An Evil Hero
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This was a story meant to delve into the dark side. It failed. It is being rewritten by the same idiot. The author has chosen to keep this story online as a symbol of shame, so that he may never forget that the author had the audacity to post something like this online.
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TL;DR MC is insane, God is insane, Literally EVERYONE HE MEETS IS BLOODY INSANE. Or a pervert. That too.
This story has me on the line of 'Should I continue down this dark and twisted hell hole?' and 'Fuck, this keeps getting better and better.' It protraits everyone as either Sick, twisted fucks or perverted sick twisted fuck with the MC stuck in the middle of insane or fucking mentally destroyed.
Doesn't help the fact that God (Female (Reason not saying Goddess is because (As said God said) A Goddess is a lesser version of God)) is a sadist that just wants to watch the MC get very close to reaching his goal (First I guess was being a Hero and sart a Family?) only for the God to utterly destroy any hope for him, then reincarnate him again this time as a demon lord (not actually, just a very strict ruler). Then again his hopes are destroyed. Which leads to his next life (Now) in which he is trying to become the ruler of the world. Lets see how it plays out I guess?
The story is amazing but please add chapters faster. The whole thing just talks to me and the grammar could use a bit of work one or two simple spelling errors. It is a story that is kind of mainstream but with multiple twists. Read for yourself.
I like the premise and the fact that the author delves into the dark side. However the 4th wall breaks, the disjointed progression and lack of any character development other than "I am evil" makes reading this a chore.
Strongest start ive ever seen on this site but you fucked it i dont even know where to begin should have just made him continue his path when he made the buisness deal the whole school thing is disgusting... in short a beautiful creation is now ruined u ass