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I am Seria, the goddess of life and death. I was fathered by Chaos and born by Order. I am the first ambassador who leaves the realm of Dedessia to make contact with the other realms. Dedessia is a harsh place, a place in which even immortals, demons and gods struggle to survive. Nonetheless, we carved a path for ourselves and created a great kingdom. Something to be proud of. I am their representative and the first to make contact with the other realms. Can you imagine my surprise when they greet me with a fireball to the face? Me, the one who governs life and death!? Well, my wrath should be the least of their fears. They should hope that my parents never pay them a visit. But until that happens I'll play a little... ———————————————————————————————
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The beginning is good but it feels like it loses direction and drags on after moonray escapes. Seria and Marcus are just boring characters; I don't know if it's because I've read three or so stories about Angrod/Cera or something but the new characters are just so watered down in comparison. I mean we got the staple of the other stories cool world, same characters, rise to power, big bad and then end. It's not like theirs no good characters it's just the story focuses on the two most boring ones. The whole beginning story with moonray ends pretty lackluster and it feels like it was just thrown away to make way for the big bad that every Andur story has. It's just frustrating looking for character development and it just meanders on like these main characters are fleshed out. Like, Seria just loves her parents and that's all there is to her. No exploration of her being an executioner or god of life and death. Marcus is worse because he just loves Seria and he is her soulmate because of a rushed explanation of, oh it was in a past life then they move on. It just feels like a drag with these two characters, the story focuses on them but they don't seem to have any substance or any being added to them anytime soon.
Basically, the readers here are most probably familiar with Andur's previous works.
I love all the characters in every story, as you are already familiar with their track of mind and personalities. It is hilarious when you already know what ticked the MC the most and his reactions towards everything, but still keep getting amused with his antics.
I am a avid reader of Novels, LN, and other reading material and I must say that I always get easily absorbed in Andur's works.
I'll try a constructive analysis of the novel and here it is.
The setting and plot which is well defined and constructed. The genre which is absolutely interesting (at least for me).The style of delivery of the lines between the characters and the point of view wherein the readers are like Gods themselves who observes other lifeforms. And the grammar that everyone is paying attention to be perfect are the recipe for a MASTERPIECE and worth waiting and reading for.
The basis of what Im talking about can be seen with the authors achievements and ever growing fans. ;)
The order of his work according to ranking of my favorites is this.
-Court of Souls doesn't count yet as Agent of Realm is the second part of the story.
Favorite Character of all time
-Seria of UD
I like all of your books until about half way through, then I just have to remember to stop reading them before the disapointment sets in.
Well, let's just say that I consider this to be a part of "Court of soul" so I'm giving it the same rating. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Don't get me wrong. I like Seria character in all of the author series. I always can't wait till seria is born and regain her memory so she can add more the fun in most of the story.
But having Seria as full time pov is kind a something else. But after reading 16 chapter. I think Seria as pov is not bad and its definitely entertaining to read. Kudos to the author.
All of the author work is definitely top notch and you can definitely expect that this series will turn the same.
This is made by Andur, i will give it a 5/5 right away and i am 99% shur i wont have to come back and change this. Thanks for another wonderful story.
Muahahahhaa... i tottaly love seria, now she has her very own moment, i just wonder if she remember all her lifes, specially the ones with angrod and ascathon...
But dude you sure know how to do things!! and i must say that you are one of the only few (less than 5) people who finish what they started!... You are famous in novelupdates too =P
This fiction is going to be amazing. Everyone one should read this. If you don't like this, your opinion doesn't matter.. All that stuff.
Everything about this book is great. This will be one of the best fictions on this site.
andur's writing is simply amazing i realy do think this will hit number 1 XD
IV BEEN WAITING FOR MORE!!!!!
i have read all of andurs stories now and was so happy when court of soles came out liking them together AND NOW SERIA GETS HER OWN STORY
i still miss shade and elnore but can't wait till they finally show up and embarrass seria LOL
I just finished re-reading most of Andur's corpus and decided that some reviews would be in order.
Agent of the Realm is Andur's seventh work in his multiverse and is a direct sequel to Court of Souls. At this point, Andur's style and characters have coalesced into what essentially stays their form. The worldbuilding is now on overdrive though.
Unusually, this story features Seria as the protagonist, not her parents. As such, it's a big change in pace compared to the rest and is very refreshing.
The plot is also relatively novel:
After the events of last book, Seria is sent to parallel dimension to see what's-what as an ambassador for her parents. That dimension is similar, but different, and she ends up infiltrating their society, setting up a coffee shop (!), and accidentally wooing the second prince. It's a bit of a spy caper where she has a secret identity and turns out to be vital for the country she is infiltrating, but ends up trying to uncover a big conspiracy. It's a lot of fun.
The second half of the book covers when the conspiracy is uncovered. She and her beau make it make to the main dimension, and her parents invade the new dimension for chocolate and to assemble a multidimensional army to fight back against the spirits. And it turns out that the spirits are led by Warden, who apparently used to run the crystal city in the main universe and is the female portion of Andur's soul???? It's very confusing.