7 Dragons and Princess

by Forvish

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Romance Harem
A world where power is everything,a story about half breed and princess .not a journey to see the vast world but also a journey to change the world.
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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Prologue:The first walk ago
Chapter 1:This kind of princess!!!! ago
Chapter 2:This isn't kidnapping incident. ago
Chapter 3:Agreement and conditions ago
Chapter 4:A crazy girl. ago
Chapter 5:The First things to do. ago
Chapter 6:What?Any problem with it? ago
Chapter 7: Wyfern?Time to return. ago
Chapter 8:Only watch. ago
Chapter 9:Wyfern ago
Chapter 10:Hikari desire. ago
Chapter 11:Shameless girl. ago
Chapter 12:Warm village ago
Chapter 13:Past of mine. ago
Chapter 14:Eliza situations ago
Chapter 15:Uproar in the city. ago
Chapter 16:Training and guidance. ago
Chapter 17:A plan for heirloom competition. ago
Chapter 18:Eliza training ago
Chapter 19:Reason. ago
Chapter 20:Result of training. ago
Chapter 21:Shiro's story. ago
Chapter 22:Eliza is too pure. ago
Chapter 23:Spill the bean.. ago
Chapter 24:Kidnapping. ago
Chapter 25:Past of Ezax(War with beastmen part 1) ago
Chapter 26:Prelude to the war. ago
Chapter 27:Night before war. ago
Chapter 28: Winner of the tournament. ago
Chapter 29:Godly talent. ago
Chapter 30:Dragoon awakening? ago
Chapter 31:Dragonewt. ago
Chapter 32:After battle Uproar. ago
Chapter 33:Preparations. ago
Chapter 34:After the auction. ago
Chapter 35:2 day before entering.. ago
Chapter 36:Entering the ruin. ago
Chapter 37:Human special dungeons part 1 ago
Chapter 38:Human Special dungeon part 2. ago
Chapter 39:Human Special dungeon Final. ago
Chapter 40:A nice chat.. ago
Chapter 41:Future plan. ago
Chapter 42:First objective.. ago
Chapter 43:Blood castle prologue.. ago
Chapter 44:Blood castle Part 1: ago
Chapter 45:Blood castle part 2 ago
Chapter 46:Blood castle part 3 ago
Chapter 47:Blood castle part 4 ago
Chapter 48:Blood castle part 5 ago
Chapter 49:Blood castle part 6 ago
Chapter 50:Blood castle part 7 ago
Chapter 51:Blood castle part 8 ago
Chapter 52:Blood castle part 9 ago
Chapter 53:Blood castle part 10 ago
Chapter 54 :Blood castle epilogue. ago
Chapter 55 :A little night chat. ago
Chapter 56:Stealing the holy sword. ago
Chapter 57:Pact or not? ago
Chapter 58:Testing dual wield.. ago
Chapter 58:Daily routine. ago
Chapter 59:Meet with the hero? ago
Chapter 60:Hero=Trash. ago
Chapter 61:Idiot hero. ago
Chapter 62:Hero?I am the real hero!! ago
Chapter 63:Lucky = misfortune next day. ago
Chapter 64:Ezax past,war with beastmen part 2(continue of part 1). ago
Chapter 65:Ezax Past,War with beastmen part 3. ago
Chapter 66:Ezax past 4 ,War with beastmen part 4. ago
Chapter 67:Ezax past,war with beastmen part 5. ago
Chapter 68: Start of the omen. ago
Chapter 69:Start of couple festival. ago
Chapter 70:First encounter of mysterious girl(Eliza) ago
Chapter 71:Curse. ago
Chapter 72:Accident. ago
Chapter 73:Survival festival 01 ago
Chapter 74:Survival festival 02 ago
Chapter 75 :Survival festival 03 ago
Chapter 76 :Survival festival 04. ago
Chapter 77:Survival festival 05 ago
Chapter 78:Survival Festival 06 ago
Chapter 79:Survival festival 07 ago
Chapter 80:Survival Festival Epilogue. ago
Chapter 81:The night camp.. ago
Chapter 82: Complex relationship (01) ago
Chapter 83:Complex relationship 02 ago
Chapter 84:Complex relationship 03. ago
Chapter 85:Complex relationship 04 ago
Chapter 86:Complex relationship 05. ago
Chapter 87:Complex Relationship end ago
Chapter 88:Legendary spear(01) ago
Chapter 89:Legendary spear (02) ago
Chapter 90:Legendary Spear (03) ago
Chapter 91:Legendary spear (04) ago
Chapter 92:Legendary spear End ago
Chapter 93:Maturing(01) ago
Chapter 94:Maturing (02) ago
Chapter 95:Maturing(03) ago
Chapter 96:Maturing (04) ago
Chapter 97:Maturing (05) ago
Chapter 98:Maturing(06) ago
Chapter 99:Maturing(07) ago
Chapter 100:Maturing (08) ago
Chapter 101:Maturing(09) ago

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Iramohs
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 A story with an abundance of potential ruined by grammatical errors. Just getting through the first 3 chapters was painful and the grammar has barely improved in the more recent releases.

Draconic
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I only read the prologue, and the grammar was better than I expected from the other reviews. Though I expected it to be very very bad. That's one pleasant surprise. Maybe it was edited since then. Judging from the description it probably was.

But the rest... There was something in this novel that just very much disagreed with me. Somehow the way it was written, the way the sentences followed each other, the way the whole thing was built up, was just really really annoying.

And so far, there was nothing in this novel that would make interested in the rest of the chapters. Maybe it would get much better in later chapters, but right now, after reading the prologue, I really don't want to continue.

Bonestrak
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I am willing to accept that fanfictions have small grammar mistaces and typo┬┤s but this one goes overboard, there are no 2 sentences without painfully obvious mistaces following each other, while the plot is fine as far as i have read. The many missing words, typos and the grammatically ruind sentences are painfull, before continuing to add further chapters i addvise the auther to search for a proofreader and rework the published chapters. Maybe this fanfic could turn out to be an enjoyable read afterwards.