World Keeper

World Keeper

by karami92

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Dale Mitchell, your average guy in a below-average job. But, what happens to him is anything but average. After hitting someone in his truck, his world was turned upside down, inside out, and more than fifty shades of grey.

Now, he seems to be something called a World Keeper, and must create and manage his own world. Is this his afterlife, or something else entirely?


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Table of Contents
807 Chapters
Chapter Name Release Date
Not a Chapter! Art Gallery! ago
Chapter 0: Prologue ago
Chapter 1: A Whole New World ago
Chapter 2: Feminine Wiles ago
Chapter 3: Thy Kingdom Come, Thy Will Be Done ago
Chapter 4: Magic? Magic! ago
Chapter 5: Market Value ago
Chapter 6: Mistakes Were Made, and Fixed! ago
Chapter 7: Keeper's Descent ago
Chapter 8: When Spirits Walk The Land ago
Chapter 9: The 72 ago
Chapter 10: Tame the Beast Within ago
Chapter 11: Plans for Tomorrow ago
Chapter 12: Revelations ago
Chapter 13: Alkahest ago
Chapter 14: Exposition, and New Systems ago
Chapter 15: Life Beyond Life ago
Chapter 16: Death Walks Among Us ago
Chapter 17: The Knowledge of the Ages ago
Chapter 18: The Great Leap Forward ago
Chapter 19: The Windfall ago
Chapter 20: Cuteness Shall Triumph! ago
Chapter 21: Believe it! ago
Chapter 22: The Power of Chakra ago
Chapter 23: The Birth of Power ago
Chapter 24: New Meetings ago
Chapter 25: Keepers Everywhere! ago
Chapter 26: Let the Games Begin! ago
Chapter 27: The Tournament ago
Chapter 28: Designer's Choice Awards ago
Chapter 29: No Naming Sense Here ago
Chapter 30: A Race Across the Plains ago
Chapter 31: The Road to Perfection ago
Chapter 32: Horsing Around ago
Chapter 33: Like Herding Centaurs ago
Chapter 34: Catching Up(And a Teaser) ago
Chapter 35: Tonight, We Dine in Hell ago
Chapter 36: The Hidden God ago
Chapter 37: A World Divided ago
Chapter 38: Systems Update ago
Chapter 39: To Anger the Gods ago
Chapter 40: Dual Domains ago
Chapter 41: Questionably Enchanting ago
Chapter 42: The Answer to ALL the Questions ago
Chapter 43: The Keeper's Visit ago
Chapter 44: My Goddess ago
Chapter 45: Promises Kept ago
Chapter 46: Meeting of the Gods ago
Chapter 47: Hungry Soul ago
Chapter 48: Lions and Spirits and Planning, Oh My! ago
Chapter 49: The Wraiths ago
Chapter 50: A Wealth of Knowledge ago
Chapter 51: Tubrock's Birth ago
Chapter 52: Kingdoms United ago
Chapter 53: The Sky Danced ago
Chapter 54: A Guided Path ago
Chapter 55: Doom? Doom. ago
Chapter 56: A Fox's Fright ago
Chapter 57: Underworld Woes ago
Chapter 58: Ore Really? ago
Chapter 59: Sad Truths ago
Chapter 60: The Pantheon United ago
Chapter 61: Irena's Revelations ago
Chapter 62: The Fallen Shall Rise ago
Chapter 63: Like Fish in a Barrel ago
Chapter 64: Dale's Camping Trip ago
Chapter 65: Waterfall ago
Chapter 66: No Rest for the Weary ago
Chapter 67: Bloody Gathering ago
Chapter 68: The Bloodied Hand ago
Chapter 69: The First Battle ago
Chapter 70: The Final Debt ago
Chapter 71: Make Him Proud ago
Chapter 72: The Cycle of Pain ago
Chapter 73: Dire Decisions ago
Chapter 74: A Mother's Hope ago
Chapter 75: War is Coming ago
Chapter 76: The Battle of Savir ago
Chapter 77: A Glimpse Beyond the Veil ago
Chapter 78: A Call to Arms ago
Chapter 79: Spelled Correctly ago
Chapter 80: Reputable Names ago
Chapter 81: Shameless ago
Chapter 82: The End is Neigh... Nigh? ago
Chapter 83: Advancement ago
Chapter 84: The Jerks in the Circle ago
Chapter 85: Watch the World Burn ago
Chapter 86: The True Language ago
Chapter 87: To End A War ago
Chapter 88: Turning Point ago
Chapter 89: Life Story ago
Chapter 90: Bag of Holding ago
Chapter 91: Spirits Be With Us ago
Chapter 92: The Race of Heroes ago
Chapter 93: Cowabunga, Dude! ago
Chapter 94: The Turn of the Tide ago
Chapter 95: The First True Ward ago
Chapter 96: Universally Bad Naming Sense ago
Chapter 97: Watching the Worlds Turn ago
Chapter 98: Need More? ago
Chapter 99: Alternative Facts ago
Chapter 100: D'ka Sha ago
Chapter 101: Hidden Knowledge ago
Chapter 102: Practice Makes Perfection ago
Chapter 103: Brain vs Brawn ago
Chapter 104: Hallowed be Thy Name ago
Chapter 105: The Demigod's Tale ago
Chapter 106: Core Studies ago
Chapter 107: Of Love and Loss ago
Chapter 108: The Truth and The Question ago
Chapter 109: The Once and Future King ago
Chapter 110: A Mother's Love ago
Chapter 111: A Daughter's Courage ago
Chapter 112: Meeting the Family ago
Chapter 113: Necessary Education ago
Chapter 114: A Wide Wide World ago
Chapter 115: Level Field ago
Chapter 116: The Devil's in the Details ago
Chapter 117: Deal with the Devil ago
Chapter 118: Happiness ago
Chapter 119: The Secret Guardian ago
Chapter 120: Decisions, Decisions ago
Chapter 121: The Fairiest of them All ago
Chapter 122: When Spirits Abound ago
Chapter 123: The Power of the Soul ago
Chapter 124: The Dark and Golden Age ago
Chapter 125: The Setting Sun ago
Chapter 126: Remember the Past to Make History ago
Chapter 127: Remember the Wraiths ago
Chapter 128: The Stars Shall Guide Your Way ago
Chapter 129: Dual Cultivation? ago
Chapter 130: Recruitment ago
Chapter 131: I'm on a Boat ago
Chapter 132: The Cliff at the End of the Sea ago
Chapter 133: Chumming the Waters ago
Chapter 134: Aeons Explained ago
Chapter 135: Through the Eye of the Storm ago
Chapter 136: The Man Who Would Not Be King ago
Chapter 137: Welcome to the Dungeon ago
Chapter 138: We've Got Gunning Flames ago
Chapter 139: The Crawl of the Dungeon ago
Chapter 140: Splitting the Spoils ago
Chapter 141: Homesick ago
Chapter 142: I Dream of Demons ago
Chapter 143: The Birth of Twilight ago
Chapter 144: I Want to Play a Game ago
Chapter 145: Pairing Off ago
Chapter 146: I Spy ago
Chapter 147: Resupplying and Setting Sail ago
Chapter 148: The Maybe Future Queen ago
Chapter 149: What Are They? ago
Chapter 150: A Gateway to a Brighter Future ago
Chapter 151: Transcending Language ago
Chapter 152: The Heart of the Cards ago
Chapter 153: Cultural Miscommunications ago
Chapter 154: Strength in Numbers ago
Chapter 155: For This Is War ago
Chapter 156: A River of Tiers ago
Chapter 157: The Demon's Hope ago
Announcement: Holding Up? Hopefully ago
Announcement: The Sun Emerges From Behind the Clouds! ago
Chapter 158: All the Time to Duel ago
Chapter 159: Underworld and Underdeveloped ago
Chapter 160: Strength in Unity ago
Chapter 161: Merkin, F*ck Yeah! ago
Chapter 162: A War on Economy ago
Chapter 163: To Review the Races ago
Chapter 164: Everything Has Its Price ago
Chapter 165: The Foundry ago
Chapter 166: Alme Dien ago
Chapter 167: The Awaited Meeting ago
Chapter 168: Threadbare Preparations ago
Chapter 169: Reunions ago
Chapter 170: A Tournament of Champions ago
Chapter 171: Destruction ago
Chapter 172: Playing Dirty ago
Chapter 173: Crushing ago
Chapter 174: An Old Game, a New Player ago
Chapter 175: Kill it With Fire ago
Chapter 176: Finder's Keeper ago
Chapter 177: A More Fitting Game ago
Chapter 178: The Exam ago
Chapter 179: Bihena's Kathy ago
Chapter 180: The Life of Magic ago
Chapter 181: To Spend a Fortune ago
Chapter 182: Planning Ahead to Keep My Head ago
Chapter 183: Special Education ago
Chapter 184: Accalia's Monster ago
Chapter 185: A Swarm of Studies ago
Chapter 186: Ultimate Power ago
Chapter 187: Finishing Training, the Time Draws Near ago
Chapter 188: This War is Over ago
Chapter 189: The End of the Beginning ago
Chapter 190: Glamorous and Calamitous ago
Chapter 191: Motivation ago
Chapter 192: The Perfect Trap ago
Chapter 193: The Keeper Speaks ago
Chapter 194: A Tale as Old as Time ago
Chapter 195: Upgrades ago
Chapter 196: Domains for Days ago
Chapter 197: Maid to Order ago
Chapter 198: Selections ago
Chapter 199: The Citadel ago
Chapter 200: The Rules and the Reps ago
Chapter 201: Scarlet's Warning ago
Chapter 202: Bloody Bonds ago
Chapter 203: The Spirit of Destruction ago
Chapter 204: More Research! ago
Chapter 205: All Are Equal in His Eyes ago
Chapter 206: The Only Way to Travel ago
Chapter 207: Aeon Training ago
Chapter 208: Stare Into the Abyss ago
Chapter 209: The Will of the World ago
Chapter 210: Aurivy's Training Grounds ago
Chapter 211: The Guiding Hand ago
Chapter 212: Scum of the Earth ago
Chapter 213: Crushing Hopes and Dreams ago
Chapter 214: Who's Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf? ago
Chapter 215: The Black Soul ago
Chapter 216: Lord of Nature ago
Chapter 217: Regret ago
Chapter 218: Loyalty ago
Chapter 219: Broken ago
Chapter 220: Another Origin ago
Chapter 221: A Pure Heart ago
Chapter 222: Holy Daughter ago
Chapter 223: Heaven and Hell ago
Chapter 224: The First Step ago
Chapter 225: Vacation ago
Chapter 226: The Start of a Daily Life ago
Chapter 227: To Show The Masses ago
Chapter 228: Look Upon The World ago
Chapter 229: A Date With Destiny ago
Chapter 230: Divine Dining ago
Chapter 231: Duality ago
Chapter 232: Lift Your Voice ago
Chapter 233: The True Sim ago
Chapter 234: Climb To The Top ago
Chapter 235: The Weird Trials ago
Chapter 236: Break The Bank ago
Chapter 237: Savage ago
Chapter 238: The Language of Magic ago
Chapter 239: Ancestor Fox ago
Chapter 240: Playing Catch-Up ago
Chapter 241: The King of Kings ago
Chapter 242: Salor's Choice ago
Chapter 243: Last Hope ago
Chapter 244: Min Maxer ago
Chapter 245: Pressing Matters ago
Chapter 246: The Wild Hunt ago
Chapter 247: The Evolution of Divinity ago
Chapter 248: Outward Expansion ago
Chapter 249: Incubation ago
Chapter 250: New Information ago
Chapter 251: A New Beginning ago
Chapter 252: The Last Flame ago
Chapter 253: Understanding the Beginning ago
Chapter 254: Martial Plight ago
Chapter 255: Scarlet's Secret ago
Chapter 256: The Living Death ago
Chapter 257: The Guild ago
Chapter 258: Slumming it Up ago
Chapter 259: The First Miracle ago
Chapter 260: Modern Conveniences ago
Chapter 261: Fyor's Final Steps ago
Chapter 262: The Laws Merged ago
Chapter 263: Cause and Effect ago
Chapter 264: Curing the Ninja ago
Chapter 265: Happiness ago
Chapter 266: The Queen's Request ago
Chapter 267: The Seekers of the Spheres ago
Chapter 268: Fyor's Future ago
Chapter 269: Spell It Out ago
Chapter 270: The Empress of Blood ago
Chapter 271: Training for the Invasion ago
Chapter 272: The Great Training Montage ago
Chapter 273: The Holy Knights ago
Chapter 274: It Begins ago
Chapter 275: Defend the Home ago
Chapter 276: Wolf's Bane ago
Chapter 277: The Deckmaster ago
Chapter 278: To Track the Traceless Foe ago
Chapter 279: The Most Unexpected Foe ago
Chapter 280: Completion Awards ago
Chapter 281: Selling the Goods ago
Chapter 282: Foundation ago
Chapter 283: The Unforseen Ruler ago
Chapter 284: Life Moves On ago
Chapter 285: Forged History ago
Chapter 286: Distant Horizons ago
Chapter 287: Shanir's Legacy ago
Chapter 288: The Path to Perfection ago
Chapter 289: Rising Stars ago
Chapter 290: Merlin's Preparations ago
Chapter 291: Styx ago
Chapter 292: Concealing Traces ago
Chapter 293: Hidden Agendas ago
Chapter 294: To Turn the Tides ago
Chapter 295: The Terrors in the Deep ago
Chapter 296: Drawing Water From a Stone ago
Chapter 297: Beyond the Mysterious Beyond ago
Chapter 298: Dull Blayd ago
Chapter 299: Schemes ago
Chapter 300: Secondary Objectives ago
Chapter 301: The Stone of Power ago
Chapter 302: The Power of the Stones ago
Chapter 303: Two Hundred Years of Night ago
Chapter 304: Trade Wars? ago
Chapter 305: Fear the Dark ago
Chapter 306: The Path of Salvation ago
Chapter 307: Sizable Siphons ago
Chapter 308: Gate's Hope ago
Chapter 309: Returning Home ago
Chapter 310: The Stakes ago
Chapter 311: Waters of Life ago
Chapter 312: Visitation ago
Chapter 313: Server Settings ago
Chapter 314: Twilight's Saga ago
Chapter 315: Charging for a Craft ago
Chapter 316: Marik's Dungeon ago
Chapter 317: Charging Extra ago
Chapter 318: Expectations ago
Chapter 319: Dancing Waves ago
Chapter 320: The Technological Super-Hydra ago
Chapter 321: A New Light ago
Chapter 322: The Dawn of a New Age ago
Chapter 323: A Vision of Tomorrow ago
Chapter 324: Stars and Stories ago
Chapter 325: A Whole New World ago
Chapter 326: Divine Revelations ago
Chapter 327: Aurivy's First Look ago
Chapter 328: The Hype ago
Chapter 329: Press Release ago
Chapter 330: New Divinity ago
Chapter 331: Shifting Focus ago
Chapter 332: Mirror, Mirror ago
Chapter 333: Scry Me a River ago
Chapter 334: Extermination ago
Chapter 335: Vanity ago
Chapter 336: The Passing of the Torch ago
Chapter 337: Time to Shine ago
Chapter 338: Return of the Traveler ago
Chapter 339: Luck of the Draw ago
Chapter 340: The Opening Slaughter ago
Chapter 341: Beholden to a Cause ago
Chapter 342: Invitation ago
Chapter 343: Opening Event ago
Chapter 344: Blood and Iron ago
Chapter 345: Unluck of the Draw ago
Chapter 346: Compendium of Magic ago
Chapter 347: The Eye of the Beholder ago
Chapter 348: Jinxed It ago
Chapter 349: Prelude to War ago
Chapter 350: The Slumbering Beast ago
Chapter 351: The Chosen Path ago
Chapter 352: Shattered Hopes ago
Chapter 353: Breaking News ago
Chapter 354: Fated Soul ago
Chapter 355: Shadows Lurk ago
Chapter 356: Expansion ago
Chapter 357: The Dragon's Dilemma ago
Chapter 358: Dragon's Duel ago
Chapter 359: The Dragon's Roost ago
Chapter 360: Departure ago
Chapter 361: Growing Pains ago
Chapter 362: Dinner Reservations ago
Chapter 363: Seeking a Path ago
Chapter 364: I'm Back ago
Chapter 365: Graduation ago
Chapter 366: Resolve ago
Chapter 367: Conspiracy ago
Chapter 368: The Big Score ago
Chapter 369: The Grinning Shade ago
Chapter 370: The Golden Favor ago
Chapter 371: Avatars ago
Chapter 372: The Pantheon Parthenon ago
Chapter 373: Nebula ago
Chapter 374: Swarm Tactics ago
Chapter 375: Stormworld ago
Chapter 376: Ascension ago
Chapter 377: The Final Manifestation ago
Chapter 378: A New Age Dawns ago
Chapter 379: Counting Cards ago
Chapter 380: The Watcher ago
Chapter 381: Special Event ago
Chapter 382: Heart's Shadow ago
Chapter 383: To Call the Void ago
Chapter 384: Well Equipped ago
Chapter 385: The Pact ago
Chapter 386: Internet Sensation ago
Chapter 387: Conquest ago
Chapter 388: What Sorcery is This ago
Chapter 389: Synergy ago
Chapter 390: The Mirror's Analysis ago
Chapter 391: Financial Planning ago
Chapter 392: Lift-Off ago
Chapter 393: Spica ago
Chapter 394: Firsthand Look ago
Chapter 395: The Binding of a Soul ago
Chapter 396: Self-Reflection ago
Chapter 397: Return to the Meeting ago
Chapter 398: The Trade ago
Chapter 399: Dream Another Dream of Me ago
Chapter 400: Amalgamation ago
Chapter 401: Thick-Skinned ago
402: Mending a Broken Heart ago
Chapter 403: Echoed Fates ago
Chapter 404: Chapter Not Found ago
Chapter 405: Stare Into the Abyss ago
Chapter 406: The Fox and the Hare ago
Chapter 407: A Whole New World ago
Chapter 408: Foreign Relations ago
Chapter 409: If You Want Something Done Right ago
Chapter 410: The Path Ahead ago
Chapter 411: Karmic Justice ago
Chapter 412: Thawing the Frozen Heart ago
Chapter 413: First(?) Contact ago
Chapter 414: Long Live the Queen ago
Chapter 415: Disaster Awareness ago
Chapter 416: Beyond Perfection ago
Chapter 417: The End of the Line ago
Chapter 418: The Passing of the Torch ago
Chapter 419: Treasured Knowledge ago
Chapter 420: Shady Transactions ago
Chapter 421: Disaster Prevention Hotline ago
Chapter 422: The Life of a Shadow ago
Chapter 423: Troubled Times ago
Chapter 424: Sher Dien ago
Chapter 425: Political Maneuvering ago
Chapter 426: Carna Petra ago
Chapter 427: The Brightest Future ago
Chapter 428: A Star is Born ago
Chapter 429: Wish Upon a Star ago
Chapter 430: Thoughts and Prayers ago
Chapter 431: The Era of Champions ago
Chapter 432: The Greatest Plans of Slimes and Men ago
Chapter 433: Evolution ago
Chapter 434: Daughter of the Stars ago
Chapter 435: Family Understands ago
Chapter 436: The King's Tribute ago
Chapter 437: Sea God's Play ago
Chapter 438: Ill Fortunes ago
Chapter 439: Proof of Graduation ago
Chapter 440: The Earthshaper ago
Chapter 441: Like Fish in a Barrel ago
Chapter 442: Bear Witness ago
Chapter 443: Divine Insight ago
Chapter 444: Advanced Knowledge ago
Chapter 445: Revenge ago
Chapter 446: A Bargain ago
Chapter 447: A Chance to Grow ago
Chapter 448: Master's Trials ago
Chapter 449: Dungeon Battles ago
Chapter 450: Qualifications ago
Chapter 451: Investment ago
Chapter 452: Culmination ago
Chapter 453: Blasting Off Again ago
Chapter 454: One Giant Leap ago
Chapter 455: Home Sweet Home ago
Chapter 456: No News is Good News ago
Chapter 457: Community's Call ago
Chapter 458: The Brightest Light ago
Chapter 459: Divine Tree... Divinitree? ago
Chapter 460: Perfect Timing ago
Chapter 461: Fruits of our Labors ago
Chapter 462: Divine Unity ago
Chapter 463: The Oncoming Storm ago
Chapter 464: Dangers Above and Below ago
Chapter 465: Digital Divine ago
Chapter 466: What the Heart Wants ago
Chapter 467: Quad Infinitum ago
Chapter 468: Roaring Shadow ago
Chapter 469: Not Goodbye, Just Until We Meet Again ago
Chapter 470: Prelude to Shadow ago
Chapter 471: On a Whim ago
Chapter 472: The Keeper of Rings ago
Chapter 473: Mowai Halii ago
Chapter 474: Turnabout is Fair Play, Right? ago
Chapter 475: Bring Down the House ago
Chapter 476: Attachment ago
Chapter 477: Digital Dive ago
Chapter 478: Long Live The King ago
Chapter 479: One Less than Ten Thousand ago
Chapter 480: Dark Expanse ago
Chapter 481: Creeping Closer ago
Chapter 482: Faith ago
Chapter 483: Gravity Of The Situation ago
Chapter 484: Travel Plans ago
Chapter 485: The Song Of Rest ago
Chapter 486: Sowing The Seeeds ago
Chapter 487: True Innovation ago
Chapter 488: Evolution ago
Chapter 489: Assemble ago
Chapter 490: Virtual Virtuoso ago
Chapter 491: The Ten Year Plan ago
Chapter 492: Reality Marble ago
Chapter 493: A Day In The Life ago
Chapter 494: What Is Real ago
Chapter 495: Archmage Scepter ago
Chapter 496: Wayvering Faith ago
Chapter 497: Mirror Truths ago
Chapter 498: Over Drive ago
Chapter 499: Array With You ago
Chapter 500: Time Marches On ago
Chapter 501: Iron March ago
Chapter 502: Unknown And Unseen ago
Chapter 503: Census ago
Chapter 504: Nothing To Fear ago
Chapter 505: Heavy Handed ago
Chapter 506: The Power Of Faith ago
Chapter 507: Mercy ago
Chapter 508: Manifest Destiny ago
Chapter 509: Gift Of The Father ago
Chapter 510: When Darkness Falls ago
Chapter 511: Covering Weakness ago
Chapter 512: The Order Of Five Lights ago
Chapter 513: Beginning Training ago
Chapter 514: Laying The Trap ago
Chapter 515: Testing The Technique ago
Chapter 516: Covering Traces ago
Chapter 517: Deific Property ago
Chapter 518: Infinity Mirror ago
Chapter 519: The Invasion Begins ago
Chapter 520: First Sighting ago
Chapter 521: First Blood ago
Chapter 522: Established Connections ago
Chapter 523: Advancing The Timeline ago
Chapter 524: Insider Information ago
Chapter 525: Prestige ago
Chapter 526: Long Live The Queen ago
Chapter 527: I Want To Play A Game ago
Chapter 528: Fortifications ago
Chapter 529: Bloodlust ago
Chapter 530: What Is A Keeper? ago
Chapter 531: Bittersweet Victory ago
Chapter 532: A New Star Is Born ago
Chapter 533: Returning To The Everyday ago
Chapter 534: Starry Night ago
Chapter 535: New Additions ago
Chapter 536: Take To The Stars ago
Chapter 537: World's Shadow ago
Chapter 538: Growing Darkness ago
Chapter 539: Forging Connections ago
Chapter 540: Reunion ago
Chapter 541: Justice ago
Chapter 542: Curiosity ago
Chapter 543: Research ago
Chapter 544: Balance And Love ago
Chapter 545: Assistants ago
Chapter 546: Revealing The Truth ago
Chapter 547: Transaction ago
Chapter 548: Spring Of Origin ago
Chapter 549: Discovery ago
Chapter 550: Cooperation ago
Chapter 551: Advance ago
Chapter 552: Wild Growth ago
Chapter 553: Sylphid Launch Detected ago
Chapter 554: Mistakes Were Made ago
Chapter 555: Fairy Tale ago
Chapter 556: The Essence Of A Meeting ago
Chapter 557: Divine Commerce ago
Chapter 558: Shocking The World ago
Chapter 559: Balance Of Power ago
Chapter 560: A Flash Of Silver ago
Chapter 561: The Head Of Research ago
Chapter 562: Grudge ago
Chapter 563: Living The Dream ago
Chapter 564: Upper Limit ago
Chapter 565: Second Guessing ago
Chapter 566: Lurking Shadows ago
Chapter 567: Obligation ago
Chapter 568: Gaze Into The Abyss ago
Chapter 569: The Bigger They Are... ago
Chapter 570: Exceeding Expectations ago
Chapter 571: About Time ago
Chapter 572: Another Step ago
Chapter 573: Sniping ago
Chapter 574: Wishes Fulfilled ago
Chapter 575: Evolution Achieved ago
Chapter 576: Blood For Blood ago
Chapter 577: A Tale As Old As Time ago
Chapter 578: Conquer The Skies ago
Chapter 579: Uncontrolled Evolution ago
Chapter 580: The World Of Tomorrow, Today ago
Chapter 581: The Wheels Of Fate Turn Ever Slowly ago
Chapter 582: Political Giant ago
Chapter 583: You Should Be Running ago
Chapter 584: A Man With Many Means ago
Chapter 585: Losing Track ago
Chapter 586: Long Live The Queen ago
Chapter 587: A Plan Coming Together ago
Chapter 588: The Gathering Of Heroes ago
Chapter 589: Forces Assembled ago
Chapter 590: Stare Into The Abyss ago
Chapter 591: Triumphant Fluff ago
Chapter 592: Always A Bigger Fish ago
Chapter 593: What Lurks Beneath ago
Chapter 594: Seeing Them Off ago
Chapter 595: The Seeds Of Growth ago
Chapter 596: Verdant Growth ago
Chapter 597: Stretched Thin ago
Chapter 598: Making Waves ago
Chapter 599: A-Voiding Problems ago
Chapter 600: Shine Brightly ago
Chapter 601: A Second Chance ago
Chapter 602: The Workings Of Fate ago
Chapter 603: A Glimpse Of Paradise ago
Chapter 604: One Nation ago
Chapter 605: The Next Plan ago
Chapter 606: The Perfect Plan ago
Chapter 607: Agreement ago
Chapter 608: Alone ago
Chapter 609: Favors ago
Chapter 610: Scorched Earth ago
Chapter 611: Advancing The Forest ago
Chapter 612: Tower's Tower ago
Chapter 613: Beneath The Surface ago
Chapter 614: Branching Out ago
Chapter 615: Silver Lining ago
Chapter 616: Dana's Resolve ago
Chapter 617: Exploring The Shadow ago
Chapter 618: Lost And Found ago
Chapter 619: Null ago
Chapter 620: The Heart Of A Star ago
Chapter 621: Monstrosity ago
Chapter 622: Solar Flare ago
Chapter 623: Alternative Paths ago
Chapter 624: A Burst Of Spirit ago
Chapter 625: The Shadow Knights ago
Chapter 626: The Digital Dealer ago
Chapter 627: Charlotte's Storm ago
Chapter 628: Into The Spider's Web ago
Chapter 629: City Of Bayrun ago
Chapter 630: Silence ago
Chapter 631: Threat Evaluation ago
Chapter 632: No Kill Like Overkill ago
Chapter 633: The Right Tool For The Right Job ago
Chapter 634: Conference ago
Chapter 635: Science? SCIENCE! ago
Chapter 636: Reunion ago
Chapter 637: Petra Carna ago
Chapter 638: Growth ago
Chapter 639: Refund ago
Chapter 640: Past Mistakes ago
Chapter 641: Heartbreaker ago
Chapter 642: Science Class ago
Chapter 643: Complex ago
Chapter 644: Meeting Time ago
Chapter 645: Skills To Pay The Bills ago
Chapter 646: The Essence Of Archery ago
Chapter 647: Primary Education ago
Chapter 648: Severing Creation ago
Chapter 649: Darkest Light ago
Chapter 650: The Greatest Craft ago
Chapter 651: Not Just A Moon ago
Chapter 652: Storage ago
Chapter 653: Getting Lost ago
Chapter 654: Planting The Seed ago
Chapter 655: Gate's Rise ago
Chapter 656: The Crystal Labyrinth ago
Chapter 657: Flying Cities ago
Chapter 658: Goddess Hart ago
Chapter 659: Descent ago
Chapter 660: The Fallen Ones ago
Chapter 661: I Want To Play A Game ago
Chapter 662: Ghosts Of The Past ago
Chapter 663: Curiouser And Curiouser ago
Chapter 664: First Encounter ago
Chapter 665: A Fickle Thing ago
Chapter 666: Hellscape ago
Chapter 667: The Anti-Climax ago
Chapter 668: Hidden Weakness ago
Chapter 669: Shy Kitten ago
Chapter 670: Sanctum ago
Chapter 671: The Traveling Planet ago
Chapter 672: Public Service Announcement ago
Chapter 673: New Residents ago
Chapter 674: Promotion ago
Chapter 675: Eyes On Meme ago
Chapter 676: Ashes To Ashes ago
Chapter 677: Rememberance ago
Chapter 678: Energy Crisis ago
Chapter 679: Shared Woe ago
Chapter 680: A Song Of Wonder ago
Chapter 681: Ghost Hunters ago
Chapter 682: The Second Verse ago
Chapter 683: Predictions ago
Chapter 684: Reunion ago
Chapter 685: Preparation To Battle ago
Chapter 686: Balance Breaker ago
Chapter 687: Navigation ago
Chapter 688: Realizations ago
Chapter 689: Godslayer ago
Chapter 690: New Hire ago
Chapter 691: Endurance Test ago
Chapter 692: Expectations Overturned ago
Chapter 693: Unconventional Power ago
Chapter 694: The Familiar Queen ago
Chapter 695: Expanded Vision ago
Chapter 696: Ascension Alternative ago
Chapter 697: Masters Of Fate ago
Chapter 698: Sense Of Achievement ago
Chapter 699: Passing The Torch ago
Chapter 700: Luck Be A Lady ago
Chapter 701: Lost And Found ago
Chapter 702: Danger Lurks ago
Chapter 703: The Adventure Begins ago
Chapter 704: Eating Contest ago
Chapter 705: Innovation ago
Chapter 706: Watching ago
Chapter 707: Confirmation ago
Chapter 708: Desperation ago
Chapter 709: Oldbeard ago
Chapter 710: Possession ago
Chapter 711: Eccentricities ago
Chapter 712: Generating Waves ago
Chapter 713: Great White ago
Chapter 714: Next Level ago
Chapter 715: Shocking Growth ago
Chapter 716: Council Decision ago
Chapter 717: Immortal Way ago
Chapter 718: A Journey's End ago
Chapter 719: The World Trembles ago
Chapter 720: Returning The Favor ago
Chapter 721: The Jaws Of Victory ago
Chapter 722: Promise Fulfilled ago
Chapter 723: Sorcerer ago
Chapter 724: The Traveler ago
Chapter 725: The Golden Road ago
Chapter 726: Poor Unfortunate Soul ago
Chapter 727: Balancing Forces ago
Chapter 728: Curioser And Curioser ago
Chapter 729: Trials And Errors ago
Chapter 730: Once More Unto The Brink ago
Chapter 731: The Hungry Depths ago
Chapter 732: Isolation ago
Chapter 733: Black Moon ago
Chapter 734: Evolutionary Pulse ago
Chapter 735: The Hunting Storm ago
Chapter 736: Welcome To My Playground ago
Chapter 737: Balance ago
Chapter 738: Memetic Hazard ago
Chapter 739: Welcome Back ago
Chapter 740: A Star Is Born ago
Chapter 741: Brilliance ago
Chapter 742: Holy Trinity ago
Chapter 743: Betrayal ago
Chapter 744: Enchantment? Enchantment! ago
Chapter 745: The Next Generation ago
Chapter 746: Knowledge Is Power ago
Chapter 747: New Possibilities ago
Chapter 748: Wisdom ago
Chapter 749: The Arrow Flies True ago
Chapter 750: Guiding Darkness ago
Chapter 751: Training Plan ago
Chapter 752: A Friend Indeed ago
Chapter 753: Oldbeard Youngblood ago
Chapter 754: The Saga Of Oldbeard ago
Chapter 755: Connections ago
Chapter 756: The Stuff Of Nightmares ago
Chapter 757: Returning To Normal ago
Chapter 758: The Blind Leading The Bold ago
Chapter 759: The Master Of Chaos ago
Chapter 760: Digitize ago
Chapter 761: Synchronized ago
Chapter 762: Sightseeing ago
Chapter 763: Mystic Gaze ago
Chapter 764: Status Update ago
Chapter 765: Let The Games Begin! ago
Chapter 766: The King Of Games ago
Chapter 767: We Chosen Few ago
Chapter 768: Ambition ago
Chapter 769: Memories ago
Chapter 770: Social Expectations ago
Chapter 771: Merry Making ago
Chapter 772: Divine Gold ago
Chapter 773: Golden Apple ago
Chapter 774: Guiding A Queen ago
Chapter 775: Make A Wish ago
Chapter 776: In The Forest Of Night ago
Chapter 777: A Whole New World ago
Chapter 778: Sponsored Activities ago
Chapter 779: First Contact ago
Chapter 780: History Lesson ago
Chapter 781: To Test A God ago
Chapter 782: Between A Rock And A Hard Place ago
Chapter 783: Friendly Advice ago
Chapter 784: The Sky Is Falling ago
Chapter 785: House Of Mirrors ago
Chapter 786: Returning ago
Chapter 787: Phone A Friend ago
Chapter 788: Contribution ago
Chapter 789: Forge the Divine ago
Chapter 790: A Proposal ago
Chapter 791: Divine Favor ago
Chapter 792: The Feels ago
Chapter 793: Paint The Town Red ago
Chapter 794: A Guard's Duty ago
Chapter 795: Old And New ago
Chapter 796: Unexpected Bonus ago
Chapter 797: Crystal Crisis ago
Chapter 798: The Meaning Of Power ago
Chapter 799: Training In Isolation ago
Chapter 800: Forest Sanctuary ago
Chapter 801: Prankster ago
Chapter 802: Ascending The Ranks ago
Chapter 803: User Access ago

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its less a story and more a brainstorm on paper

Reviewed at: Chapter 629: City Of Bayrun

i enjoy this story personally, but its not for the story, or the characters, or any of that, its just for the magic systems, which, unfortunently, never have a chance to shine because thay are discarded and forgoten about.

pros: lots of different magic systems and intreaging ideas.

intresting premise.


they introduce tons of potentially things, but discard them just as quick.

characters lack depth.

poor power scaling.


No conflict, and characters are thrown idiots balls to save the plot,.

Reviewed at: Chapter 316: Marik's Dungeon

On my initial read-through, I dropped this fic around chapter 30-40. The main character repeatedly made stupid decisions, and was walked all over by everyone around him, regardless of what he did.

However, boredom had me turn back to this, and he did get better--the harem oddly turned up the very beginning, but only included two people, and faded to black whenever something beyond cuddling happened.. Very understated, which was a plus for me, though I wonder why he included it at all.

The protagonist wised up at least a little, and the people around him stopped walking all over him. Plus, for a royal road story, the grammar and writing is above average.

So why the two stars, you might think? Well, as of chapter 316, there are a few reasons:

  • The main character still makes bizarre, enormous mistakes, which no one points out. He buys an ability that would let him split his mind, and have one portion sped up a thousand fold. This would let him train with the sped up portion until he's godlike without moving himself up the rankings in the "deadly" game he's in. He knows this, and just...stops halfway through, for no reason. He could probably finish it in a week from the progress he shows, and instead trains other abilities he could speed up with this one.
  • He rushes into the war games (you aren't forced in until your planets are a certain level of power) instead of training his personal abilities and skills. Again, for no reason. This would easily be solved with the games forcing him in after a certain amount of time. Instead, he looks suicidal and completely apathetic for his people.
  • No one has normal reactions or morals. He dies, learns EVERYONE he's ever known is now dead, and doesn't give a shit. Certain Keepers train their personal abilities, and reset the worlds to become "avengers" who target "monstrous" rank one keepers. How is a person who sends monsters to attack worlds worse than genociding worlds by resetting them? It makes no sense.
  • Worst of all, there's no conflict. The horrifying keeper games that are threatened show up all of once for real in the time I read (the rest are with friendly people), and it was a joke.
  • I don't see how the author can possibly scale the power levels or ever realisticially finish the series, from what we see of the higher levels of keepers.

TL;DR: For those who push through the first several chapters, trying to get to the games--don't bother.



Man... I was planning to enjoy this one, I was excited by the premise but... just why woukd you do it like this?

I realized this was going to be a painfully disappointing one the moment you skipped the blue screen depicting the other races stats and info, and I don't understand, why would you do that? That's like half the charm this story promises, what are we here if not for the world building? The not-real relationships between the gone-from-broing-to-hateful MC and his artificial pseudo harem? Well I'm certainly not.

Dale Mitchell started as your boring average person who becomes your average boring godlike world keeper, there's that, kinda fucked up the fact he likes to implant fake feelings in his subordinates but hey this might just not be my cup of tea. But then what's matter? So to put this way, I have trouble reading your characters because not only they feel fake and cheap, but because they are obstructing what really matters. Most of them. I mean I can deal with Dale and Catwoman weird relationship, but then you give me this group of characters and lets count what they've brought to the table.

The wacky relationship between MC and most females, the loli thingy, the catwoman GRINNING ALL FUCKING DAY, literally everytime she's got her turn to talk she's got some kind of grin for the occasion, Dale not understanding why is fucked up to manipulate others feelings ''wuh wuh why u so mad Bihema'' well fuck how could she not be mad, she knows what's up, actually the question is are we sure the other two are sentient? I can understand catgirl but the other two... are we sure they aren't still some kind of mindless dolls?

Now if you give me to choose between which I should read, read all that stuff or read about the origins of life, the dawn of civilizations, the conflict in the lives of these mortals, the technology advance of the humans in comparison with the elves, the continents, the seas, the cultures, I don't know. And that's why I dislike those characters, they're not that bad but they are an obstacle for what really matters. I mean, damn, I don't have anything against loli or some other anime references but to be clearer, you give me a detailed focus on who are the current leaders of all civilizations on one hand and a loli is justice monologue in the other then I'm not gonna give a fuck about lolis.

Then it comes to the other half of the charm of this fic, being god, or learning to be god and his interactions with the mortals, this is actually there but going slow and gotta deal with the other unwanted bs meanwhile, sadly. But then again there's close to 0 interaction with the mortals, again, what are we here for? The keeper games are still someway far, so I don't see how great is the admin room compared to the whole world that exists outside.


To put it simple, this could be amazing but its not.


Needs to play to its strengths better

Reviewed at: Chapter 294: To Turn the Tides

This isn't a challenging read by any means, you won't find yourself awed by the emotional depths of the characters, or on the edge of your seat with its stakes. Yet it is a fun read nonetheless.

The concept of an average joe ascending to godhood on accident, and learning to handle all that comes with it while leading his people to greater heights, is cool as shit! So it boggles my mind that the author devotes such a large amount of time to Dale's training.

The characters in this are all so 1 dimensional that it is physically painful at points, personally, I'm overjoyed that the author chose not to devote practically anytime to the goddess harem. As with their 1-dimensional personalities and the fact that Dale handcrafts their love for him. It would reek too much of LN power fantasy for my tastes

Nicholas Obviouslyfakelastnamebecauseprivacy

It's bad. There's no stakes because the MC is the most powerful creature in the world by far, the actual "invasion" part is used twice, once where the MC literally fucking nukes it from orbit and another time where an army goes off and is just never heard from. So it seems like it's trying to be a slice of life right? Well that needs characters, too bad all of them are clumsy one dimensional charicatures. All in all it's less of a story and more of a super powered wish fufillment.


I had a hard time reading through this novel but I kept reading just in case it got better. I could have understood if the author was just having a rough time finding direction. But this story was such a letdown. At the beginning of the novel, it already starts off without an engaging start. It starts from the perspective of the MC talking about his job. It doesn't really give him any backstory but the fact he's a middleaged truck driver. But his character doesn't reflect that. It reflects an excited teenage boy. The MC feels flat and unrealistic. Then here comes the first large event in the story. The MC hits a man in the middle of the street, a life-shaking event worthy of years of guilt and remorse. But the MC glosses over it like he just got some nice shoes muddy, or forgot to bring a gift to his best friend's birthday party. Then, to top all of this off the author decides to forego anything creative in the story and create a generic fantasy world with a game system and geometric mage system [Spell circles etc...] When he creates his helper he makes a catgirl who then within the first two chapters jumps and has sex with him for no apparent reason.

I was hoping for more and this story really had the ability to turn out to be fantastic. But the author isn't worthy of the topic and this story isn't worth your time.


Good story idea ruined by terribly simple, anime-ish characters

The story itself has a fairly interesting premise - MC becomes a "keeper"(i.e world creator). He gets to design its form, rules, power systems etc.


That, in itself could be really entertaining to read if not for one of two giant flaws this story seems to have :




We're presented with a powerful tool of creation, where he can basically make anything he imagines reality...But guess what?


The first thing he creates is a beautiful female companion (who coincidentally just so happens to fall in love at first sight, has zero personality etc...oh, and did i mention its a cat-girl?)


That's generic to say the least, but it would not matter if not for what he does next - the all-powerful tool of creation presents him some example power systems in addition to a custom one...and what does he do? He does not even take notice of the custom system and directly chooses the, once again, incredibly generic "magic system", without giving it as much as a thought.


He still has an option to customize it though....but he does not, he simply picks another option from a drop down menu. He proceeds to go for a generic game system, without giving it a single idea of his own (levels and classes, skills locked to class etc, like really?)


Then he creates races...or should i say makes elves blatantly overpowered. Like, really, humans have lower stat total, lower lifespan, no special racial abilities, lower everything basically.But alright, elves are meant to be powerful after all...but no, he proceeds to create several other generic races like beastmen, giving it no thought of his own.


What I'm trying to say is, the MC and all characters of this story suffer from complete and utter lack of imagination, are childish and generally dumb. Oh and the kitsune companion of our MC is so proud of him doing an absolute worthless mess of a creation she jumps onto him and they have sex.


...But that aside, other than the characters and their glaring flaws, everything else in the story is interesting, its just that, I simply don't want another otaku simpleton of a unimaginative and unrealistic excuse of a MC.


Pros : Good story and grammar, easily readable as everything flows together nicely, has potential to be unique with the way its going (10 chapters out as of review)

Cons : Anime dolls instead of characters


A suitably unhinged review of World Keeper

Reviewed at: Chapter 575: Evolution Achieved

World Keeper, on the microscopic sentence-to-sentence, paragraph-to-paragaph level is very well written — Maybe not at the start, but increasingly so with the experience the author gathers over the course of writing.

The style becomes better and better and I never noticed any typos.

However where everything falls apart for me is if you zoom out and look at it as a whole.

Undermining it's own conflict, unbearable levels of wish fulfilment and 'weeb'-elements, a both lore and thematically incoherent world, hastily introduced rules never so much as hinted at before so that the main character can resolve some issue that has propped up——

Many reviews have gone on and on about how the story hamstrings it's own conflict, how the characters don't think about anything, how it is more of a brainstorm on paper than a coherent whole.

In my opinion, they are all correct.

But let's go more into detail about that, shall we?


I'd roughly divide World Keeper into three distinct segments.

Firstly the origin of civilisation, then the expanding of civilisation and lastly the addition of civilisation.

Let's go through them in that order.


The origin phase contains the introduction of our main charcter's powers him getting familiar with and using them to create the world, its gods and its inhabitants who will stand with him against the threats he and his world will eventually face.

The problems this suffers from are numerous.

My first and main complaint being the hardcore wish fulfillment going on. This story digs deep into some of the worst anime and especially harem tropes. So if you're understandibly put-off with a main character stripping away the agency of his creations and forcing them to love him... This part will make your toenails curl up.

Oh and there's this passage:

"What? You thought I was only into big breasted figures like Terra and Irena? No, lolis have their own appeal. Rather than the sexual charm of an adult form like Terra, a loli has a cute appearance that makes you want to protect them. And the best are the adult lolis, those who just never grew into an adult body, even though they are fully grown. Those are definitely the best, if only because they are fun to tease."

Hahaha. Please face the wall. Immediately.

Admittedly, the author later grows aware that the entire thing is kinda fucked, but this is one of the things at the root of the entire story, so it can never truly be washed away.

My second complaint also pertains to the characters: The characters that are created by him are flat. They don't have any conflicts, attachments, or deeper character traits. These humanoid husks stick around and if you're like me and  never got invested in their dynamic in the first place, you'll not care in the future either.

What's also a major flaw is the fact that powers get introduced whenever convenient, hidden behind the thin veneer of "Can't tell you those exist, those are simply the rules."  In the end you can't actually guess how a situation is resolved, because he could also just get a new power that makes the entire conflict redundant. 

There are also many hooks that go nowhere and are left to dangle, forgotten. Not unusual for a webnovel, but especially prevalent here.

And lastly... The main character just does a bad job.

You cannot enjoy this story for the min-maxing.

The gods are kinda... They're playing favourites. An few examples:

Giving the races horribly unbalanced stat sheets.

Giving the beastfolk a hotline to the goddess of fate, while all other races literally haven't been in contact with the gods at all.

Refusing to intervene for any other races and going "Oh yeah, I can't interfere with this volcano eruption that will wipe out a dwarven tribe — Some things just have to happen."

Dude, your wish fulfillment girlfriend is literally talking to beastfolk, sending them on quests to gather their people, bestowing technologies upon them, appointing divinely anointed leaders.  What do you mean, you bellend? 

In summary:

The main character is playing favourites, not making smart decisions and is generally just... ineffective and unprincipled.

His job is being God, and he's doing a shit job.


The expanding phase is where I think the story simultaneously shines the most, but it's also the phase that sows the seeds for this work's eventual downfall. 

In this part the world is slowly expanding and he and the gods gently nudge it from behind the scenes.  Whether it be a mitigating war, catastrophes, or pushing along the age of discovery — These stories of the main character actually being there, on the ground, guiding his world along the path of development, they are all written extremely well. Genuinely. I love every single one of them.

There's also some lampshading on events that happened in the first stage, but they're packed up as conflict, which I'll take.

For example one of the goddesses tells the main character that she just can't trust him, but can't dislike him completely either because he literally created her to love him, violating her agency and just generally being fucking creepy. 

Or another newly created goddess being deeply traumatised and becoming a shut-in after they created her with memories of 4 gods being group of siblings, only for her to discover that two of them are still soulless husks.

What the hell did he think would happen?!

In the end tho... nothing comes of this either. After a few dozen chapters it's just... not forgotten, but done. You could have made this into a greater plot point, but this story never really aimed for that, so... Yeah.

There's also another issue I thought could have been executed better.

He sires a child with the mortal form of one of the gods, then proceeds to be completely absentee for... I don't now, roughly 80 years?

He gets a prayer from her which he answers, through which he discovered that she exists and decides to have a divine zoom call with her once a year. 

Somehow his daughter loves him absolutely and never questions him ever. And to top it all off, after her death she becomes his pseudo-familiar.


I am uncomfortable with this on multiple levels again. Though it's better than the mind-rape in the first segment.


Let's talk about the elephant in the room though: Keeper meetings.

In the first part we learn that Keepers are forcefully pitted against each other in battles for the sovereignty of their Worlds. It is presented like these are battles to the death — Until one side caves, their Keeper dies and the other emerges victorious and claims subjugates the losers worlds.

Not the main character though; he is a pacifist. So he will defend but he has no plans to actually attack... Sooooo the story needs to warp to accommodate that. Suddenly Keeper invasions are only one-sided. They occur on a regular schedule, leaving ample breathing room and all the Keepers are buddy-buddy with another; they communicate through text chat, visit each other's worlds, give each other information and in general have a solid social net that accommodate the main character's pacifism.

The first time one of these meetings occurs the main character and some of his gods also attend. And they play god damn war games. Of course they win everything against vastly more experienced enemies, because they're just so gosh-golly darn amazing.

But where does the story go from here? The main character can gather intel about his foes. Hell, through information brokers he can also learn whether the enemy even has any interest in attacking in the first place, or whether he will just send a crippled mouse. He can talk to the person that will attack him, even.

These cataclysmic events the story set up to occur suddenly and a genuine threat to the world and the main characters — they become knowable. The enemies become knowable and the main character knows what a prepare for, the timing is always the same and he doesn't have to attack himself either.

The tension of not knowing what to expect, and the implied forcing of them into a deadly duel, with one dying and the other emerging as the winner being the only outcomes. Gone. Obliterated. Torn to a thousand pieces, turned to ashes and scattered in the wind.

The Keepers themselves are also allies more likely than not. They're no longer a threat.

So where does the story go from here? The big threat didn't exist. In fact, it never existed. It was all in your head, this big conflict you were looking forward to. Hooooo, what a twist!

Well we transition into the third segment.


The addition of civilisation covers... just about everything else. I could probably make more distinctions here, but I don't really want to. 

This part is just absolutely dominated by issues. After the story has killed the conflict of keeper invasions and the world has also reached the point where all the races have met, and are in harmony with one another under his 'rule', where do we go?

Well, there is only one direction, really: Add more stuff.


Guess we need a new world!

Hey, how about a new magic system?

New races!

More new worlds! 

Even more new worlds!

Tower climing!

Star magic!

Fucking VR!


I couldn't even distinguish most of them if I tried.

And I frankly can't even be bothered.


Just like with conflict resolution in the first part, these additions don't have to be set up either because he can fast-forward time locally.

Another cup of narrative and tension poison that frankly deserves to be critiqued in length, but not by me.

How does the fast-forward work, with all his worlds connected by trade?

How can he skip 20 years for just one world?

Don't worry about it!

Absolute peak of this is reached when

The dwarven god, I shit you not, creates 3 galactic empires. In a single chapter.

I am in agony.


Let's introduce a body housing the representatives from each of the races!

Only two generations will ever be relevant!

While we're at it, let's introduce... 

A super strong kitsune-combat maid from the hidden ninja village.

I'm getting an aneurism.  She'll stay relevant.

For a loooong time.


There's just... Too much. It's quantity over quality. It tried to do everything, but in the end it just ends up cutting in its own flesh.

It's just mind-numbing. There's so much bullshit introduced. None of which I care about.

I absolutely loathe VR worlds. If I wanted to read sci-fi I'd fucking read sci-fi. And how do you merge this with the other worlds?

People go into the world via their fucking oculus. And that's a separate world? What? What do they trade?! NFTs?

The story has also almost entirely lost its grounding at this point. The only relevant people are gods, almost gods and the MC.

It continues like that... for many, many chapters.

Until I couldn't take it anymore.


To explain my feelings on this part, I have for you an analogy:

World Keeper feels like you're trapped in a room with a madman that just keeps opening cans. Not all of them are filled with worms, some actually have delicious food in them.

But as soon as the saliva gathers in your mouth, considering the possible taste of the canned delicacy he has already started ripping open the next can. And then the next. And the next.

In the end the room is filled with cans. None you had the time to touch since the can-opening mad-man just keeps opening more and more and more.

And over time, even the delicacies have begun to rot. A putrid stench or organic waste fills the room, it numbs you mind, bringing with it a moment of depressed clarity.

This will never end. There is nothing to look forward too. The story has spiralled out of control. You will never get to enjoy those few delicacies, for even if you get the time to eat them, the stench of rot that fills the room is almost choking you by now, overshadowing any temporary enjoyment you may get.

There is only one way to escape this fate. 

You stand up, go to the door and leave. Trying your best to at least preserve a few good memories, before they get overwrite by those of rot, decay and misery.


Bam. Review over.

Very negative, but I have just reached my limit.

Of my patience and my sanity.


I hate to say it, but Dale seems like a dipstick. I mean, who nods like a mindless idiot when they don't fully understand what is about to happen? Also! Why did the catgirl person not explain everything in detail? Imo It felt so rushed it was almost cruel to the MC. She said a very, and I cannot stress this word enough, BRIEF summary of the trouble he's in for. She jumped from one thing to another with only a few questionably helpful things here and there. Obviously this guy is not very sure of what he's doing considering he took absolutely NO time to think about the advantages and disadvantages of each possible starter package. By the way, Dale, instead of choosing the 'cool' package how about choosing the one that's less likely to get you killed because I would imagine that being priority number one! Plus, who the hell told her to speed anything up! Smh. Like don't do shit I haven't approved of. Especially when I need time to think out strategies on how to create, shape, and develop an entire planet to maximum defensive capabilities.!

This was just after chapter 1. But what you have here is potential Gold. Don't ruin it by simplifying the protagonist's situation and the situation of the developing planet. I mean, give us details about the creation of the planet itself! Not just 'POOF! OK ALL DONE!' No. Be better Author-man. Unfortunately I can't read this anymore because I tried to look at what happens later on (y'know a glimpse of what interesting things may convince me to stay) and I just think that you should start over from scratch and re-do the story with more realistic elements. Like remorse over killing a man or the struggles of coming to terms with being the creator of an entire world with people that will face invasion and whatnot.

All I'm saying is that you kinda butchered the beginning and glossed over the small but important details. Other than that it's A-1 material.


Why doesn't this have the harem tag?

To sum it up shortly, this story has a lot of great potential but Its completely ruined by the fact that the author likes anime a bit too much.

He spent most of his 'points' (currency used to buy new things to put in his wolrd) on making 'goddesses' and their personalities, which honestly wouldn't be a problem if they didn't only exist to satisfy the MC's Furry/loli fetish. 

I ended up dropping the story at chapter 19 because that's the point that he gets really serious about creating his harem... in a story that doesn't have the harem tag. 

Tl;dr - from my knowledge up to chapter 19, This is a good story if you're not bothered by lots of weeb stuff and harems.