The Tragic Tale of a Zombie Survivalist

Grammar and Style, both are top decent through there are occasional typos. But sometimes its a little hard to understand the sentences, its rare through. The story itself isn't something I saw for the first time, the 'Monster in Apocalypse' - not the overused cliche but nonetheless I saw it quite often. Including the community system. The characters are slightly shallow, but don't introduce POVs randomly. It isn't easy to properly use these, and for me personally it almost made me drop it halfway through. I hope you won't get repetive over the story.

It's decent, but I will be brutally honest: I see nothing in this story that gives me the drive to read, it's kinda like one amongst many. I wrote this review around 35ish something.

There ALWAYS is potential, I hope you will find a way to properly use it. 

The story is somewhat lacking in detail to my liking... Butttttt. It's not bad grammar mistakes here and there, but a good story to read to pass the time. I've been keeping tabs on this story and it seems that the author is getting better at his craft which makes me happy. Updates are good, content is good, characters are getting there to the point. the character index is a blessing. For the most part, I rate it a 9/10 it's a nice unpolished gem.

It's a nice twist to the zombie survival + game system and i like the story quite a lot.

However i feel like you rush some parts a bit too much. Perhaps add a bit of conversation and familarisation because right now i feel like the survivors that joined him are too trusting and illogical even if he saved them

This is a good zombie survival story with rpg elements  and a unique twist. My only advice is to  slow the pacing a bit. Keep up the good work. 

It's good. Want read second book!

And I will guess he will kick some"God's asses".