The Not Supposedly King

I have just finished reading up to current chapter , and just have to write a review to show how much I was enraptured! First of all this one is really enjoyable to read and its the kind that most people wouldn't put down after they start reading it. I suggest giving it a try, no regrets for sure.

 Read 'til chapter 15, not due to dislike or turning off the series. This just taking me too long to do. Spoiler warning. 

Just a note, I'm doing this on the scale of 1 = atrocious, 2= reasonably bad, 3= normal, 4= reasonably good and 5= perfect. Please don't take offense, since this is a personal opinion rather than fact. I enjoyed it on whole, but it has it's faults

Story and characterization I found good.

The story was fun due to the relative unique take. First having the story take place in a pseudo-realistic medieval-age rather than a fantasy setting, second having the MC becoming a king of a failing country due to switching places with another person, who taught them how to use magic. And the MC does use his knowledge of future technologies and stuff to help himself out. I gave it 3.5 stars mainly due to minor plot holes, or seemingly unexplained things I found like how the MC knows the limit of his Mana when he doesn't seem to have an interface or anything to fully show his amount of Mana.

The characters were good, since they all had their faults and reasonable reactions to the king recently possessed by the MC. The MC himself has a strong, self motivated, sport focused guy who likes cute things being happy, hating cute things being negative. He does also have faults, like his mischievous attitude to matching up people and so on.

The style was kind of arguable. Having a lack of using the right tenses, to the frequent grammatical mistakes that took away from what he was trying to write. (I'll just mention that although it's reasonable for the author's grammar being sub-par, not being a native English speaker, I feel  I would be cheating him for not mentioning it since it is pretty bad.) Anyway, I like how the author does change the perspective from the MC to those who talk with him at points, I feel the lack of pushing this aspect deserves to make him be even for the lacking parts of other aspects, hence I rate it as normal.

For the grammar, my point's already been stated. Although it does feel like kicking a dead horse, I still feel like mentioning this is the primary point for improvement. Try putting a chapter into google docs or something, since I believe it shows you the basic mistakes in grammar. Or try using Grammarly for a more in depth correction.

I hope this criticism seems fair, and you can see my points and build upon them. As I said, I like the series, but some aspects force me to say it's sub-par. If you fix these problem, I'll happily redo my review as a response.

This story is good, and could be great if the earlier chapters were edited/proofread.
Thank you for the story and I hope that you'll write this up to the end!

The story is so good that it make my eye burst a tears. Seriously thanks 

From your sincere Fans

alrighty boys and girls so first impressions are pretty good and I'll following to see some more, didn't look at grammar or any of that fun stuff because that's not really the point just a side objective really

In terms of overall Story and Idea yea 4 stars, and if you continue to impress Mr/Mrs/Miss Author I'll hopefully remember to boost it up to 5

Fairly cliche reincarnation story but not bad. MC kills others but he is not a mass murder nor does he kill others for mundane reasons. Grammar okay overall but proofreading needed. Character description may need more development but the plot keeps the story engaging. The later chapters up to arc two show slight improvement in the writing style and quality. Overall, a worthwhile read.

Author, please keep up the fast chapter updates. (At least once a week - but everyday would be best) :)

The story basically is amazing. I can imagine the MC teasing  his uncle and Dana the head maid. The story is interesting. The MC emotions on how he like that girl or his emotion when he first kills someone is very well written. I hope the author keeps writing this story. This story is  like Hail the king light novel but it has some original ideas that i like.

It is a nice, casual reading of a nice guy who takes the place of an fool young king in another world. And there is magic and war. Its is just annoying how the MC just ignore his own peoples needs, like clean water or the end of slavery. Perhaps after the war arch he will help his pepople...

What could be go wrong?

If you wish to read (read title lol) type of MC novel then read this, personally i find it very boring, like seriously why do alot of novel writers that write about people going to another world, majority of the time they want to get back, who the fuck wants to come back to this shitty boring world like really.....

 And then there's this guys thats stuck on the morals and upbringing of our world, so pathatic in my opinion, anyways read it up to chapter 19 and got feed up and couldn't read anymore

Style

The style and pace of the story in the beginning is slow and informative, with small amounts of details over the course of the chapters. Also having great detail for events happened around the MC and for the shifts of POV to show the other sides of events that happens to the MC.

Story

A sort of reincarnation/possession story, where the MC dies? but awake up as a king with the same name but not the same body. Ironic that the kingdom is of the MC's strength, the bow, it's also not your VRMMO or even game-like RPG world. As I said above the pacing is good but as the MC needs to get stronger the pace jump and leaps as mini time skips happens.

Grammar 

Well since the story is so amazing, you would think the grammar would be to. At some points in the chapter, some words seems to stick out as wrong but my brain has it's own auto-correct feature. I know the author is not a native English speaker so I can't get to hard on him.

Character

Oh boy I saved the best for last, the MC and the other characters seem alive in the story. Like most story the author would favor the MC more than others. but with the POV shift allows to give the other major characters some lime light.

P.S this was review swap review.

P.S.S Favorited and bookmarked.