Unknown Son

Unknown Son

by BlueFish

Three days ago if I told you a new world including new towns, creatures you’ve never seen before and real magic could appear all in a matter of two days, would you believe me? What if I told you that we humans didn’t really understand how weak we really were before, would you believe me then? Hell, I wouldn’t believe it myself if someone told me that.

Don't believe me then, but the revival... is near.
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Hi, Bluefish here with a novel i'm trying to write. I'm new but also busy!
Beware that the chapters will be short, since they'll be in parts. Each part should be around 1k words long. I'll either release it part by part, or one full chapter at a time. However, it'll be updated atleast once or twice a week!

(Credit to whoever made that amazing picture, I surely don't own it.)

Beware: Mature; Blood, Rape, Sexual Situations, Foul Language, Violence, etc.

Tags Include: Male Protagonist, Magic, Swords, Kings/Queens, Kingdom Building, Royalty, Slaves, Non-Human Protagonist, Game Elements, Kingdom Wars, Demons, Elves, Fantasy Creatures, Guilds, Alchemy, Hero Summoning, Gods, Weak - Strong, World Change, Past plays role in Present life, Older Female-Younger Male
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Thall230
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This story reals you right in. I honestly couldn't stop myself from reading. I'm not saying it's perfect, but it's not that far off. So come on people you really need to read this book cause once you start you won't want it to end.

Zombie Unicorne
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Hope the Synopsis isn't just for show...

Well, I hope the story delivers on what it promises since it's rare to find stories like these now a days.

SilverHybrid
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Can't wait till next chapter comes out i like how your writing this and your going to be a pretty damn good author if this is just your first story.

 

This is the first story I've read like this very original cant wait to see how it turns out.

Scandalf
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Hope author doesn't take it 'too' far

there are definitely no problems with style so I'm not gonna talk about that

story is almost original, I mean you wouldn't expect a new world kind of thing to be an original one but other features in this story makes it almost original. I am talking about family-friend situation, races, kings, and that plot twist at the end of 5.2th chapter. so it is definitely satisfying

characters: well, looks good I guess? I can't really talk about them being fleshed out or developed etc etc.. since it's only been 14 chapters so far (and they are pretty short) but they certainly look like they will develop into good, likeable or at least relatable characters. ofc if author doesn't suddenly decide to fuck up.

one thing I had problem while reading it is, how fucked up this story looked. I mean I know author warned us in synopsis but it REALLY doesn't help when author starts throwing fucked up things at your face right of the bat. I almost droped the story because I though the story would turn into something intolerable. so yeah, I hope it doesn't turn into something like that. if it doesn't, I can see this story turning into something really really good.