove
Author
TTT144

TTT144

Achievements
3rd Anniversary
Good Commenter (II)
Fledgling Reviewer (III)
Great Review (IV)
Word Smith (IV)
Toplist #2000
Group Leader (III)
I Am Ascending (V)
Advertisement
Remove
Reviews

Leave a review

Obreezy
  • Overall Score

More please more chapters come back

Please give us more chaps it was getting good

Dragochaos
  • Overall Score
  • Style Score
  • Story Score
  • Grammar Score
  • Character Score

For th e love of God please post more chapters . So far you have a unique idea which I would of killed to think of.... but seriously though you have a good chance to make this one of the best story's on this site and I only found one or two spelling errors so that's a plus 

Cruz
  • Overall Score
  • Style Score
  • Story Score
  • Grammar Score
  • Character Score

Lots of potential

I can see this as being a very interesting story if you take the time to plan and write it well enough. I will look forward to it and if at all possible make others be summoned as well that he meets later on you know but from different themes like high school student and others. To spice it up make some one from his first life show up that would be cool.

 

Anyway keep up the good work .

Fenrryr
  • Overall Score

somewhat of a advice

plan very good the story and you will be rewarded with a bountiful of followers. 

N1onEarth
  • Overall Score

 if i were you, i would focus on grammar to make it more readable. other than that, good luck.

GreyIsland
  • Overall Score

Love what's currently available.

I love the concept and Marcus/Ullr's origin story. I hope you continue this because everything I read isneither on hiatus or the author is just impossibly slow. I'm willing to wait to see how this pans out though.

Astral Phoenix
  • Overall Score

Crazy-Cool creative crossover concept!

Great creative idea! so far so good.

I hope see more creative crossover concepts in the future.

Keep up the good work!

Book Cultivator
  • Overall Score
  • Style Score
  • Story Score
  • Grammar Score
  • Character Score

It seems really cool, the character was developed to the point of 4/5 based on RoyalRoadL standards, the story is promising

Crazyflip20
  • Overall Score

Haha sounds well thought out by description.

About to read prologue. Really hope it turns out good.. Newish idea ive seen like a few others using a different approach 

jazzo7
  • Overall Score

You had a diamond idea and then you traded it in for a dollar menu drink...

WTF IS THISS?!?!?!?!?!? You literally just jumped over a way better story than you have written, chose the most generic ass protagonist with the most generic ass harem in the most generic ass world over one of the best entertainment universes in the world with what seemed like a fairly good plot that you wrote in your synopsis. WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?! I'm so damn pissed I've had to rewrite this 3 times just so I didn't cuss you out every other word. Biggest disappointment I've read on this site and I read 30+ chapters of lazy ash and 10+ chapters of reborn as a ninetail fox (both stories should be reserved for mental patients and pedophiles respectively, or not respectively but you get the point.)